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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice ff
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PART 3

FIFTEEN YEARS LATER.

KM:

A young boy of around 18 years old was sleeping peacefully on his king-sized bed dreaming of how he won the Class President award of the current semester and everyone clapping for him while one person ringing the bell...huh, ringing the bell? Why would anyone ring the bell on congratulating him? and Maan heard a voice call him out- Maan sir, Maan Sir !! Uth jaye !! Nakul called him breaking his blissful dream. Maan groaned as he discovered he was dreaming. I wish it were true.

Nakul- Maan Sir, Daadimaa keh rahi hain uth jaye. Aap ko school jana hai. Vacations ke baad pehla day hai.
Maan turned in his bed lazily, glanced at his wall-clock which showed 8:20 am.
Maan- Aaah Nakul, you go, i ll be right down in a minute and tell Daadimaa that i am not going to school now, its COLLEGE now.
He said struggling to sit up and as soon as Nakul left, he fell back with a thud. Cmon maan, get up or saru princi se sunnay ko mile ga!

After half an hour of cribbing, he freshened up and went downstairs where Daadi and Niel were already present.

Daadimaa- aagaye sahab-zaaday!
Neil smiled at maan who still looked lost in something and sleepy.
Daadimaa- Good Morning Maan!
Maan lost in his thoughts sat down and started eating Pasta- his fave.

Daadima- Maan, she called softly then shouted- MAAN !!
Maan looked at her blankly- Huh? Ji? Daadima? Kya hua?
Daadima- Kahan hain aap?
Maan- Nowhere.
Daadima- Hmm.. beta aap ne aj school nai jaana?
Maan- Umm.. not school Daadi, college aur haan jaana hai par will not attend the assembly. its usually lenghty especially first day wali.
Daadima and Neil muffled their laugh.
Niel- i think you should go. it normally introduces you to new activities that are gonna happen in school this semester like council and elections. Besides long assembly means less classes. He winked.
Maan- council and elections involves me. I got to go! Bye dad. Bye daadimaa.And he kissed her forehead before grabbing his bag and heading out the door, into his new Porsche and off to school, ah, college! ;)

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GEET'S CURRENT RESIDENCE:

Geet- Haye Babaji, aj mere high school ka pehla din hai, zindagi k 16 saal maine sirf girls school mein parha hai. Suna hai high school mein larke honge jo class mein chipak chipak kar betheinge. Chi Chi Babaji, soch kar hi saans doobne lagti hai. Suddenly she calmed- So what geet? woh bhi teri tarha insan hain, jab tak tu nahi chahe gi koi tujhe kuch nahi keh sakta. Haina? She looked at the cieling as if asking it.

Pinky, geet's foster sister was listening to this one on one match quickly spoke up- chill geet! jaisa tu socha rahi hai waisa kuch nahi hone wala, koi chipak kar nahi bethne wala. sab alag alag separate chairs par bethenge. now quickly finish up as i am going to catch the school bus. dont be late.
Geet looked at clock which showed 8 am- So early? and what about your breakfast?
Pinky- Dont worry, i have money, will buy something on the way such as samosa or fries. She declared dreamily.
Geet smiled inwardly- No thanks! you carry out your junk plans alone. I will come after breakfast.
Pinky protested- But..?
Geet cut her off- No buts. Ya tou you come with me or go alone.
pinky answered with clear disappointment- Me okay alone. Hmph! Btw remember bus leves at 8.45. And she left.
Geet- Hmm.

After Pinky left, geet took out an envelope which had 15 letters in it. She was very well aware of the fact that the people she was living with are not her real family. The letters were recieved by her every year on her birthday by postman and she was always eager to recieve them. The letter contained one photo of her parents and sister. She use to view the photo every morning praying to God to grant them health and welfare always. She used to imagine how her life would have been if she lived like a normal girl close to her real ones but darn she was already leading an abnormal life. Not that she was unhappy here but apne tou apne hote hain na. she was not even angry at her parents for leaving her because in each letter her mother wrote how much she misses her and wants her back. But just because of elders, they have to bear the distance.
She shrugged off all thoughts as she heard Pinky's mum called out- Geet? Romeo? Breakfast kha lo.
Romeo was geet's foster bro, aged 14.
Geet- Ji ayii.
She quickly stuffed the memoirs in her drawer and ran downstairs. She sat down, had breakfast and left for the school.
As she reached there, there was no bus. She glanced at the watch. It showed 8.55. Shit! i got late. where am i ever going to get the bus now?

She looked left and then right. Not a single soul was to be seen.
She started talking loudly- Kya aaj hi sab ko time pe school or office puhunchna tha? Babaji, main itni slow kyun hoon? Aap ne mujhe woh envelope kyun dekhne diya, dekha mein late ho gayi. Ab kya main school yoon hi chalte chalte parade maarti jaoungi...

