3-shot: Betwixt & Between (Gutter OS)

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: farheen75
loved it...i hope after this episode khushi can sleep in the room...very sweet os.

that is exactly what i had in my mind dear .. just spicing it up a bit .. :)

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: ipkkndfan_29
Oh Wow...I just loved this entire OS👏👏...and this update was a fantastic end 👍🏼

thank you so much dear for liking it ... it is my first one and was not really sure how it was going :)

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Bhavapriya

@Bunny_Bear

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Ooh. The cockroach searching by arnav was sensual hon. Wow it was a fab update. Thanks for the pm.

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kaira101

@kaira101

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

wow truly beautiful, loved how arnav was teasing her about the "cockroach"

so cute, hmmm controlling seems to be out of control 😛

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BSRaizada

@BSRaizada

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Sooo goood. Thanks to cockroach

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ASRism

@ASRism

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

wow..nice ending..I thoroughly enjoyed it

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devishree

@devishree

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

arnie boy too naughty to handle

it is well written comprising of both their emotions

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Thank you so much everyone .. i tried to write from Arnav's POV mostly .. and tried to keep it as realistic as possible ..

eventually Arnav has difficulty keeping his hands off Khushi always .. Khushi is the one who usually backs down 😛

I am happy that you guys liked it 😊