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Dhanvi

@Freethinker

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#51

very nice dear...but could you please put some spaces in between...it becomes easier to read...the update was fantastic...

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Tyro

@Tyro

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

loved the background...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

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saiba

@saiba007

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

really superb ff i love it alot. before i was a silent reader but not any more i wwell read and comment kk. justtt amasinggg update soon.

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

rona aa rha h...

mujhe pehle kyun nhipm kiya aapne??

maine tho aru n fairy dono ids pr hoon apke.

abhi k liye res.

wil edit by tomorow

dont like ma res

~~EDITED~~

kamaal ho di aap, ek dum kammal ho, main aapki tareef ke pul bandh sakti hoo,

i mean aapne mujhe itna jyada ifluence kr diya h iss stry se,

and bakiyoon se bhi,

kya cheez ka dimaag h aapka,

kya theory nikali h

such a strng cemented base, by god, aap director kyun nhi bann jate, sahi kah rhi hoo, show ko dhansoo trp milegi...

i mean, i just lovd it like hell,

consipiracy pr conspiracy, battle pr battle,

itna ache se samjhaya h aapne ki itne bade and long complicated prologue/history main koi bhi confusion nhi h, not i bit too...

aap mahhaan ho,

hum aapke fan bann gye aaj,

('.')

>----( )-----<

! \. itne bade...

veer n prithvi finally born, lioness saved veer,

sahi main kya briliant kismat h bande ki,

ab sanyo and annaya ki baari hentry ki,

ud sooper soon.

Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago

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sweetnandu

@sweetnandu

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

wow.. fantastic update..👏

do cont soon..

liked the intro of veer and prithvi,,:)

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geetap

@geetap

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

oo so both veer and prithvi are born now waiting for the birth of shera and sanyo...a very very nice part, plz continue soon and thanks for the pm

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Rumjhum Laha

@Patrarekha

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo
rona aa rha h...
mujhe pehle kyun nhipm kiya aapne??

maine tho aru n fairy dono ids pr hoon apke.

abhi k liye res.
wil edit by tomorow

dont like ma res

but i pmed u as soon as u updated.. take ur time dear

rashi, geetap, sweetnandu thanks for commenting

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ruchi

@--Ruchi--

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Fantastic part.Loved it.

Thanx for PM

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Radhika Sharma

@ridzzi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#59

wow amazing...👏

the way you described the conflicts b/w the two kingdoms...really amazing...

so prithvi and veer are brothers...and now veer is with aryavardhan...

so we have seen our prince and now waiting for the entry of our princess...

continue soon...

luv u...😊

Edited by ridzzi - 13 years ago

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aamirkhanfan

@aamirkhanfan

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#60

u have laid the back ground story so beautifully

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