MG FF... As Time Goes By... - Page 4

Created

Last reply

Replies

54

Views

9.3k

Users

14

Likes

241

Frequent Posters

hafuuk thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#31
PART 8


Geet (ST)- What is my mistake? Cant my life be normal like every other teenage girl in this world? Cant i sleep in my mom's lap and listen to stories? Cant i share a ride to school with my dad in the mornings? Cant i share the bond and my life's entire secret book with my sister? Why does all this seems like a dream? Kya yeh sab kabhi nahi ho sakta? A tiny drop of tear escaped her eyes as she thought all this.
Maan who was still avoiding her sight felt a water droplet on his right palm which was spread on his desk. He instantly looked at Geet who was by now shedding tears. Her face was blank but eyes were red and they said it all. Maan was unusually worried. Ab issay kya hogaya? Kahin meri koi baat ki waja se tou nahi ro rahi? he thought panickly. Nahi, maine tou isse kuch nahi kaha...zaroor koi aur waja hogi. He assured himself.



He slowly looked around, everyone present were busy in their respective work. He turned towards Geet and tapped her shoulders in order to get her attention- What happened? are you alright? Geet who was broken out of her trance wiped her tears with the back of her hands and said very softly- Yeah? its okay. Nothing happened. She gave him a weak smile and looked away trying to avoid his questioning eyes.
Maan normally wouldnt have cared but this detention was getting too boring for him besides Maan was getting curious about this girl. Lets make a friend for timepass. He concluded to himself.
I am Maan Singh Khurana. Whats your name? He offered his hand for her to shake and smiled at her. Geet looked at his hand and then him- Geet. She answered shaking her hand with his. Umm.. All he could say. Nice name. He added to himself.

* Silence *

Geet turned to other side as she recieved no response other than 'Umm' while Maan thought of different topics to talk about but couldnt finalise one. Should i talk about her clothes? No, too girlish. He asked as well as denied within himself. How about her class? He countered instantly. Nah, will look too studious and The MSK cannot look too studious. Maan was busy fighting within himself when he heard an irritating noise. He looked at Geet who was all pink. She pointed her finger at Maan's back. Maan looked behind him to see the most disgusted sight of his life. A couple were totally engrossed in each other and busy kissing each other !! Maan narrowed his brows all embarrassed and looked at Geet who was looking equally embarrassed. The moment was getting really awkward. He undid his watch in anger and kept in on the table harshly. It made a thumping sound making Geet jump in shock.
He cleared his throat and threw a paper ball at the couple. The boy broke out and read the paper which read in bold big letters- CUT IT OUT ! THIS AINT YOUR BEDROOM. The girl's ears turned pink in embarrassment. She hid her face and rested her head on the desk. Maan smiled sheepishly at Geet who mouthed- Thankyou. She took out her homework and started doing it before any other thought crossed her mind.
Finally, detention bell rang marking the end of detention. Everyone including Maan ran out of the class. Geet stayed behind making sure to put all her belongings in her bag. While doing so, she noticed a shiny silver element on the desk beside hers.

When focused properly, she figured it was a watch. She remembered Maan taking it off. It must be Maan's. It seems like a valuable possession, i should return it to him all safe. She decided and kept it in her bag.
She ran to the corridor hoping to catch Maan but he wasnt there. She went over to the library, asked the teacher if she could use the computer for a while.
Yes, you may. The teacher answered. but hurry up, library's closing in ten mins. Geet nodded- Thankyou.
She quickly typed 'Maan Singh Khurana', jot down his address on a piece of paper, closed the computer and rushed out of the library.


Precap- Geet in KM.

So how was it? i hope you guys had fun reading it. 😊
As for Geet she took out the address beacuse she thought returning the watch was necessary. Nice girl she is. 😆😆

Like and comment to motivate me.
love Chimmy 822. 😃

Edited by hafuuk - 13 years ago
EmMyk thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#32
awesome part..loved it! 😛😉 please update soon and thanks for PM 😊
nehakapoor7 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#33
it was short but sweet... they r now talking to each other gr8. Thanx for sending me pm😊
kamiya thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#34
thanks for the pm
loved the update
continue soon
hafuuk thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#35
PART 9



She quickly typed 'Maan Singh Khurana', jot down his address on a piece of paper, closed the computer and rushed out of the library.

Whats up with you Geet? Geet thought on her way to KM. you could even give the watch tomorrow at school, so why go to his house right now? tum tou usko theek se janto bhi nahi ho. She stopped in her track.
Haan geet tu pagal ho gayi hai kya? usne do chaar lafz hans kar baat kya karli, tu tou uske peeche peeche uske ghar jaa rahi hai. kyun? She started walking again.

