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charlotte74

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: redsky
Very nicely written. I liked the subtle hints between the two. It's a great combo. It might actually happen like this, Let's hope. But please keep writing. Would love to read more from you !

Thanks! Arnav and Khushi are a delight to write about. Since their characters have already been developed very well I try my best not to change them. The aspect that can change however, is the situation. So that is what I have been trying to do here :-)

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Gunjan Mukherjee

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Posted: 13 years ago

Really amazing update!!! Update nxt part soon!! N add me to ur pm list :)

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Honkytonk

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Posted: 13 years ago

Wow, just read both chapter sand loved it...hope you will continue and PM as well.

Many thanks

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veds275

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Posted: 13 years ago

This part was wonderful!!
Loved it to the core!

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nancy_ipkknd

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Posted: 13 years ago

very well written!
Loved reading it...

Nancy

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starstuff

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Posted: 13 years ago

i keep coming back to this... please let us know if you decide to write more :)

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

Very interesting...and quite well written. :)

Update soon and do PM me.

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saba

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Posted: 13 years ago

LOVE IT AMAZING CONTINUE PLZ AND PM ME NEXT PART IF U CAN

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Maddy1270

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Posted: 13 years ago

very well-written... their thoughts in italics are what I simply loved!

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LAKSHMI

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Posted: 13 years ago

awseome ..loved it...do pm me..

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