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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...👏
yipeee...🥳...samar is back as moksh...
waiting for our karnika's entry...waiting to know her name...😊
really liked ur precap lines...
update soon...
luv u...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update dear😃...
and really sorry for not able to comment on last few updates😭...
i never miss a story regarding reincarnation😉...
in fact veer-shera were the reincarnated souls of prc-sanyo for me😳...
as prc ended for me the day RT MC left it...
have always searched my priyo in veera😳...
even my first ever attempt on vm making on RT MC was on reincarnation concept😳...
so samar and karnika died a very painful death...
but now they are back😃 with a bang...
and in this birth his name is moksh😊...such a lovely name😳...
now wanna know karnika's present name😛...
and i bet you are planning to give her a name that can create a beautiful name after blending with moksh...like you did with KaSam..a meaningful blending...😳
but i have a confusion nivi😕...if he's 21 wouldn't he has finished his college already??...at least in the education system of india one generally starts his/her graduation at 18...how could it be the first day in his college???😕...
waiting for the next update...😍
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: prahelika


but i have a confusion nivi😕...if he's 21 wouldn't he has finished his college already??...at least in the education system of india one generally starts his/her graduation at 18...how could it be the first day in his college???😕


may first day of new college...😆...
mujhe bhi yeh confusion thi...😕...
but maine kudh hi solve kar li...😎...

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Posted: 13 years ago
aaj ka ud bhi jaldi dedo...
ab aur wait nhi hota...
plz jaldi.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Keep the speakers on.

Chapter 11

Part1:

In the car:

Jai ' Hey dude! You were right! You got what you have wanted.

Veeru ' Yeah! I mean, you just a day before wished to buy this car and here we are travelling in it!

Moksh (with attitude) ' What I want, I get it someday...

Jai and Veeru ' No doubt!

They arrive to the college. Every student is gazing at the car and off course at them too.

Jai opens car's gate and Moksh steps out of it.

All look at him. He is wearing red shirt with black jeans. His boots are black and goggles too. He looks like a prince ' royal and handsome.

They move to college garden.

Veeru ' Hey Moksh! See all girls are looking at you hmmm...

Moksh ' But I don't have any interest in entertaining anyone!

Jai ' Ok... ok... leave it.

Now lows down his voice and says - So Moksh, do you think that we have to suffer ragging, huh?

Moksh ' We will suffer when someone recognises us as new one.

Veeru ' I am not getting it?

Moksh ' It's very simple... Let us rag others and let them think that we are seniors, what say?

Jai and Veeru nod and smile.

They start ragging others.

After sometime:

Moksh ' ok... this would be enough.

Jai ' Now what should we do?

Veeru ' Let's go to canteen!

Jai ' No!

Moksh ' Oh! I forgot my bag in the car. I will be back in few minutes...ok?

Jai and Veeru ' Ok!

As Moksh turns back hurriedly, he collides with a girl.

They fall down and her books fall down too.

The girl ' Oh! I am sorry...

Moksh looks at her and...

She is Mukti Verma. She is very beautiful and simple girl. And you are guessing right, she looks completely like Karnika. She is very shy and her shyness adds more beauty to her personality. She is a daughter of Mr. Hriday Verma, a famous industrialist.

Moksh is mesmerised by her beauty.

She stands up and picks her books while Moksh gradually stands up.

Mukti ' I am so sorry...

Moksh ' A... a... I... I...

He looks at her and is completely lost in her charm. She feels uncomfortable and...

Moksh without thinking, speaks in a poetic way '

"It's strange to meet a stranger like you;

Who I had never met before,

I am sure that I don't know you,

But my soul knows you, for sure!

I feel that years ago I had lived this moment,

And it feels good to live it again,

Without you, millions of tears, my eyes have

Shed,

Without you I was dead,

But now it seems like sky has cleared,

Shining sun has appeared,

And now I am totally taken aback,

Wondering that,

Why I feel like god has given my life back?

It's strange to meet a stranger like you,

Before whom my heart just beat but now it beats for you..."

Mukti (worried) ' Sorry?

Moksh ' err... I... I mean... I am sorry too. I didn't look before turning and...

Mukti ' It's ok...

She is about to leave when...

Moksh ' Hello... I am Moksh... Moksh Roy.

Mukti looks at him and leaves without replying.

Moksh looks puzzled.

Veeru (mischievously) ' Might be the first girl to leave without replying you, huh?

Moksh gives him angry look.

Jai ' She is really different from others...

Moksh (thinking) ' What had happened to me? Why I was lost in her beauty? She is a nice girl. (Then in a complaining manner) But she did not answer me! How one can leave without replying? (Calming himself down) She might be shy.

