The Memories of a Butterfly-ch 12 PG142 Updated!

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asdfgh456

@asdfgh456

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Posted: 13 years ago

#291

I've been busy with uni for a few days so haven't been logging in and come back to find 2 updates! Woop, thank you 😛 And they're both great updates aswell,
I love Khushi's relationship with the rest of the Raizadas it's so sweet, and when Khushi's asking Arnav to about going with her to her house made me grin from ear to ear it was so cute!
And I like Hrishi and Lavanya's relationship/characters. But I was confused about one point, was Khushi's dad against their relationship aswell?!
P.s. Thanks for the pm x

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Harshitha Shankar

@-_-harsh42

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Posted: 13 years ago

#292

gargee... I just loved ur lavanya-hrishi love story... That's so high on morals, u knw??!! lol... :D
And as I had said in my prev comment, shyam-anjali pair is very sweet!! :)
Thanks for the pm, sweetiepie and am i so glad that you're gonna update twice more... :D :D

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Jalebi Jane

@JalebiJane

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Posted: 13 years ago

#293

You have a real flair for dialogue. I can picture the characters speaking when I read your work.

Well done.

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udaymanyata07

@udaymanyata07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#294

👏👏thanks...great job...bri;llaint...👏👏

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Simran

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Posted: 13 years ago

#295

That was awesome...awwwhn poor Arnav...can't seem to get his wife out of his mind ...heheheheh...that was beautifully written Gargee ( I wonder if I can call u that? )...thanks for the pm:D

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nareshSV

@nareshSV

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Posted: 13 years ago

#296

oh wat a story and the couplss you r playing in this r simply amazing anjali shyam lavNya hrishi and thi arnav he is really such a mean character thinking how she hugged his brother...?Pccchhh...pata nahi khushi kab isko badal denge...