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@samantha1987200

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Lovely Ud :) Continue Soon :)

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Radhika Sharma

@ridzzi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Wowieee...superb background...
God this jaipal (chandravanshi) is really out of his mind...poor prince n princess...what a terrible death...
Waiting to see how love (prithvi-sanyo,veer-shera) is going to find it's way...in the world of complete hate n cruelity...
Continue soon...
Luv u...:-)

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

I really liked it, plz continue soon

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

o ma god,

its sooperbo thrilling

so juz fab...

yes.

evn i agree, lack of unity made us slaves for year...

but di, bg of dis stry is juz mindblowing...

the lovers were killed...oh no!.

suryavanshi r faithful in love, ...

atleast dey r not cruel, bt dis chundrvanshi is pathetic...how delirious...

plz cont soon...

Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago

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Mayuri Dev

@mddmayuri

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

very interesting bg...waiting for d first part...

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Rumjhum Laha

@Patrarekha

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

i have a request please don't take me wrong friends but it takes time and energy to write an update...so if you like without commenting then it would be like as i am forcing my ff on you...
friends your comments re my inspiration for me..from ur comments i can think of improving me..so please instead of giving one word comment to give critical comments..so that i can understand what was fault of my writing..an i can improve it

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Priya Sharma

@Priyart12

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

kalyug
ghor kalyug
rajat mugdha ki ff
or uni ki lovly si fan ko no pm 😲 🥺
bt hmne dekh li
di apne dusri wali ff ka bhi pm nhi diya not fair
well jst lv dis story
plz do cnt. soon

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Rumjhum Laha

@Patrarekha

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

oops sorry sorry actually i sent pms to people who are on other id...so is id k buddies reh gaye...sry sry gussa mat kar dear..age se dhyan rakhungi...ab apni pyarisi cmnt de do😃