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Deetha.

@Deetha.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

hey guys!!!!!!!!!! i know i'm also writting another ff but now i want to strt new one... i know i update very slowly but,... bear me...!!😉

story revolves around rey and kriya...after 1 yr of break up!!!!!!!!

not 1 week of break up as in d3😆

so can i strt?????????????

kk chalo waise tum log na bhi karoge to bhi mein likhungi...😉

i hope u like the title

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❤️ - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2812712/u-cant-hate-me-and-i-know-it-baatcutteruptdpg128

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❤️ - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2812712/u-cant-hate-me-and-i-know-it-baatcutteruptdpg128

link to 2nd thread...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/channel-v-dil-dosti-dance/2923648/baatcutter-thread-2-check-index

❤️deetha❤️

Edited by deetha - 13 years ago

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Pia

@-Pia-

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

nice concept.pm me when u update it.i am there in ur buddy list already.

Edited by unnipgc - 13 years ago

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

Amazing concept...update soon n do pm me plz...

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sujana

@sujana9

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

gud one pm me wen u update

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Deetha.

@Deetha.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

chalo ab strt karleti hun...

part-1

it had been an one complete yr after kriya and reys break up...no no...actually after they went far 4rm each other,...

day of their break up...(14th feb...)

the whole gang is sitting in the canteen ... all are very hurt by d action of kriya...

(on a special note ...all are official couples...no new girl or new character...sorry to swaron fans... i will only focus on kriyaansh...but swaron & viha plays a very beautiful role close to my heart... grt and gud n best frnds to have...)

nil : arre sab aagaye ye rey kaha mar gaya...

sw: haan sharon rey kahan hai??

sh: swayam uski baat matkarna mere saaamne... are aaj kal wo kaisa hai... jab se usne hum donon ko milvaya uske baad se wo hamesha low reh raha hai...ek month se wo mujhe kuch alag hi dikh raha hai... jab maine usse poocha ki clg mujhe pick karne keliye usne mujhe kaha hai ki woh aaj nahi aana chahta... jab maine poocha kyun toh maharaj batanai rahe hai...swayam mujhe uski bohut fikar ho rahi hai... pata nai kyun...

SW: mujhe pata hai...

sh: kya????????? kya pata tumhe...??

sw: sharon sorry mujhe tum sab ko pehle hi batana chahiye tha...par usne mujhe mana kiya...isiliye...

sh: kya baat hai swayam plzz ab toh batado...

sw: rey kriya ki wajah se aisa hai...

all: par kyu??

sw: kyunki rey kriya ko pyaar karta hai...

all: kya😲?????

sw: haan mai itna jaantha hun ki wo kriya se bohut pyaar karta hai... aur vicky nil yaad hai us din prevalatine day per rey basket ball court mai...

nicky: ro raha tha..

sw: haa usse pehle wo kriya se milne gaya kyun ki wo pehle do dinon se usse ignore kar rahi thi...mujhe toh lagta hai. kriya ne rey ko hurt kiya...maine rey ko bohut baar poocha ki us din kya hua par wo kehne se mana kar raha tha...

neha: kuch toh happened ghadbad dat day den ...

sh: yep... im sure..

sw: haan i think kriya ne rey ko hurt ki...shayad wo rey ko kabhi pyaar hi nahi ki thi...

ye tumse kisne kaha ??? maine ya usne????

( now entered our hero)

all: rey tum??

rey : haan mai... maine socha ki tum sab ko bura lag raha hoga isiliye aaya par tum log kriya ke baare mai aise baat ...

sw: nai rey hum toh bus...

rey: swayam tum aise kriya ke baare mei baat karoge ye maine socha bhi nai tha... wo tumhe apna best frnd maanthi hai par...

sw: bas rey agar wo sach mei mujhe apna best frnd manti hai toh mujhe toh batake jaati... hmm... chodo mai ye sab kisse keh raha hun...usse jo sirf naam keliye mujhe apna best frnd kehta hai??

rey: swayam ye tu kya kehraha hai tu sach mein...

sh: wahi toh hum jaana chahte hai rey agar tum hum sab ko apna bst frnds maante ho toh batawo kya hua us din??

rey: wo...wo...

neha: kyun re u not thinking hum as ur frnds??( baby face)

rey: are nahi neha aisa maine kab kaha tum sab hi toh ho jo mere sabse kareeb aur bst frnds...

vicky : toh batana rey tum aise kyun ho??? aakhir hua kya hai us din??

( vry concerned...)

all: haan batao na rey...batao na...

rey: guys!!!!!!!!! ok... batata hun par yahan canteen mei sab ke...

sw: mere ghar chalte hai...mummy papa bahar gaye...

all: kk...

in swayams house ...

sw: haan rey ab bata aakhir hua kya hai us din?????

rey: guys wo actually...rey narrated the whole story...

sw: wat>???????😡 kriya...kriya aise kaise mujhe tum se...shit ...meine sapne mei bhi nai socha ki kriya aisa...

rey: ( very calm and looking down) tumne sahi socha...kriya aisa kabhi nai karti...

sh: par rey uske apne mooh se kehne ke baad bhi tumhe aisa lagta hai ki woh aisa nai hai...

rey : haan sharon lagta nai mai jaaanta hun...wo meri kriya hai sharon...aur mai apni baatcutter ko...

all: baat ...wat?????????( except swayam)

rey: haan baatcutter... meri baatcutter...mai usse uss se bhi acha jaanta hun wo mujhe kabhi nai hate kar sakti... haan pehle mujhe bhi laga ki wo mujhe hate...par mai apni jaan ko ache se jaanta hun kuch toh wajah he ki usne mujh se aisi baat ki...

