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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey hafsas sarah here..tell emoo the storys great but lenghten it uppp..:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Note- hey readers, i will update most probably in this week. sorry for getting late as i have exams coming up.😭 updates will be delayed for now but as soon as my exams will be over, i will give regular updates! 😃

please bear with me till then. 😊😊

love, Chimmy822 😳
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Edited by hafuuk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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no probs.. we'll wait.. Best luck for ur exam 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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no problem dear
we'll wait for the update
all the best for your exams
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 10



Daadima went down the stairs towards the main hall where shooting was held. She walked over to mustache man and whispered something in his ear. He nodded and announced-pack up everyone!

Maan who was getting his hair done looked at him in disbelief- but we just started. We have to complete this ad by the end of next week.
The director gave him a sheepish smile- i am sorry. family obligation. He showed him his phone as if he just ended talking to someone and making his point clear.
Maan got up from his chair and stomped over to his room.
The director looked at Daadima worriedly- i did what you said but now he is angry. you know his anger, he might even refuse to work for us now. what to do now?
Dadima gave him an assuring look- no Mr. Patel, he wont refuse. i wont let him. you go now, i will call you when to set the next shoot.
With this, she took the route to Maan's room.

She entered to see Maan has changed into his tracks and vest all ready to go to the gym. She quickly blocked his path and said- maan bete, itna ghussa theek nahi hai.
Maan- abhi nahi daadima. mujhe jana hai.
daadima faked her voice- haan ab tou aap itne bare ho gaye hain ke apni daadi k pas 2 mins beth kar baat nahi kar sakte. Maan raised his eyebrows and folded his arms- ho gaya drama shru.


He sat down on his bed- tou ap ne bheja hai crew ko yahan se? woh bhi mere sath 2 mins spend karne k liye? ho hi nahi sakta.
Daadima- mujhe ap se yeh umeed nahi thi. He instantly got up.
Daadima smiled at his grandson's cuteness- agar hum un sab ko yahan se bhejte nahi tou ap apni girlfriend se sukoon se milte kaise? she emphasized on the word 'Girl'.
Maan looked at her with shock- girlfriend?
Daadima- ap ko kya laga? humein pata nahi chalega. agar ap humaray pote hain tou hum hi ap ki daadima hain. She pulled his cheek.
Maan who was totally confused by this conversation raised his hands in surrender- tou maine kaunsa mana kiya hai mer pyaari daadima? par iss baar ap ghalat hain. he mimicked daadima's accent by emphasizing on the word 'Daadima'.
Daadima pulled his cheeks again- no need to act. hum Geet k baaray mein sab kuch jantay hain.
Maan didnt catch the whole sentence except the word 'Geet'.
Maan- Geet? woh kahan se ayii? he questioned Daadima.
Daadima smiled at her victory- she is in the study. kafi der se ap ka wait kar rahi hai. waise apko... Maan didnt stop to hear the rest as he ran out of his room towards the study with million questions playing in his mind. Daadima shook her head seeing maan storming off- bache humesha bache hi rahenge. she grinned to herself and made her way towards her room to rest for a while and give maan and geet some time to spend together.


Oh tou woh koi aur nahi Geet hi thi jis ko maine garden mein dekha tha. par woh yahan kya kar rahi hai? Maan was busy questioning himself as he stood outside the closed door of the study unable to decide what to say when he enters the study. he remebered how he stared at her outside the detention room as well as inside. He felt Geet being capable of making his senses weak and him loosing his self-thoughts as of now. He jerked away all thoughts and decided to first sneak on her and then talk to her.

He opened the door slightly and peeked inside. His gaze fell immediately on the couch placed in front but to his astonishment, noone was there. He then heard footsteps in the farther corner...his eyes followed the sound.

Geet was walking to and fro restlessly. Quite a few times she glanced at the cieling and made a sad baby face. She then tied her hair in a ponytail. Maan smiked- oh tou she is feeling hot. He glanced at the AC which was turned off. He was cofused- noone ever dared to turn that thing off. how did that closed down all of a sudden? He looked all over the room to locate the remote control and finally found it in Geet's hands. Maan figured she must have turned it off herself- but why? he questioned himself.

Maan was enjoying Geet's plight and restlessness due to heat. Her face showed signs of tension and anger. She circled around the whole room and suddenly fell on the couch in order to rest when her gaze fell on something. She got up with a smile while Maan was busy trying to figure out that what did she see that she is so happy. He looked at himself to see if he is clearly hidden and yes he was so what was she about to do. He looked at her curiously.
She went and walked over to the biggest curtain in the room. She stood their for a few brief moments. took a deep breath and raised her hands in order to open them. Maan held his breath as Geet threw open the curtains!

Maan closed his eyes as sharp rays of light hit the room and turned the dim-lit study room into a bright gleaming room. He reopened his eyes to catch a new scene, Geet was standing in front of the windows. Within a second she threw them open as well. Now the room was filled with cool and pleasant wind strokes.

He noticed Geet regaining her composure. Her face had a beautiful smile now instead of tension. He saw her closing her eyes as if inhaling all nature around her. He saw her raising her hands and the very next second her dark, silky long hair were loose. Maan stood mesmerized by the sight. His breath got stuck in his throat as the whole room scented just like Geet. Her fragrance filled the entire room, maan inhaled the scent which gave him desirable feel to in hale it all the time...he saw the restlessness disappear and liveliness appear on her face.

