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anumeha khanna

@anumeha_rajat

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#81

wooowww...

im just loving the flow of the story..

its really amazing,...

loved it..

cont. soon..

thnx for the pm...

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Shreya

@sparksfly

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#82

wow !!

luvd d prologues !!

brilliantly writen !!! uve put a LOT of thought into d story !!

both sistrs r SO diffrnt !!

SO much h8trd surrounds d jodis...

but vo epic luv story hi kaise jisme lpyaar ke lyie fight na karna pade !!

im getin a strng felng dat dis is goin 2 b amazng !!!

plzz do PM me when u write !!

luv ur wrtng style !!!

do continue soon ...

t c..

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Radhika Sharma

@ridzzi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: aru_86

thanks re age se dhyan rakhungi...btw shera sanyo se choti hai ye kahanse mili??😲

oh sorry my mistake,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,shera is not younger,,,,,,,,,,sanyo is younger than shera...

see you have written in last para that after few months of marriage sudarshana too got pregnant and then she n ananpal went to durga temple and amrapali too was their with her 6 MONTHS old daughter...so that was clear na that sanyo was younger than shera...aur waise bhi shera ka janam sanyo se pehle hua tha so that was clear na that who is younger n who is elder...😊

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Moner_Radio

@Moner_Radio

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#84

@ aru :

commenting on the 16th may update, looks like a new FF from you, did you continue it 😕?? will find out soon !!😉

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Moner_Radio

@Moner_Radio

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#85

@ aru :

commenting on the 2nd june update, so you have continued the story , starting with the history of the arch rivalry between the two clans. good. will comment on the remaining parts soon enough.😊

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Moner_Radio

@Moner_Radio

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#86

@ aru :

commenting on the 4th june update, the prologue cum build-up to the future plot of the two stories of two twin brothers seperated at birth has been good enough, considering that such acts were quite common and more easily accomplised in those days. will comment on the next part soon.😊

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Moner_Radio

@Moner_Radio

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#87

@ aru :

commenting on the 10th june update, ohh, the prologue WAS rushed no doubt, but i guess it was needed to be so to come to the main part of the story ..at one point you made me feel as if i'm watching a really really fast movie, well done !!👏