Mukti was walking fast and looking at the ground as all boys were gazing at her. She is so beautiful that anybody will fall for her.

Suddenly someone holds on to her hand... She holds her breath and somehow turns back and looks...

It's Pia and Dia, her best friends.

Mukti gets relief.

Dia ' What happened? Why were you walking like a deaf?

Mukti ' Sorry?

Pia ' We were calling you... but you didn't even look back.

Mukti - I am really sorry.

Pia and Dia ' It is ok princess...

Pia ' Why are you looking so worried?

Dia ' Is everything fine?

Mukti and her friends go to the canteen where she tells them everything.

Dia ' So what's wrong in that?

Pia ' Yes! He just asked your name. You should have not left without replying.

Mukti ' But I was so nervous. And you know, I have never talked to any stranger before.

Pia ' Ok... Now don't think about that. Well, who wants burger?

Dia ' Me!

Mukti ' I will prefer coke.

A deep voice ' I will prefer coke too!

All the girls look around and see a handsome guy, gelled hair, removing his black goggles and his childish eyes could make anyone smile. He is Ayan.

He is with his best friend.

The best friend ' And I want burgers and coke and French fries and...

Ayan ' No one has asked you...Tarkash!

Ayan's best friend is Tarkash. He is very innocent and loves to eat... anything!

They come closer to the girls' canteen table.

Pia ' Hey! We didn't ask you either!

Ayan ' I don't need invitation, right Mukti?

Mukti (smiling) ' Right.

Dia ' Ok... Tarkash! Come on go and bring it.

Tarkash ' Ok.

Tarkash takes leave and Ayan sits besides Mukti.

Ayan to Mukti ' So gorgeous, are you going to attend class?

Mukti ' certainly yes.

Pia to Dia (in loud voice) ' Let's leave the childhood and best buddies alone, huh?

Dia ' yeah.

Ayan gives a shy smile and Mukti looked down with a wrinkled forehead.

Dia and Pia are about to leave but Ayan interrupts...

Ayan ' You sit here and wait for Tarkash.

Dia ' And what about you people?

Ayan ' Don't worry about us. We are going to the college garden.

He holds Mukti's hand and they leave.

Precap - Moksh gets flashes of the past.

Hey friends,😊 do you like the name Mukti😃? I liked their new names after all their meaning is the same.😍

Edited by Nivi_princess - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
kya entry mari mukti 😃
ate hi moksh ka popat kr diya 🤣
yeah like da names MOKSH N MUKTI
awww fir se bhi poem... Pichle janam se abi tk aay h 😲 😛
achi memory power h 😛 jldi se apna pyar bhi yaad kr lo smjhe
bt ye mukti itna drti kyu h... Is dhawni k sath rkho fir ye bhi dhawni ki trh bold ban jayegi 🤗
acha idea h na 😎
i know acha idea h 😃
mere ideas ka or mera to jawab hi nhi 🤗 😎
Super cool h hm 😎
chlo aj k liye apni itni tarif kafi h 😆
ab ye arjun kha se tapka
kabab me haddi
agr isne kuch ulta fulta kiya na to chodenge nhi ise 😡
to hm ise.. Ise
ise
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Ise
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Ise
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Ise
metro k upr bandh kr ghumenge or fir ise chandi chok me dfna denge huh ...
Edited by princesspriyart - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
muahhh for this update😍
by god kya masttt update tha😃

awesome update😃
u r very gud in keeping names of characters...its really awesome moksh...mukti...ayan...tarkash...i like all these name dear


ek hug to banta h darling meri taraf se🤗
loved collegae scene...its very nice

aate hi moksh ka popat ho gya🤣
mukti ki filmy entry loved it

aaj kal bade acche acche update mil rhe h sabhi ff ke...meri khushi ka thikana h nhi n😳

cont soon👏
thanks for pm
luv u😛
Edited by tejjo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

that was a sweet n cute update..

got to see the glimpse of samar..

liked the name mukti...

seems ayan likes her i guess..

n moksh...loved his attitude..

precap is interesting..

thnx for the pm...


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Posted: 13 years ago
dat was a cUtE ud !!
likd her entry !!...totally filmy !!
ek doubt ...she looks completely like Tarini...as far as i rembr ...her name was Karnika ?????
Moksh said d same word he had said when he 1st met her b4 !!!
Mukti...is a niice name !!!
im still gonna call dem KaSam !!! im in luv wid it !!!
as usual s poem was beautiful !!!!
Ayan n Mukti ...only frnds???
intrstng precap !!!
Edited by sparksfly - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice updates!!
both died sad!!
but back with bang
loved the poetry u given

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