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Tyro

@Tyro

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#71

nice part...

now we have both the prince n both the princess...

continue soon...

thnx for PM..

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#72

yeh h humra res,
abhiye edit kare dete h, padh tho le

~~EDITED~~
god di god..
kya kammaal ho tussi, ek dum dhamaal ho tussi
stries kahan se aati h aapko,
rooz sapne bhi tho nhi aate kai lago ko,
but aapke plots hamesha sooper mindblowing hote h,
sachii, kya bg h..

amarpali and sudhershana, dono acchi thi, pehle,

but amarpali want to revenge chrandravanshi...
hmmm...
dono bahenno main pehle se hi divider bann gya h
o no...

dey dinn, meet, coz dis is not d rite time...hmm...isspr ek thought tho banta h...

rite time tab aayega jab sanyo kisi musibat main hogi n shera usse bacheyegi...juz ek thought h, simply a though, trying to connect,dats it...isse interferance mat samjhana...

humari shera ko thoda sa iss banjaze wali jindagi se thoda dur rakhna plz,
i want her to be sooper cool as a boy, archery, sport, swords main sbmain no. 1
tabhi tho veer latoo honge...

prithvi tho humari sanyo ki sadhagi ko dekhte hi dewane jayenge..

aur phirr shuru hongi...PREM KAHANIYAAN...

itni saari complications ladi h di aapne inn lovers, brothers n sisters k bichh...
ki if dey will love each other still, which they surely will do,...all i noe is-

THEY WILL SET LOVE ON FIRE...

only unconditional love cn defeat all dese hurdles n obstruction...

we hav a damn interesting stry ahead..
bas ab app ud dena mat chodana...
plz.

ud soon, thnx for dis wondo stry

lov u di

Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago

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Rumjhum Laha

@Patrarekha

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#73

rashu dear comment dene mein tera bhi koi jawab nhi...and awesome idea dear main dhyan rakhungi..bas aise hi mujhe inspire karti rehna

thanks samantha jyoti and rashi for commenting

ridz take ur time

Edited by aru_86 - 13 years ago

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sweetnandu

@sweetnandu

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

awesome history..

loved the way .. u described the prologue..😊

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Rumjhum Laha

@Patrarekha

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: ridzzi
di maine pad toh raat main hi liya tha but edit subah k bajaye sham ko kar rahi hu...lazy girl...
nice prologue di...
poor ananpal dhokhe ka shikaar ho gaya...and amrapali misunderstood him and now she wants to take revenge...and sudershana was really understandable...
so shera and sanyo are sister's and shera is younger than sanyo...wow...
waiting to see how all the four royals are going to meet with each other...and how love will blossom b/w them...
and what will happen when the truth will get revealed...
di ek choti si request hai...plz para's ke beech main thoda sa gap diya karo...so it will become a little easy to understand that from where the next para starts...otherwise sara ka sara mess up ho jaata hai...if it is convient to you...
continue soon...
luv u...😊

thanks re age se dhyan rakhungi...btw shera sanyo se choti hai ye kahanse mili??😲

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shruja

@shruja

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#76

thanks for update n pm
sorry for late comment
background is very well discribed
its true we lost all coz we r not unite!
poor lovers! chandavanshi's r really cruel!!