OS: Just you wait Mr Raizada, just you wait!

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charlotte74

@charlotte74

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Glad to know that this OS is getting comments even after a year 😊

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bewakoofLadki

@bewakoofLadki

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Love it...

Is ther a third part too?? D second part ending looks like incomplete...

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

New reader alert Kavi...

i have been hearing wonderful things about your story for so long from most of my friends.

That finally i have decided to check it out for myself.

I know you just concluded your last story, but i am given to understand shree, Sandhya, Vandana and Disha are all pestering you to start another story soon enough so here i am in the hope that i shall catch up with your index by the time you start your new story.

Loved these 2 OS that you wrote...and i am very very curious to read how you unfold this story.

So i am off to read Himalayan magic, see you there in a bit.

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Ayra Nuzhat

@-LazyLamhe-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Hey! New reader to your work! A friend Seher suggested your work and I got here!

Loved this OS and I must say Great writing!

I am off to read the continuation to these stories now!

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Rims

@Arorarim

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Just read both the parts..awesome

Is there a next part.?

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

That was beautiful..

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arshisimple

@arshisimple

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Awesome ...I want to apologize to you because in my early days of IF, I read this story but never commented. At that time, I didn't realize the importance of comments and now I do, so while reading this story again I thought better late than never..so it was a Fab start 😊 ..Thanks.

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Crazy4IPK

@Crazy4IPK

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

I was laughing through out to see mr. Hot raizada's wayward thought and action. Though he hates her, but khushi's presence is making him lose his control. I loved how you expressed his inner feelings. Khushi also was enjoying his sweet torture. Thanks to his family who compelled them to be intimate. Special thanks to Mami and Shyam.