Arshi FF: Broken Love Last Part - Page 19

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Posted: 13 years ago
wah yaar awesome loved it ...
i just want to knw morning scene huh wht will happen when maya will see her Mom & Dad sleeping together 😛 and when arnav will see khushi sleeping near him 😃 plss make it long and thnks for the PM waiting for Part 8
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey people 😛

I am in a good mood today so I wanted to continue on broken love so this is part 8 and I am happy with the people liking this FF and I just wanted to say thank you and also there is a twist coming up. People that this is the first time reading this then if you want pm's then do buddy me it would make my life much easier thank you people.

Zaynah 😳 Part 8 😳

The sun shined through the windows of Maya bedroom, wind blowing in the as the window was open. Making Maya turn and pull her cover on top of her head

Maya: Daddy pass me the cover it cold pulling the cover with all her strength papa she got up and rubbed her eyes and looked to a right as Arnav was feeling on her right she got amazed of what she saw she turned her head back in embarrassment and got of her bed and run go of the room

Arnav and Khushi still not awake Khushi resting her head on his chest while holding his hand tightly Arnav looking relaxed and with a cute smile on his face looking like he is in a peaceful sleep. The wind blow more on to Khushi face making her wake up

Khushi: Khushi yawns and pulls back and her hand still in Arnav so she got pulled back towards Arnav realizing that the whole night she was like this she again tried to pull her hand away but all went to waste so she decide the only way to get out of this she had to face it and wake up Arnav

Khushi: Arnav Arnav wake up and let go off of my hand

Arnav: huummm

Khushi: Arnav let go

Arnav: opened his eye and turned his head to Khushi. Khushi? Khushi! Realizing that he is holding her hand letting go off it and sat up. Sorry I didn't realize what I was doing sorry embarrassed but didn't care he holed his Khushi hand

Khushi: took hold of her hand as it was sweating in Arnav hand for a long time

Arnav: you know that when I am sleeping I don't know what I am doing.

Khushi: it ok I shouldn't have came

Arnav: smiling wait why did you come here

Khushi: no don't worry I didn't come for you I came to see Maya looking for Maya

Arnav where is Maya

Arnav turned his head finding Maya what the where is she

Khushi: Khushi smiled. He said what the she thought Arnav how can you not know Maya is not next to you

Arnav: Khushi don't blame this on me you where her to

Khushi: hari DM now where is this museebat

Arnav: Khushi?

Khushi: well she is your daughter she is going to be like you. It like you both plan just to annoy me one museebat and the other raakshas laad governor

Arnav: Khushi stop fighting with me and let go and look for Maya Arnav got off the bed and they both went looking for Maya

Arnav: Maya!

Khushi: Maya!! Where are you

Arnav: Khushi look there pointing at Maya

Khushi: Maya Khushi run over to Maya

Maya: mummy you woke up smiling away

Khushi: where did you go?

Maya: I just went to get my doll

Khushi: next time tell me

Maya: but mommy you and papa where sleeping peacefully so I didn't want to disturb you

Khushi: looked at Arnav Maya go and get ready you are going to get late for school move it

Maya: but do I have to

Khushi: yes

Maya: but I I don't feel well cough cough

Khushi: oh you actor go move

Arnav: Maya don't you want to be a clever and smart person like me when you grow up

Khushi: no you are going to me like me

Arnav: no me

Khushi: Arnav me

Maya: I don't want to be like both of you I want to be like bua. Wait where is bua

Khushi: she probably in her room come you are going to get late

Maya: fine but can papa drop me

Khushi: no I will

Maya: oh please mum papa tell her

Arnav: what wrong if I drop her

Khushi: lots

Arnav: Khushi I want to drop my daughter to school

Khushi: so do I

Anjail: what is this shouting all about?

Maya: bua look mum won't let papa drop me

Khushi: but Maya

Anjail: Khushi why don't you both go to drop her

Maya: yes that a good idea

Khushi and Arnav looked at each other and both said childishly FINE!

Maya: come mum where getting late

Maya took Khushi up and Arnav followed

Maya: mummy get my clothing

Maya wore a black shirt with tights with a white school logo shirt and a school jumper

Khushi: bura nazar nahi laghi

Maya: mum you always say that

Khushi: so I don't want anything to happen to my beautiful daughter

Maya: well thank you but today please don't kiss me and hug me in front of my friends

Khushi: why?

Maya: you embarrass me

Khushi: sad face well I don't care

Maya: mum

Khushi: how old are you

Maya: 7

Khushi: then act like it don't act big

Maya: mother

Khushi: haan meri raani

Maya: ok ok sorry meri ma where getting late

Khushi: ok let me change my sari

10 minutes later

Khushi came out wearing a plain blue coloured sari with a red bolder.

with just some red and blue small earrings and some bangles. And a blue bindi

Khushi: Maya come let go

Maya: ok but let me see if papa ready

Khushi: ok go run

Maya: ok

Knock knock

Arnav: yes

Maya: papa you ready

Arnav: yes come in

Maya opened the door and walked in and stood next to her father

Arnav was wearing his normally clothing his black tie and blue top and his suit

Maya: come on

Arnav: come on picking her up

Maya: come on

Arnav took Maya down stairs where Khushi was wanting. Arnav saw Khushi and was memorised she so beautiful (RABBA VE MOMENT) her hair flying everywhere because of the wind and she is tucking her hair behind her ears

Khushi: Maya come

Maya: papa come on

Arnav: what oh come on?

