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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

edited ma comment on previous page. :0

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samantha1987200

@samantha1987200

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Really enjoyed reading the update, it was awesome... plz do continue soon and pm me :)) Love... Tc :))

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Bhavya

@YashiSingh3

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

lovely!!!!

and please update as soon as possible...😊

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piuli

@prahelika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

lovely start di😊...plz update soon...

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Mayuri Dev

@mddmayuri

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

superb ud...luved it ...veer n prithvi r twins...fantastic idea..

ud soon

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Ria

@chand1234

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

awesomeee updt..!! pls updt soon...am waitingg...

thnx fr the pm :)

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517072

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Loved how u described da reason for enimicity between da kingdoms..👏 continue soon!

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Shraddhamurat

@Shraddhamurat

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Wooow the storyline is so goood...
U described each n every character well...
2 Rajat n Mugdha so DOUBLE DHAMAL karega ye ff...
Prolouge is simply awsum

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samantha1987200

@samantha1987200

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Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Yay I'm first👏👏👏👏

Loved it, it was damn amazing😊😊😊😊... Can't wait for Ananya urf Shera to grow up!!!!😊😊😊😊

Plz ud soon😊

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Radhika Sharma

@ridzzi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#70

di maine pad toh raat main hi liya tha but edit subah k bajaye sham ko kar rahi hu...lazy girl...

nice prologue di...

poor ananpal dhokhe ka shikaar ho gaya...and amrapali misunderstood him and now she wants to take revenge...and sudershana was really understandable...

so shera and sanyo are sister's and shera is younger than sanyo...wow...

waiting to see how all the four royals are going to meet with each other...and how love will blossom b/w them...

and what will happen when the truth will get revealed...

di ek choti si request hai...plz para's ke beech main thoda sa gap diya karo...so it will become a little easy to understand that from where the next para starts...otherwise sara ka sara mess up ho jaata hai...if it is convient to you...

continue soon...

luv u...😊

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