Her cribbing session was disturbed by a car who was continuously hitting its horn. She stopped in her track...
looked at front,
Noone was there.
Then left,
still noone.
Then right,
still NO ONE!!
Her heart got stuck in her throat, the only thing she comrehended she shouted actually screamed- BACHAOOO !! BHOOOT !

Suddenly she heard a deep voice- Pagal ho kya? raast mein kyun khari ho aur uske upar se chillla kyun rahi ho?

Geet was dumbstruck by the voice. She rubbed her eyes and looked. Then, she realized, she was standing in the middle if the road and the car was at her back. She realized she looked everywhere except behind her. She turned sheepishly and looked at her intruder.
Geet said in one go- I am sorry. Woh actually i got late to school so i was complaining to Babaji for my bad luck and while doing that i didnt realized i was standing in the middle of the road and then-. Maan cut her off in between- Look, i am not interested in your Ram Katha, but if you want i can drop you off to your school. He offered. since i dont want to go to my college this early. And also because you dont irritate anyone else like this.

Geet looked at him as if he were some life savior. She looked at the sky, thanked her babaji while his gaze followed her every action. He concluded that she is very cute.
Pagal hai. He thought and smirked to himself.

Precap: The ride to school.




So how was it? i hope you guys had fun reading the first meeting. 😆😆

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Edited by hafuuk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderful update.. interesting concept.. cont. soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome😛
continue soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
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😆PART 4


Geet looked at him as if he were some life savior. She looked at the sky, thanked her babaji while his gaze followed her every action. He concluded that she is very cute.
Pagal hai. He thought and smirked to himself.

Seeing him smirk, Geet backed off. Are you sure Geet? You really want to go to school with some stranger? Her thoughts were broken by his voice- Hello? are you going to stand like that whole day? Come so that i can drop you.
Geet- uhh..woh..main.. she fumbled with her words as she was unable to voice out her thoughts.

Maan who was irritated by this behaviour thought- Ubhi tou bari bak bak kar rahi thi, yeh achanak isse kya hogaya?
Something struck him and he looked at her direction, he noticed she was wearing casual jeans and top. There was nothing glossy about her makeup and she wore a beautiful 'G' symboled locket around her well-shaped neck. Her hair were tied in a ponytail. He noticed that she wasnt even able to look into his eyes while talking. She looked like a total next-door girl.
Seeing all this, he understood that she may not be comfortable in going alone with a stranger anywhere. He spoke in his most decent voice- Listen its not safe to stand here all alone. I am myself a student so i thought i could help you out. Its no big deal. Hmm? He looked at her questioningly.
Geet thought for a minute- Shakal se tou shareef lagta hai, waise bhi mere pass aur koi raasta nahi hai school puhunchne ka. She looked at the sky- Babaji, Agar kuch hua na tou main aap ko maaf nahi karoongi, har problem se bacha lena mujhe. Theek hai? She smiled at herself as if she gained some sort of victory and sat in the passenger seat.


Geet- Chaliye.
Maan- Kahan?
Geet looked at him in horror.
Maan quickly covered up- Oh, i mean you never told me the name of your school. i was asking that...
Geet seemed to buy that statement- St. Pats High School.
Maan thought- Yahan main college jaana nahi chahta and she...He questioned his luck- Ek tou larki ko lift dou, woh bhi ayi tou apne school ki ! ;)
When the car didint moved Geet looked at him who was lost looking ahead mumbling something which she couldnt understand. She tapped his shoulder- hello? Maan got out of his trance- yes? Geet asked seriously- Raasta nahi pata school ka?
Hearing this Maan broke into a zeal of laughter. The girl was questioning 'The Maan Singh Khurana'.
Maan while laughing- Have you lost you mind? Suddenly he became serious and spoke in his authoriative voice- There is nothing in this world which Maan Singh Khurana doesnt know. Saying this, he started the engine and zoom went the car.

Geet on the other hand didint fail to notice the glint in his eyes when he said 'Maan Singh Khurana' . She was clearly impressed by the attitude this guy possesed. However, Geet felt his name familiar but she couldnt remember where have she heard or maybe read it.

The rest of the drive was silent. Finally they reached their destination- St Pats High School.



Maan-Lo aa gaya tumhara school.
Geet - Thankyou. Stepped out of the car. She felt Maan also getting out of the car. She looked at him curiously. Maan ignored her look, went past her and entered the buliding. Geet ran behind him, stopped him and asked- Tumhara bhi yahi school hai?
Maan corrected her- Haan, College.
Geet- Iska matlab tum yahan parhte ho?
Maan looked at her as if she is crazy- Nahi, salsa karne aata hoon. He answered sarcastically.
But Geet didnt get the sarcasm- Really? Salsa? Kyun? She asked innocently.
Maan felt his nerves burning, he closed his eyes, took a deep breath and said- Never mind. And walked over to his friends leaving ever so confused Geet alone.

