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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 10

Years passed away. Samar and Karnika are living in the memories of their friends and Samar's family. Their friends daily pray that "May their souls rest in peace..."

But people don't know, love stories are meant to end with a happy note and if they don't, they have not ended yet...

They say people die but true love never dies, it remains forever and it remains in the souls of the lovers inspiring them to fall for each other once again... even 22 years later their death!

It is late night...

At Roy Mansion:

A man, sitting on a red couch, is signing some official papers. He has worn black suit with black goggles. He looks strict but not arrogant, He is neither anyone's foe but nor he is anyone's friend... He is Mr. Mohan Roy. He is 27 years old and lives in Roy Mansion with his younger brother. His brother is dearest to him, he is his life. Their parents had died when they were tender aged. Mr. Roy had struggled to establish his own company, Roy Companies, which deals internationally...

Mohan to his employee – Take these papers, I have signed them.

The employee (with respect) – Thank you sir!

The employee leaves. His secretary, Mrs. Fernandes, comes and reminds him about his next meeting with Mr. Kapoor.

Mrs. Fernandes – Sir... your next meeting with Mr. Kapoor has been fixed tomorrow at...

Mohan – Cancel it.

Mrs. Fernandes (surprised) – But sir, it's very important meeting and...

Mohan immediately stands and shouts – I said cancel it!

The secretary nods and leaves.

Mohan is about to go to his room when Brij kaka (Brij uncle), his oldest and eldest servant, stops him.

Brij Kaka – Mohan beta (my child)...

Mohan stops and looks at Brij kaka.

Mohan – yes kaka?

Brij Kaka – I have prepared dinner. Come and eat something. I know you have not eaten anything till now due to your work. You never care about yourself...

Mohan to Brij kaka – Kaka... okay... I will have dinner. And I don't have to worry about myself as you are there to care for me and my brother too...

They smile.

At the dining table:

Mohan to kaka – By the way, has he slept?

Kaka – yes. Your brother is not like you. He doesn't like to go to sleep late night.

Mohan – okay... now I will sleep at time.

Kaka – Err... you have cancelled your meeting because tomorrow is his birthday, right?

Mohan – You are always right... I want to be the first one to wish him.

Kaka – May god bless you both!

Next day:

Mohan has entered his brother's room silently.

His brother is sleeping. Brij kaka manages to keep his favourite chocolate cake on the table quietly.

They are going to wake him up and wish him.

They come closer to him and Mohan shakes him.

Mohan (with a cute smile) – Happy birthday my little bro...

His brother wakes up and Brij kaka plays a song in the music system:

"Happy Birthday to you,

Happy Birthday to you,

May the good god bless you dear,

Happy birthday to you! "

Mohan and Kaka wish him again.

His brother gives a cute smile. He is Moksh Roy, 21 year old. He is very handsome and is so pampered by Mohan that he gets everything what he demands for. And he looks completely like Samar! He is healthy but not fat, pampered and tough lad!

Moksh – Thanks bro and kaka.

Kaka – May god shower his blessings on you forever.

Mohan – So now get ready. Today is your first day in your college.

Moksh – Hey! Where is my birthday present?

Mohan (smiling) – First get ready.

Mohan and kaka leave.

At dining table:

All are having lunch.

Moksh – Wow! All my favourite stuffs!

Mohan – yeah.

Moksh while eating – Bro, today I may get late.

Mohan – Why?

Moksh – because...

A voice – Because he is giving me birthday treat.

All look at the guy along with another one.

They are Jai and Varadraj (Veeru) Singhania.

They both are good at basketball and other sports but not as good as Moksh. In short, Moksh is their team leader.

Jai and Veeru – Good morning, Mohan bhaiya (brother)!

Mohan – Morning.

Moksh to Mohan – Ok bro, I am leaving.

Mohan – Okay... Let me come with you outside...

Moksh, Jai and Veeru look puzzled.

They come outside and Moksh is surprised. There, outside the gate, stands a car, red and "Moksh "has been carved on it.

Moksh – Is it...

Mohan – It's your birthday gift.

Moksh hugs Mohan.

Mohan (almost choking) – okay... now go otherwise you will be late.

He gives him its key. Moksh and his friends sit and depart for their college.

Mohan smiles and goes in the mansion.

Precap - Jab vo mile toh ek nazar me mohabbat ho gayi,

Jaise Puri har adhuri mannat ho gayi,

Mile the voh pehli baar par na thi unki voh pehli mulakaat,

Jab voh mile toh Dharti bhi Jannat ho gayi...😍

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update dear loved it
so our samar is back with bang
awesome,lovely

u r great writer
now waiting for karnikas entry

update soon
thanx 4 pm
luv u
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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome ud dear...

now d story is getting very interesting...
MOKSH lovely name...
waiting for karnikas entry...
ud soon..
Riyaa16 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
nivi dear is baar long update chahiye h pls pls
becoz i enjoy ur story or wo bhot jaldi khatm ho jata h

updat soon
long update
luv u
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Posted: 13 years ago
woow... dats was niice !!!
Mokash ...nice name !!
like his bro 2 !!!
waithng 4 karnika's entry !!!
wats her name ????
i'l still call dem KaSam only !!!! i REALLY like dat !!
next ud thoda long dena plzz
luvd d poem a d end !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
nivi tussi to cha gye ji
love dis part
vaisi kya samar k dost bhi milenge moksh ko? Milenge to maza aayega
vo bhi chock jayenge awww samar ???
Well ya plz i like ur story too much so plz ud thoda lamba kro na
Amor. thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
ahhh haannn vo wapis aa gya

jaldi likho vo kab aayegi
sweetsanyo thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
jappi paalo
puppy paalo...
kinna shona ud tha...
bhot accha laga mujhe...

though it started with a senti note...
22 yrs voh ek dorsare se alag the.physical thoor par...
i mean unke jaan n soul tho ek hai nah!...uska naam h KASAM.

the description u gave for mohan n moksh...ws awesome.

the name u chose for rt-moksh, is mindblowing...
red color car on b'day gift...ooo...

certainly he is so much pampered...
lved it reading.
chaa gaye tussi nivi jii...

khushi di n tumne mujhe bhi apni tarah reincarnation ka fan bana liya...

bhot jald ek fan club kholenge...

jiske confirm members h-
khushi di.
nivi.
priya.
n main khud...

others r also invited...shreya, mayuri di, riya di, u r also invited.

wa8ing for reincarnated version of karnika...even uska naam bhi janana h.???
Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
yeah rashu hme to sbse phle add krna
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Posted: 13 years ago

so samar is back as moksh...

seems its gonna be more interesting for now onwards..

loved the precap lines alot...

cont. soon..

thnx for the pm...

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