Maya Arnav and Khushi when and sat in the car Khushi at the front and Maya at the back and Arnav in the driving seat of course

Arnav: so Khushi where the school

Maya started to laugh papa you don't even know where my school is

Arnav had his sad face I am not a good dad I don't even know anything about my own daughter

Khushi notice this Arnav it well I don't know I forgot oh I thing I will call Viren

Khushi fake phones Viren

Khushi: hello Viren where is Maya's school. Oh yeah there thank you so much I forgot. She cut the call. It on corewood road (my schools road loool) how can I forget smiling at Arnav

Maya: mum you to oh my DM

Arnav: she doesn't even know how to lie thinking to himself

Arnav rushed to Maya school

Arnav: here we are taking of his seat belt

Maya getting out of the car and so is Khushi

Khushi: oh Maya be good ok kissing her on her cheek

Maya: mum wiping the kiss

Khushi: oh shut up hugging her

Maya: bye papa hugging him

Arnav: bye baby

Maya walk toward the gate of the school waving her hand bye bye

Khushi and Arnav waving their hand

The both went back into the car

Arnav driving: shukirya

Khushi: looked at Arnav for what

Arnav: for pretending to forget Maya school address

Khushi: how did you know?

Arnav: I know you to well you can't even lie properly

Khushi: I can

Arnav: see your lying again

Khushi looked at his he knows me so well then how can he misunderstood me. Amm Arnav yesterday when I went to see Maya you were saying that you want to tell me something what it is

Arnav: what me I can't remember

Khushi: ok

Arnav: Khushi I can't tell you right now thinking

Arnav drops Khushi home and goes to the office

Khushi: walks in the house

Anjail: your back

Khushi: yep

Anjail: Khushi I was going to call home do you want to speak to them

Khushi: ok

Anjail: phoning raizada house number

Nani: hello

Anjail: Namaste Nani

Nani: Namaste bitiwa

Anjail: how are you guys

Nani: where all fine how you are

Anjail: yes Nani I am fine Nani

Nani: haan Anjail

Anjail: Nani woh woh Khushi

Nani: Khushi?

Anjail: Khushi is here

Nani: kya where is she let me talk to her

Anjail: ok Khushi here

Khushi: Namaste Nani

Nani: Khushi how are you

Khushi: I am fine you and how is everyone

Nani: fine Khushi. Payal come here

Payal: ji Nani

Nani: Khushi Khushi is on the phone

Payal: kya?

Nani: here

Payal: Khushi

Khushi: Jiji Khushi is crying now

Payal: Khushi where did you go

Khushi: Jiji I I Jiji how is suraj

Payal: how do you know about suraj?

Khushi: Jiji Arnav told me

Payal: Arnav is there

Khushi: yes Jiji

Payal: ok Khushi talk to ma

Mami: Khushi bitiwa how are you

Khushi: I am fine ma

Mami: I miss you come back

Khushi: ma I miss you to

Nani: give the phone to me. Khushi look just come home

Khushi: Nani well I. Anjail di here Khushi run upstairs

Anjail: Nani

Nani: Anjail where is Khushi

Anjail: she runs up stairs

Nani: oh Anjail how is she does you look the same my eyes are crying for her please bring her back

Anjail: Nani I will don't worry and I will also bring Maya

Nani: Maya?

Anjail: yes Nani I am a bua

Nani: what really but how come she didn't tell us I am a great grandmother

Payal: kya Khushi?]

Nani: nodded Anjail how does she look like

Anjail: just like chotey Nani

Nani: really

Payal: Nani give me the phone

Payal: di Khushi is a mother but why didn't she tell us and can I talk to Khushi

Anjail: payal I did ask but she said she didn't want to tell us but you know what happen she didn't want to come back and she hasn't forgive chotey yet

Payal: ok let me talk to Khushi

Anjail: ok let me give the phone

Anjail goes to Khushi

Anjail: Khushi payal want to talk to you

Khushi: wiping her tears ok di hello Jiji

Payal: Khushi what is this

Khushi: Jiji what happen

Payal: Maya

Khushi: Jiji well

Payal: what Khushi you didn't even tell me I am a mami

Khushi: haan di

Payal: how does she look like Khushi?

