ok guys im back with the next part ... i first wanna cut it into two parts... par ye part poora padne se hi acha lagega shayad so im posting the full part and it will be sooo long/... so mujhe lamba lamba comments chahiye...plzz guys conjusi mat karna...iss part ki ek ek word das baar soch ke likhi hun...plzz bada wala cmnts...🤗
kk...den here comes th update...
guys i think it may be filmy but go with me...😉
part-2
inside the room...
ammu: kriya tum phir se ro rahi ho...are yaar bata toh sahi ki kya baat hai,???
Kriya: are kuch nai ammu kuch nai...
ammu: bas kriya ab aur jhoot mat bolo...plzz yaar mujhe batao na kya baat hai...
kriya: plzz ammu im sorry par mai tumhe kuch nai bata sakti...(she hugs ammu tight and ) thanks ammu hamesha mere saath dene ki...( and breaks the hug) par ammu plzz mujhe kuch der keliye akela chodo plzz...
ammu: (helplessly ) hmm...kk...par apna khyaal rakhna...
she went out...she was very tensed abt kriya and thus she informed smriti...annd then called rey...(ye mat soch na ki rey ki phone bajega and kriya dekhegi...and dey hug ...and so on...meri ff mai sab mere jaise hai zindagi mai koi kabhi bhi phone general mode mai nahi rakhta...only vibra mode😛)
rey didnt lift den she called vicky...but vicky messaged...ammu ham sab ek saath hai...aur hum ghar aaajayenge...tum ghar jao...
4r which she replied...are par kaha ho sab...4r which she got no reply and thus gave up as rey knows her adress very well...
room:::::
think dat all arre standing at d door and a little far they had a opened window so dey can hear her very well...( jst assume)
all are very happy to see kriya and the most happier is rey...he saw his baat cutter...after totally 1 yr...
kriya cried and cried...as every tear rolled down her cheek...a drop rolled down reys cheek and the rest also srtd crying...
K; (she suddenly fell on her knees and took her bag into her hand and )
REY... and once again she bursted into tears...
( she took the gift given by rey on pre valentines day...and rey was shcked to see dat she preserved it ) rey kaise ho aap...khush hona...plzz rey ye batado ki aap mujhe bhul ke bohut aage badh chuke hai,... plzz rey aage badh jao...sorry rey maine aap ki dil thoda haina...par sorry mujhe ye karna pada...aap keliye ...mai aap ko dukhi nai dekh sakti rey...isiliye mai ne ye sab kuch kiya ...kyun ki...kyun ki mai aap se bohut pyaar karti hun rey... I LOVE U REY...( a wide smile spreed on reys face...) haan rey i love u ...kash ye baat mai aapko bata pati...par kya karun rey mai chahti hun ki aap mujhe bhool ke hamesha hamesha keliye bhool ke zindagi mei aage badhe...sorry rey...sorry... and cried her heart loud...all the girls are crying like hell but dey didnt make a pinch of sound ...
rey was constantly looking at kriya...
den suddenly kriya touched her cheeks to know dat there are no tears ...yes no more tears are left in her eyes...and she srtd laughing which ended into a cry...and she looked upwards...and
K: kyun universe ji...kyun ki aapne mere saath aisa...pehle papa ko mujhse door kardiya...aur uske baad mere frnds...swayam ,neha ,vishaka,bharat,amar,...aur sharon vicky nil, simmi, rinny,,,,,,,,,,,,,sabko...meri dosti ko mujhse door kardi...( all girls now strtd crying hard but still silent and their respective boys strtd consoling them even if they had tears...)
aur mere dance meri sapna...use door kardiya...aur dil...rey...mere zindagi ko mujhse cheen li...and slightly laughed ...aur ab rone keliye aasu bhi nai choda aapne...hahaha...harane chaht ho na aap mujhe...hamesha keliye...toh lijiye maine khud apni haar maanli...and she cried burying her head into her knees...and folding her hands around the knees...( normal and my fav cryind position.)and by dis tym she was shivering coz of extreme crying...still holding the gift in her hand very tight...
rey was not able to see her lyk dat anymore...so he strd to go to her but he heard the door open and saw smriti and thus stepped back...
she walked 4rward and placed her hand on kriya's head...she placed her hand as if most of her hand part touched rey's gift and a little on kriya's hair...but kriya in fraction of tym pulled the gift towards herself tightening her grip on dat and closed her eyes tightly...as if some is pulling a chocolate 4rm a small child...and kriya. shivered a lot...smriti...stood there 4r sm tym...and as soon as kriya pulled the gift and strtd shivering rey kept his left hand on the glass door as if he was caressing her cheek...and tears continuosly flowed 4rm his eyes...this one move of kriya was enough 4r him to tell how much she loved him dat she was feared dat she will loose the one and only thing of rey which she had...he was expression less...sharon could not see her best frnd in dat condition so she raised her hand to his shoulders when swayam stoped her in her actions and
Sw: nai sharon...no/...and he whispered to the whole grp...guys koi kuch nai karega aur nahi kuch kahega mujhe pata hai ki rey ki kya haal hua hai ...par use jo karna hai karne do guys...let him let his heart out...let him cry...use jo kar na hai use karnedenge kk...
