The Memories of a Butterfly-ch 12 PG142 Updated!

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Kiran

@SweetStar

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#311

Loving the story!

Please continue and pm me when u update! (:

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@fanAR

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#312

I am sorry for not commenting since after spirng break i have gotten so much work and uni keep me busy so did not get time to give u proper comment yaar anyways i have alreayd read the update more then twice , loved your writting . you done fab job First of all Thank you so much for dediaction on that update , you truly made my day🤗 love it yaar :)) i bookmarkd the page ⭐️ it will alwys be specail lol so coming to the review ...

aww i really like how Khushi and Akash have bounded ... dewar babhi 😳 super cute and how he made her happy and feel comfortable , really nice gestrue yaar . plus point he flirts with her .. haha that will be nice seeing Arnav getting jealose from his won bro 😉

mamai is just mamii ... her tactics and lango oh well anyways it's nice to see that Akash knows and making khsuhi feel nice was sweet ...

i kind of find it interseting how Khush knows alot about Raizaida from her sisters mails . looks like both sisters were quite close , i am waiting to see how Dia come back and what was the reason behind.

between anji and khushi scene was really good , i smiply loved , now i wish Arnav makes her wear the kangan. i like the relationship between them which is sweet . there bounding is like wil be sisters

somthing fishy aout the past .. i want that soon :P

Arnav is feeling guitly , i like the way you showed everyone's feeling. he goes home and have made up excuess to but too bad.

i like this kushi a lot who replies to him on his tune and knows what should be done .. i love it

you know what i love love love about the update is how she is creative with drawing and can show her feeling through this, really nice way dear

the end was kind of made me confuse but all well and hayye" titli "

all in one FAB and such amazing update :))

keep up the good work

i shall be back later when i get time to comment on the latest update

oye update karoo soon 😳

onece agian thanks alot for love dear

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velangini

@velangini

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#313

wow wonderful update👏

loved shyam and anjali convo

shyam is a understanding hubby,very refreshing

akash is such an adorable cutie😳

so lavanya is a maid in their home,interesting,but she is very sweet

arnavji pehle compliment dena seekh lijiyega,uske baad jalna😉

thanks for pm🤗

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Arnav_Khushifan

@Arnav_Khushifan

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#314

So interesting. Do an update soon . I luv the fact that Shyam I s good in his story. Thanks.

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GoGreen

@GoGreen

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#315

Knock Knock...show some mercy on us ...doing update plueez...

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Gargee

@Gargee

Navigator

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#316

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Electric_BuBBle

@Electric_BuBBle

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#317

Excellent update <3

It was written awesomely!

Thanks for the PM and continue soon :D

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challo

@ekdoteenchar

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#318

That was... intense !!!!
I like how Arnav has a feeling of remorse and guilt.
Am really liking Khushis character, how shes not afraid of
standing up for herself and has an attitude when needed.
You should continue with the same pace in terms of the
development of the characters, you have a really nice
flow in your story.

Hehehehe the longer the review, the longer the next update will be?
Hmm, how about I write a 20 page long commentary? 😆 Would you
then write a 20 page long update?

Hmm, since I have 2 lab reports & 2 tests to study for at the moment, Ill save you, this time. But be ready to write a really looonggg update in the future as Gina jee will not spare you😆

On a lighter note, It was a really good, intense & interesting update, thank you dear!!!

Edited by theflyingdonkey - 13 years ago