Khushi: Jiji she looks like Arnav

Payal: Khushi are you ok

Khushi: yes Jiji

Payal: send me a picture please

Khushi: ok I will ok bye bye Jiji I need to sent Viren and Arnav their lunch

Payal: Viren who

Khushi: well Jiji is a long story she is like my brother always been there for me Jiji he is a nice person

Payal: ok Khushi send me the picture and I will show everyone ok

Khushi hanged up and picked her phone and what's app it to payal phone

Maya and Khushi were in the picture Khushi was wearing pink and Maya blue

Payal: Nani look Khushi sent me a picture of Maya

Nani: let me see let me see move

Payal: showed the picture she cute right just like Khushi

Nani: yes she has Arnav eyes and Khushi noses

Mami: let me check. No she looks like me

Nani: no she looks like me

They continued to fight like this

Khushi: di I am going to the office

Anjail: wait I want to go to the mandir could you take me

Khushi: yes di

Khushi took Anjail to the mandir

Khushi: di I will drop the food and come to pick you up ok

Anjail: ok Khushi

Khushi left and when to the office

Sarah: hello Khushi

Khushi: hello Sarah

Sarah: did you see that new guy Arnav

Khushi: yes what about him

Sarah: he is so hot

Khushi: jealously excuse me what are you saying

Sarah: his eyes and wow his body

Khushi: Sarah stop it how dare you

Sarah: Khushi what happen

Khushi: Sarah what did he say to you

Sarah: nothing just looks at him she is so cute and his voice is just to die for Khushi could you make Viren introduce me to him

Khushi: NO

Sarah: Khushi what happen to you

Khushi: Sarah he is married

Sarah: so it not like I am going to marry him

Khushi: Sarah he is my husband

Sarah: what Khushi sorry I didn't know

Khushi: it ok where is he

Sarah: in the office with Viren

Khushi: ok

Khushi walks to the office

Opens the door

Khushi: Arnav

Arnav: Khushi you here

Khushi: what are you doing are you mad how many time do I need to tell you to not... realize what she is saying

Arnav: what happen Khushi?

Khushi: nothing here I brought you food

Arnav: thanks

Khushi: where is Viren?

Arnav: he is in the meeting room

Khushi: ok thank you (I just saw barun shirtless my heart is beating to fast)

Khushi went to the meeting room to find it empty

Khushi: laad governor

Khushi!

Khushi: turned around her eye widen you?

Lavanya😡😡: Khushi

Khushi: don't say my name

Lavanya: please listen to me

Khushi: I don't want to even look at you let alone talk to you

Lavanya: Khushi please just hear me out touching her arm

Khushi: get your dirty hands off me

Lavanya: Khushi you don't mean that Khushi please listen to me

Khushi: don't you ever think that by talking to me will make me melt because it won't. I am shame of even being to in the same room

Khushi is walking toward the door

Lavanya: Khushi please (she is crying now)

Khushi: don't you think these fake tear will fool me I was a fool before but now I don't trust people like you.

Viren: Khushi what are you saying

Khushi: Viren

Viren: why are you specking to lavanya like this

Lavanya: Viren you know her

Viren: yes la she is Maya mother

Lavanya: WHAT

Viren: what happen Khushi why are you so angry for. Wait do you know guys know each other

Khushi: no I don't know her

Lavanya: Khushi?

Viren: la why are you crying wiping her tears

Khushi: Viren? Omg does Viren and lavanya like each other

Viren: Khushi what you doing here

Khushi: well Viren I came to give you your lunch

Viren: oh ok

Viren get a phone call and pick it up and leaves the room

Lavanya: Khushi Maya is your daughter that means ASR is a father I am so happy

Khushi: stop it stop it right now

Lavanya: Khushi please just give me one minute please just I need to tell you something please

Arnav: lavanya?!

Both Khushi and lavanya look back to Arnav 😲

Precap:

Khushi = Upset 😭

Lavanya = worried 🤢

Arnav= hurt 😒

Viren and Khushi chat

What will happen next's

If you want me to continue then comment and like please if I don't get a enough comments and like then I won't be continuing and I got my second part done and all I need to do is upload it but if I don't get 5 pages of comment then I won't be continuing then so you guys know what to do look it take time to write a ff and when people don't comment then I won't know if you guy like and then won't know if to continue or not so do a sister a fav a comment and share the love

PS: I wrote this on word and it came out to be 7 pages and 2,675 words wow right so I hope that long enough people were asking for long updates and I think this is long

Peace 😊

Zaynah 😳

Love You 2 XX

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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for the long update ! That is about the size of my essay ! hehe. Well I want to see the confrontation next chapter, and I also really liked the way the chapter started ;) don't get me started on Barun's hotness... I think I just melted... sigh*
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Posted: 13 years ago
cmon khushi listen to La.. nothing happened tht night...
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👏👏greta job...brilliant...amaizng...thanks...👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi zainah🤗
awesome update...arhi and maya scene r too cute...now looking forward to next part...continue soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
I want to believe that ASR and La never slept together. I think he pretended to hurt Khushi. Loved the update... please continue soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG OMG OMG wow that was awesome please PM me as soon ad you update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
mind blowing update
loving the story please cont. soon
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