all nodded through deir tears...and looked out...
but rey didnt heard or notice anything coz his full concentration was on kriya...he can even tell when she breathed in and out...he was listening each and every word of hers very carefully...looking at her as if he can never get to see her again...
smriti: beta...( slowly)
kriya lifted her head and straightened herself...smriti bend on her knees and
Sm: beta mujhe pata hai tum kya feel kar rahi ho abhi ...par beta mai manti hun mujhse galti hui...use sudharne ki ek mouka do...maine already tumhe tumhe apne dil dosti aur dance ko apnane ka ijazat dedi...toh chalo beta. mumbai wapas chalte hai...chahe toh mai tumhari frnds ko bataungi...aur ...aur rey se mai khud baatkarungi aur kahoongi ki tumne mere promise ki wajah se aisa kiya...chalo beta...
K; nai mom mai wapas nai jaasakti... dosti...mere doston ki trust thodi hai maa maine...unhe face nai karsakti...aur dance...mera dance toh rey ke bina adhoori hai maa...rey...nai...nai ma ...mai...mai ...mumbai wapas nai jaasakti...rey ki aankhon me mereliye nafrat nai dekh sakti...nai mom nai...
all this tym rey was quite and expressionless as tears rolled down his cheeks...
sharon could not hold anymore she bit her lips controlling her voice and caught swayams collars very tightly and rested her head on his chest as he tightly held her through his tears...neha was not able to take it anymore and she was about cry loud when vicky closed her mouth and said
V: no kagu...no...and they hugged tight ...all the girls hugged their respective boys and was seeing kriya...
Sm: toh bhul jao na beta rey ko...
all girls by now got very angry...and now sharon was no more able to control and was abt to shout when...
K: ( seriously) kya aap papa ko bhul gayi maa???
smriti was taken aback on kriya's dis qsn...and all the girls gave a look lyk sahi kaha kriya tumn...
sm: wo ...
K: plzz mom ab ye mat kehna ki aap yaad nahi karti kyunki meine aap ko kayi baar papa ko yaad kar ke rote hue dekha hai maine...( now kriya was really serious)
sm: (she got irritated ) haan ...yaad karti hun...mai unhe bhool nai sakti kyun ki wo mere pati hai...mere jeevan saathi...
K: ( calmly...tears rolling down her cheeks) haan maa wahi toh ...jis din meine rey ko apni dil ki baat kahi ki wo mere ache dost se kuch jyaada hai usi din maine unhe apni jeevan saati maanliya maa...
after hearing this a wide smile spread on reys face and tears rolled freely,...
SM: (concerned) beta isiliye kehrahi hun wapas jate hai mumbai...
K: nai mom mai nai jaa sakti utni himmat nai hai mujhme...
(silence/...2 mins...)
K: mom mei kai jaana chahti hoon kya aap jane doge...???
sm: kaha beta??
K: wahan jahan mujse koi dosti na kare ...aur mei kisise...waha jahan koi dance nai karta aur mei nai karpaun...aur waha jahan koi mujhse pyaar na kare...aur mei rey ko yaad na kar paaun...(crying loud) ... all are confused...aur maa mujhe aaj hi pata chala ki aisi ek jagah hai...
sm: kahan...?????????
K: MAUTH...!!!!!!!!!!!! all are dumb struck...
rey on hearing dis jerked his hand away 4rm the glass door and was standing there lyk a dead body with out any movement...
sm:KRIYA!!!!!!!!! ye kaise paagal baate kar rahi ho...chalo tum abhi ghar chalo aur hum aaj shaam ko mumbai jaa rahe hai...aur tab tak tum har pal mere saath hi rahogi...( she hugged kriya)
K: mom...mom...meri baat suno ...ab iski koi jaroorat nai hai kyun ki maine already sleeping tablets leli...
( for ur kind info she had taken those pill while ammu knocked the door...aur i thnk effect keliye itna tym toh lagega...)
all got a big jhatka as if they had a minor heart attack...no tear dropped 4r any one's eyes...and rey after hearing dis collapsed on his knees but still looking at her...
smriti didnt tell anyword...now kriya was getting dizzy... so she crept into her mom's lap...