Precap: Principal's Office.
''both of you detained for coming late, report in the detention room after school.''

So friends how was it? Hope you all enjoyed reading it. Many fun-filled moments ahead. 😆😆

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Love, Chimmy 822.

Edited by hafuuk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aha.. same school/college... now it'll be fun.. do cont. soon.. & thnx for pm
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amazing update,
love it.
thx fr the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 5


Maan felt his nerves burning, he closed his eyes, took a deep breath and said- Never mind. And walked over to his friends leaving ever so confused Geet alone.

As he walked over to his group of friends, they welcomed him with warm smiles and teasing eyes.
Samrat winked- woh kaun thi?
Maan answered casually- some junior, just gave her a lift till here.
Prem teased Maan- Ooo !!
Maan shot an angry glare in his direction- knock it off dude !
All the guys muffled their laughter.
Just then, a group of snobby girls walked over to them.
One of the girl called Sameera said- Hey everyone. then instantly turned towards Maan- Hey MK. When is your next show? She asked with a flirty smile.
Maan- Umm.. not show, a photo-shoot. Few days maybe. I will be promoting a hot deodrant brand.
Sameera seemed impressed- Oh. obviously. Where hot is, there you are. I am sure every single person will buy it. I will be the first in line ofcourse. She said with yet another flirtious smile.
Maan looked at her shockingly- I am sorry Sam but yeh Men's deodrant hai. He emphasized on the word 'men'.

Sameera gave a regretful smile and left from there while all the guys present there shook with laughter.

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Meanwhile Geet spotted pinky in the canteen eating burgers. Geet went up to her- Yaar tu yahan kha pee rahi hai, pata hai main aj school kisi stranger ke sath ayi hoon. Tujhe meri bilkul bhi fikar nahi hai. She made a baby face.

Pinky- Maha-rani tou khud hi mere sath nahi chal rahi thi. Waise bhi kuch khaas nahi thaa assembly mein. saru principal ne first day lecture diya about Rules and regulations. He seems to be too much attached to rules ! BORING ! Chal mood theek kar aur yeh kha le. She offered Geet fries. Geet took them and started munching them.
Just then, Adi came up running to them- Geet, Geet, G..G...G.. Geet !
Geet- Han han, main Geet, tum adi aur yeh pinky. She pointed to Pinky, then continued- Ab agay bhi bolo?
Adi said panting heavily- The principal wants to see you.
Geet- but why?
Adi- I..i..i... dont know.
Geet- okay.. i ll catch you guys later. She said walking towards the office.

She saw Maan standing inside through the glass window and it struck her- Oh maybe principal called me beacuse i got late.
She knocked the door, peeked inside and said- Can i come in sir?
Principal nodded and Geet entered.

Principal- So Mr Khurana and Ms Handa. You broke the first rule on the first day. Getting LATE ! He looked at them threateningly.
Geet gulped her saliva while Maan raised his eyebrows.
The pricipal continued- Let me make it clear to both of you. The school starts at? He looked at Geet as if expecting an answer.
Geet answered- 9.
Principal- You came at? Looked at Maan.
Maan- 10.30. He eyed Geet who was looking on the floor.
Principal- How much late? Looked at both.
Maan & Geet together- One hour 30 minutes.
Principal- Both of you detained for coming late. Report in the detention room after school. two hours. now both of you may leave for your classes.

Maan and Geet went outside. They couldnt believe that they were detained on the very first day. They stood silently in the hallway. Maan who was disturbed by this silence spoke up- What the hell man? How bad can this day go? its all because of you ! He pointed his finger at Geet.

Geet- Me? maine kaha that mujhe lift dou?
Maan- Maine kaha tha raaste mein kahri ho?
Geet- Brake maine maara tha?
Maan- Nahi, meri kismat ne. Pata nahi kaisa speed-breaker aa gaya meri life mein ! He glared at her.
Geet- Mujhe aap se koi baat nahi karni. i am getting late for class.
Maan- Huh, whatever. He turned his back to her.
Geet mimicked him- Huh, whatever. And stomped off to her class.



Precap- Maan's announcement.


So how was it? hope you all like it.
Like and Comment to motivate me. 😆😉😆

Love, Chimmy 822

Edited by hafuuk - 13 years ago
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😊 wonderful update.. thanx for pm.. cute Maneet's fight.. loved it.. update soon

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