sw: par rey mujhe toh laga ki tu usse gussa...

rey: haa...hun gussa...kyun ki usne mujhe sach nai bataya ...aur mei hamesha gussa rahunga...iss baat keliye mai use kabhi maaf nai karoonga...

sh: toh rey tumne use dhoodh ne ki koshish...

rey: nai yaar ...abhi itni taakat nai hai mujh me ki mai use dekh paauon...

kk guys mai chalta hun...mujhe thodi der soona hai...aur haan ek gud news 4r u guys...

all: (sad) ...kya???

rey : arre guys cheer up...!!!!!!!!!!!!! hum aaj delhi jaa rahe hai... frnd ne bulaya...wo chahti hai ki mai usse milun...aur sharon anamika ( rey's frnd) pata hai...hamari choti si pyaari si anamika kisise pyaar kar rahi hai aur us ladke ne propose bhi kar di aur aaj raat ko uska engagement...

sh& vicky: wat??? sach???

rey: haan and hum sab jaa rahe hai... no y no but kk...

all: kk...

rey: kk ...we will strt at 3:00 ...bye...

all: bye...

after rey went...

neha : neha not believing rey gng through dis much par bohut calm bahar,...aur kitha pyaar karta hai kriya ko...

all: haan...(sigh)

sw: sharon sorry par mai humara pehle vday pe kuch nai karpavunga kyun ki...

sh: kyun ki mai nai chahti...

sw: huh?

sh tumhe kya laga rey ke baare mei jaan ne ke baad bhi mai ...hmm...nai swayam...rey aur kriya hamesha hame milane ki koshish ki aur hame milvaya...so ...mai sharon raiprakash kehti hun ki...jis din kriyaansh...

sw: wat?

sh: haan kriyaansh ...reyaansh aur kriya accha hai na...unki 1st vday humare bhi 1st vday banegi...

sw: sharon ...n hugs her...

all girls .: humbhi sharon ke saath hai ...hum bhi tabhi manayenge...

all boys: haan...

(im cutting all the crap...dey go to delhi...meet anamika ...sharon and vicky nakre maaring dat she didnt tell them ...aamu begging them 4r sorry ...frgiven...engagement...etc etc)

next day...

ammy: chalo guys...mai aapko apna school dikhati hun...( ammy school teacher...4r lower classes ...,...she likes earning her own money...and studies in night college...part tym job types...)

ye humara basket ball court...( ye wo sab dikhadi ab baaki only one room )

aur ye hamara staff room ...ye purana hai toh ab ise koi use nai karta...par bohut sundar hai... sirf mai aur mere frnd yaha rehte hai...baaki sab teachers doosri room mai...arre ye locked?????? ...god ...nai...not again...ye ladki hamesha aisa kyu karti hai...

vicky: koun...???

ammu: meri collegue and classmate...kareeb ek saal hue ise milke...par aaj tak mujhe na kabhi kuch batati aur din bar rooti rehti hai...

( guessed??)

ammu: are kriya door kholo...

all shocked but rey froze der itself...later all noticed and swayam kept his hand aruond reys shoulder 4r which he got a look aying hez 5ne but all know hez not...

ammu: kriya khol rahi ho ya ...

rey: ammu hum abhi aate hai...chalo guys...

all confused but followed rey who went sm 4rward and hid himself watchind at ammu...

slowly the door opened and ammu went inside when all the team followed her silently inside and hid in a small room inside dat room...which had a glass door ...andar wale dekh sakte hai par bahar wale ko kuch nai dikhta...

all stood der rey was really happy and tears were flowing without any control on seeing kriya...his life ...and his everything/...

hope u all lyk it...😃 plzz comment and like...4r pmz ad me to ur buddy list...

❤️deetha❤️

Edited by deetha - 13 years ago

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mindumplingss

@mindumplingss

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

Liked It Deetha. Kriyaansh reunion . liked it . hope sab theek ho. Kriya aur Rey ek saath aa jaye. anyways liked it

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

deetha...deetha...love uu 4 dis ❤️...a big big big *HUG* 4 dis...n lots of kissess...i luv dis ❤️...n rly rly happy 😊...awsummm update...i knw hmara chabilal apni ramaira ko kbhi misundersnd ni kr skta...kbhi bhi apni baatcutter ko hate ni kr skta...kriya ka casnova sirf usi se pyar krta h...n kriyaansh to alag ho hi ni skte kbhi bhi...love uuu yr...cv's gande h bade n tu achi h...badi wali smile aa gyi face par yar 😃 ...n thnk u thnk u 4 pm n nxt part jaldi update krio...coz mjhe kriyaansh ko ek sth dekhna h...ab wait ni hota 😊

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Kritika Julka

@kritzzz_ArSha

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

Awesome concept PM me the nxt update!!!

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

its awsome. plz do pm me on ur next update .

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Deetha.

@Deetha.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha
deetha...deetha...love uu 4 dis ❤️...a big big big *HUG* 4 dis...n lots of kissess...i luv dis ❤️...n rly rly happy 😊...awsummm update...i knw hmara chabilal apni ramaira ko kbhi misundersnd ni kr skta...kbhi bhi apni baatcutter ko hate ni kr skta...kriya ka casnova sirf usi se pyar krta h...n kriyaansh to alag ho hi ni skte kbhi bhi...love uuu yr...cv's gande h bade n tu achi h...badi wali smile aa gyi face par yar 😃 ...n thnk u thnk u 4 pm n nxt part jaldi update krio...coz mjhe kriyaansh ko ek sth dekhna h...ab wait ni hota 😊

first of all thanks 4r dis lamba wala cmnt and yeah ur cmnt brought a big smile on my face...kal raat ki meri sapna itna acha tha... i cnt believe...