Mind- Go home, Geet.
Heart- Nahi, kya pata usko ghari ki zarurat parh jaye.
Mind- tu kal marne nahi wali, kal de dena.
Heart- woh bura mane ga bhi tou dikhaye ga nahi.
Mind- jo marzi tumhari.
Heart- Yay yay yay !! :)

By the time Geet's heart and mind were fighting with each other, her legs were leading her to the khurana mansion. Her steps were stopped at the entrance of a huge gate. She gasped as someone tapped on her shoulder. She turned around to find a uniformed guy looking down at her. He flashed her a toothless smile. Geet backed off stumbling in her steps. The man gave yet another toothless grin- dont be scared bacha. what are you doing here? whom do you need to meet? he asked taking out his cordless phone.
oh, so he is the guard. she straightened herself and spoke unconfidently- Maan... was all she managed to say. she stared at the guard. he spoke for a few long seconds on the phone. after a while he cut the phone, nodded at the other guard who opened the joint gate ( smaller) in the huge gate. he gestured Geet to go in. Geet quickly entered the gate without wasting a second. it was a bad idea coming here. she concluded to herself as she glanced at front.
There were vanity vans parked in the corner and a crowd was present there carrying tools and lights, makeup and scripts.

Meanwhile, Maan was busy shooting for his advertisement. The director spoke up- Maan get ready for shot 3.
Maan nodded and ordered juice for himself- i am taking a ten mins break. the events of the day started playing in his mind while sipping his juice. The girl pinching him, then crying, then the awkward moments...
He jerked the thoughts away as he looked towards dadimaa through the mansion window. She was having tea on the porch. he then studied the whole mansion filled up with crew people, he smiled as his gaze struck on a girl. She is wearing the same clothes as that silly girl Geet. he thought. maybe i am seeing her now since she have been brave enough to pinch me. Haha. Maan thought arrogantly. he turned around as he heard the director call everyone for the shot. He resumed his shoot forgetting all about Geet.


How am i ever going to find Maan in here? she questioned herself. maybe i should go home. she turned to find the gate already closed. she slowly took baby steps towards the entrance of the mansion. she crossed the porch and noticed an elderly lady sitting there with a cup of tea. i think i should ask her about Maan.
Geet walked over to her- excuse me? the lady turned and smiled at Geet- yes?
Geet felt ease when she smiled- where can i find maan? i am his friend from school.
the woman smiled within herself- you mean college. whats your name?
Geet answered innocently- Geet.
The lady liked her simplicity- Maan is busy at the moment. you can sit and wait for him if you want. tea? she offered. Geet denied repectfully- is their a quieter place in the house?
The lady nodded and led Geet to the study.
Geet sat on the couch.
Lady- i am Savitri Devi. Maan's Dadimaa.
Geet immediately stood up- namastay auntyji.
Dadimaa nodded and sat opposite Geet- so Geet, you seem like a sweet girl. inside dadimaa couldnt believe Maan would be friends with a girl so sweet and innocent as Geet. she always took Maan as flashy types who dosent approve simplicity much.
Geet was flabbergasted by the comment- thankyou auntyji.
Dadimaa- you can call me Dadimaa.
Geet smiled- Ji dadimaa.
Dadimaa- what makes you come here?
Geet, who by now felt at ease being with dadimaa answered casually- we were detained together. maan forgot his wrist watch in the detention room so i came here to give it back to him since it looked valuable. she said in one go and quickly covered her mouth.
Dadimaa raised her eyebrow- detention?
Geet looked here and there avoiding Dadimaa's question. Dadimaa muffled her laughter. Just then Nakul entered with a tray of cookies and juice. Dadimaa- for you Geet. be comfortable.
Geet- hmm.. and ate two cookies and gulped the juice down nervously- where is maan? i need to return home early.
Dadimaa- shooting. i will be sending him here in two minutes. She left the study.


No precap guys. guys tell me is the story getting boring or am i giving too short updates? if yes, then feel free to tell me, i ll lenghten them for sure.

love, chimmy 822.

NEXT : PART 10
Edited by hafuuk - 13 years ago
EmMyk thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#36
rocking update..fantastico! :) please update soon and plz cute moments also :P😆😆
nehakapoor7 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#37
😊 nice update... no this FF is not at all boring.. plz cont. it.. i want to c Maneet teenage / younger age/ elder age rommance 😃 don't stop.. m waiting for next update & thanx for pm
kamiya thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#38
simply brilliant update
loved it
continue son

thanks for the pm
manook22 thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#39
nice part.. update soon. and this ff is my fave by far. dont discontinue and yeah give a little longer updatess.
BBP97 thumbnail
Engager Level 1 Thumbnail Groupbie Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#40
short updates but interesting better give more awesome and longer updates

Related Topics

Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: zajedno · 7 months ago

Everything happens at the right time, but we can't always recognize that right time. Don't wait for the perfect moment, because the perfect...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Nush_Rat · 1 years ago

Author's Note Hello my dear readers! Back in 2020, right after Nazar had ended, I along with my dear friend Nikita wrote a short story on our...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Saumya96 · 2 years ago

Hello everyone ☺️ This is Saumya ❤️ I have completed the five long threads of my FF "Hum Sath Sath Hain.!" A modern time story Following are the...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".