His thoughts were clouded by thoughts of just Geet. Maan closed his eyes to control his undefined feelings. All he could think of was her cute acts, childish behaviour and mesmerizing scent. He smiled at himself with eyes still closed when he heard a voice- Chup chup ke mujhe kyun dekh rahe ho?




As promised i gave the updatee 😊 i hope you guys enjoyed reading it 😃😃
i hope i wont make you all wait longer for the next update 😆😆
Lets hope for the best 😊
i tried my best to give longer updates...hope it is 😆 now longer comments 😉😉😉

LIKE AND COMMENT TO MOTIVATE ME !! 😊

LOVE, CHIMMY822
Edited by hafuuk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46

thnx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys,

I know i have been gone for a long time. hit me, bash me as much as u can. this devilish mind of me suggested me to stop dis ff but i decided not to go according to that :p
I might gave short updates frm now on with a stretch of 2-3 days, the updates might not be edited so kindly bear it. this loser net of mine is the sole reason behind my absense. Pm-ing wil be a bit hard for me, i wil try my best to pm but it wil be better if u guys keep a regular check on dis thread for updates! love ya awl.

chimmy822
Edited by hafuuk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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welcome dear😊
please continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Welcome back...
waiting for update...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
Hello all,
Heres an update!!

Part 11:

Chup chup kar mujhe kyun dekh rahe ho?
Maan was thrown out of his thawts as he heard Geet's voice. He flashed open his eyes to see Geet standing ryt in front of him with her arms folded above her chest.
Maan fumbled with his words- uh..woh..main... His gaze fell at the table, he walked over and picked up a mag- yeh lene aya tha. he completed confidently, then raised his eyebrows at her- waise why am i telling u dis? what are you doing at my place at this hour? he looked at her intently. geet felt uneasy wid his gaze. she spotted her bag lying next to his feet. she quickly walked over to pick it up.
Maan saw geet rushing hurriedly towards him. he backed off, tripped and fell on da couch clumsily which made Geet laugh- main apna bag lene ayi thi. she pointed at the bag due to which his ears turned red. Geet quickly opened her bag and handed him the watch- you forgot dis at the det. room, i came to return it..
maan quickly grabbed the watch and rushed out of the room. Geet too left.

...

Next day-

Geet spots pinky near her locker, she rushes over to her. it was their recess and geet had been looking for pinky since 2nd class.. but before she reaches pinky, two girls blockd her path, they were talking to each other. geet stopped to listen to their convo
Girl 1- he is looking too hawt in green.
Girl2- yeah, thats my fave colour.
Girl1- kal tak tou black tha
Girl 2- kal woh black mein tha na.
Girl 2- ooohh, lets catch a glimpse of him bfore he goes to his class.
and both ran away.
Geet walked over to pinky awl confusd..

Geet- who were the screeching about?
pinky- aur kaun? dhak dhak.
geet looked at her questioningly- dhak dhak?
pinky widened her eyes at her- you dont know dhak dhak? areyy wohi jo har larki k sapnon mein ata hai..
geet still looked confused tou pinky continued- abey maan yaar!
geet- maan singh khurana wala maan?
pinky nodded and smiled- yess!
Geet hit her on her arms- usme aesi kya baat hai? normal tou dikhta hai.. pinky hit her back- pagli tu kabhi nahi samajhne wali.. Maan is hot, sexy, rich and an all-time superstar model, girls kill to be his girlfriends. he talks to all but never asks them out. sad, ryt? she looked at geet who just nodded.
Geet was amazed by the popularity he possessed..suddenly she felt embarrassed for going at his place the day before.. i wish i never went.. she thought. what will he think of me! she felt insulted, she rushed out of the campus and into the main ground and sat under the big tree hiding herself from everyone.

There she saw maan sitting with his gang. she hid herself even more. she saw a group of snobby girls walking towards them. Maan stood up as they apprached him. they all wer talking with great ease with each other.. which made geet feel down-casted. just then, she heard maan saying- so you all remember the party this weekend? they all nodded. he smileed- be there! and he walked away in to the campus...


Geet thought for a moment- party? sounds like fun! then she realized- maan will never invite me, i m basically noone to him, just a junior. she thouhgt- i dont even wanna go. she assured herself and shrugged off all thaughts!
what she didnt know was that maan went into the campus just to look for her.. Maan wanted to invite geet to his party because somewhere deep down he wanted her to cum, he found her different from all other girls he met and he was tired of spending time with girls who just know how to show-off their features and flash talks with which maan was irritated to the core! he was simply impressed by geet's way of talking and her cute acts. watever she does, she always brings a smile on his face and he liked it.. he remembered all his encounters with her and everytime she proved to be all natural. he desperately needed a break from fake material and wanted a glimpse of reality too.

with all these new thoughts in mind, maan searched for her all over the campus bit couldnt locate her anywhere. he was suddenly depressed. Did she even come today ? he thawt. He thawt of asking her friends but he didnt know any. after another search for half hour maan got tired so he went back to the ground.

on the other hand, geet hiding under the tree made some points clear in her mind like...
- never cross maan's path
-change route if comes face to face
- donot think or talk abt him with anyone
these decisions helped her to lighten her mood.


so guys an update after a long time... finally. hope you like it.
like and comment to motivate me!

love, chimmy 822

Edited by hafuuk - 13 years ago

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