The Memories of a Butterfly-ch 12 PG142 Updated!

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#281

loved the update arnav can't seem to help him self around her akash is such a nice bil la is khushi sil that so cute i can't believe i am saying this but i like your shayman thanks for the pm loved the update

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music1

@music1

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#282

Gal I love all the three couples...u have layed the foundation beautifully now waiting for the story to kick off😊😊

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#283

Woawwwooohhh!!!!! I love this story so unique...loved it!!!!

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Onlooker

@Onlooker

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#284

Loved ur update; esp a long one. I always welcome long updates. .thank u for the pm...

So arnav is a bit jealous and becoming possessive...like it.. Shyam has good intentions in mind for a change...good..i hate evilness in any form. And lavanya has come back as khushi's bhabhi...she a maid...hmmm couldn't imagine her like that...I just could catch that something was amiss relating to arnav's mother..waiting for it to unfold..Hope pug phera brings arnav and khushi more close...

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coolgal49

@coolgal49

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#285

I love reading your FF.

I was about to hit the sack when I thought "maybe there is another update today" and I was not disappointed!! :))))))))))))

Thanks very much and please update soon! :)

Coolgal49

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purplekid

@purplekid

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#286

This was wonderful, and I know this is completely off topic, but is your profile pic you? Cause the woman is damn pretty! Loved the update regardless...

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challo

@ekdoteenchar

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#287

Just read the entire fic at one go and it is absolutely BEAUTIFUL!!

I love the way you write, the way you have portrayed the characters. Am loving the way Akash is =) Also Shyams character.

And this twist, her brother & lavanya.. Absolutely marvelous & a truly UNIQUE story you have here. Please do continue in the same way, pace & keeping this track 😛 I want Arnav & Khushi to understand each other and have some tender moments rather than a quick "Oh I am in love"..

Update really quickly, a looong one or manyyy short ones. I will be waiting eagerly 😆

//Gina