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Posted: 11 years ago

🤣 Rofling right now...just read part 1..I think khushi is not faulted ...every girl at every age has phobia of cockroaches...But the way she reacted😆..uff her action just cracked me up...and seeing khushi in just blouse and inner skirt..arnav ki toh niyat hi badal gae..😳..

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.ButterCup.

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Posted: 11 years ago

😳ommmggg!! Its getting more exciting and hilarious after every part..I know I am being too insensitive here..Here khushi is become helpless in front of the nasty insect..but the way you write ..Its undoubtedly hilarious..and arnav how sweet..🤣..this is gutter os and i've a gutter mind..where arshi in this situation..can't help it..

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.ButterCup.

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

☺️ Last part was blush worthy..His explorations for seeking the naughty insect...made me blush so hard..Fab TS..

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lara3110

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Posted: 11 years ago

Excellent concept. Love your style of writing. Enjoyed it thoroughly.

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ipkndlover75

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Posted: 11 years ago

Completely hilarious... Guttery and sensual...!!!!

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Deepa

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Posted: 11 years ago

till part 3
last part
awesome...
Khushi was so scared...
and Arnav took advantage for his romance...

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