K: mom mujhe pata hai aap mujhse bohut pyaar karti ho...aur mai bhi karti hun...par mein iss duniya mei sab se jyaada pyaar rey ko karti hun ma...(she was not able to speak properly...)
m...maa...maine bohut koshish ki,,,,,,,,pa...par nai horaha hai maa...har pal .ja...ja...jab mere dil thooth tha hai...toh...toh bohut ...bohut dard hora hai maa...
(all...all include smriti also... r crying lyk hell rey wanted to shout her name at top of his voice...but it was very dificult...it seemed as if only his eyes and heart are alive...he tried hard but cannot utter a word...seemed as if he stopped breathing...)
K: bohut dard horaha hai maa...mujhse aur saha nai jaata...isliye maine...she took a deep breath which brought back rey into consious ness as he too breathed in heavily... and he quickly stood anr ran towards her shouting her name ...went on his knees took her in his lap and strtd tapping her cheeks...
K: rey...aap yaha...
R; haan kriya maine sab sun liya...aur maine kabi tumse nafrat hi nai ki...mai apni jaan se nafrat kaise karpata...
( i think no need to tell dat the gang followed him and the girls strtd crying at the top of their voices...and vicky and swayam called ambulance and went to control deir respective girls)
K: guys...tum sab... mai ab ...ab bohut khush hun rey ...kam se kam marne se pehle aap sabko dekhliya...
R: nahi...nahi kroya tumhe kuch...
K: rey...rey...plzz...ab aur kuch nai ho sakta...bas mei jaate jaate apna dil dosti aur dance ko saath leke jaana chahti hun...kya aap mujhse dance karoge...
R: kriya...kriya...
K: rey plzz...mere saath dance nai karoge...
rey hugged her tight and stood up ...and danced ...(watch dis video 4rm 3:18 to 3:30...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zWJJdKibjLU )
and again hugged her tight as if no power in the world could take her away 4rm him...and then he felt her take a deep breath,,,,,,and he shouted...
R: AMBULANCE KO CALL KARO!!!!!!!!!!!!
SW; haan rey aati hi hogi( before he cud cmplte his words all heard the ambulance)
rey took kriya in his arms and ran as fast as he can...all followed...he hopped into the ambulance when vicky and sharon followed him/...but rey didnt wait 4r rest he shouted at the driver,...
R: CHALO...GO!!!!!!!!!!!!!
and the ambulance strtd...and the rest followed them in car...when nil drove as fast as he cud and swayam and neha consoling smriti...
reached hospital...as the ambulnce slowed down rey jumped out along with kriya in his arms rushed into hospital shouting 4r doctor...all reached and rey placed kriya on strtcher and took her to icu...the doctor asked rey to stay but he shouted...
R: nai...mai kriya ko chod ke nai jaaonga...
sw: rey kriya ki haath chodo warna der hojayegi aur kriya...
rey in a jerk left kriya's hand and jerked back...doctor quickly gave swayam an asuuring look and went inside along with kriya...smriti sat there and strtd blaming herself on seeing rey who banged him self on the door of icu placing his hand on the mirror and looking at kriya...he just looked lyk a dead person...and later one of the doctor came and told...
D1: sorry hume jo karna tha humne karli par wo shaya 10 ya 15 mins mai...
rey rushed into the room without hearing doctors full words and the rest followed him...he hugged kriya tightly...and all kept on crying...suddenly... kriya took a long deep breath...
D2: are iski condition thoda theek hua...he turned to sharon and said beta jaldi se iski mooh mai hawa blow karo...and as we all know sharon gets tensed and shocked but before she culd respond rey kept his mouth into kriya's and blowed air...it looked as if all the air he filled in his lungs he blowed into kriya's mouth not even keeping a bit 4r himself...as he does this 4r 5 to 6 tyms...kriya..again took a long deep sudden breath and strtd breathing normally...
D1: wow!!!!!!!!! she is breathing normally,...!!!!!!! aap sab ghabrayiye mat ab wo bhikhul theek hojayegi...
rey sat beside her and hugged her sidewards...as her head was leaned on to his chest...
all are crying with joy!!!!!!!!tears rolled down reys eyes without any break...
D2: kk dekhiye ab sab log jayiye she needs rest...and looked at rey
rey quickly tightened his grip on kriya and looked at his frnds and smriti and looked down,...
D1: doctor chodiyena mujhe lagta hai ki agar ye patient ke saath hi rahega toh acha hai aur waise bhi...isike wajah se patient theek hai na...
D2; laughed and said...haan kk ...and the doctors left ...
all sat down at a corner looking at KRIYAANSH with a big smile on their faces as they both slept in each others arms...
hope u all lyk it...
❤️deetha❤️
Edited by deetha - 13 years ago
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