MG FF... As Time Goes By...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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MG FF- As Time Goes By...😊😛😆

by- HafuuK

Thanks to Emmyk for the banner. 😊😆😃



This is a romantic love story which revolves around two strangers, then friends and then... 😉😉😉

As time goes by...they meet, became friends, fell in love and became one as they were destined to. their journey was full of cute moments and romance respectively.

Okay friends, this is a slow story sso kindly bear with me! 😆

Below is the index and the character sketch...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey
sounds interesting
plz update soon and pm me whenever u update
always eager to read about maaneet


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Posted: 13 years ago
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CHARACTER SKETCH

Maan Singh Khurana- 18 years old, studies in St.Pats High School. Son of a successful fashion designer Niel Khurana, popularly known as 'NK'. Is himself an emerging model, full of attitude as he shoots for teenage mags! Girls drool over him 😉😉


Geet Handa- 16 years old, studies in St.Pats High School. Daughter of a famous psychiactrist, Dr. Mohinder Handa. She respects her family alot, can never go against them! Is a cheerful and jolly girl 😃😃

The rest of the characters will be introduced as the story progresses...

This was it. how was it friends? Do tell me...Should i continue with this FF or not?

Like or Comment to motivate me 😊
Whoever want PM, ADD me as BUDDY 😃


LOVE, Chimmy 822 ( maneet freak )
Edited by hafuuk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Note; This is a new ff...so plz ignore my mistakes like you all do for starters. 😉

okay, now the story will not be maaneet all grownups. it starts from their childhood.

PART 1

KM :

A boy was celebrating his 2nd birthday. Every person present there bought him luxurious gifts and why wouldnt they, he was the only son of the famous designer Niel Khurana. Even at the age of two, the little boy have sharp senses and lavishing attitude plus lifestyle. Famous celebs and media were scattered all over the mansion and its gardens.

Daadima- (on mic) Thankyou Everyone for coming here and making the birthday party a huge success!

The crowd cheered and hooted . This party was truly lavish and everything about it was royal. The guest seemed to enjoy alot. Just then, a boy in casual jeans, shirts and overcoat appeared in the arms of NK. The crowd cheered and clapped as the cake was cutted by the Bday boy. And then, the REAL party began !!



HANDA HAWELI

Thai ji- Bahut bahut badhai ho, Rano ko beti hui hai, abhi abhi Mohinder ka phone aya tha.

Daarji- Hmm...

Though it seems to be a good news for Thaiji but the elder male members of the family werent delighted to hear the news of Mohinder having a baby girl yet again. First rajji and now this new-born baby girl.

Daarji- Taras gayee hain humari ankhein ek sagay potay ko dekhne k liye, Brij ko tumhare pati ne adopt na kiya hota tou humari ankhein bina pota dekhe hi band ho jatein.

Thaiji- Ji Daarji... Main ap k liye chai la doon. She tried to change the topic.

Daarji- Haan le ao.



Few hours later:

Rano and Mohinder entered with an infant in the haweli. They knew noone would have been very happy to see the baby except few such as Rajji and Thaiji. So very queitly without anyones knowledgr, they sneaked into their room and slept. It was indeed a queit day for Handas.



So How was it? should i continue?
Please comment and Like to motivate me to write more.
Thankyouu. loads of hugs to all <3
Love, Chimmy 822.😊


Edited by hafuuk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved the concept...
awesome update...
plzz add me to ur pm list..
continue soon...
n very well written...
CONGRATS FOR THE FF...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 2

The very next day:

Handa haweli :

Daarji-Mohinder tumhe pata hai na, tumne kya karna hai?
Mohinder-Ji daarji, lekin woh abhi bahut choti hai. Agar woh apni maa se door rahe gi tou zinda nai reh payegi.

Daarji-Jab hum ne faisla karliya hai tou koi andhi toofan bhi nai badal sakta! humaray baradri mein doosri beti ki paidaish upshagun mani jaati hai aur usse 18 saal ki umar se pehle tak ghar mein rakhna khatra hota hai ghar k larko (inheritors) k liye jo khandan ka naam barhatay hain. isssi kaaran tumhari doosri behen ko humne 18 saal tak ghar se door rakha tha sirf aur sirf tumhari aur Aakash (tayaji) ki jaan ki khatir. Kya yeh choti choti baatein bhi tumhe samjahni parhein gi? He spat.

Mohinder himself was an educated man who does not believe in such rituals but he can never deny his father's order so he had no option other than to abide by him. He knew that if he denied all this, he could have get his new-born killed.
He silently agreed and went to Rano to instruct her to pack the belongings of his dear daughter who was named 'Geet' just that morning. He found Rano weeping, holding geet in her arms. Geet was fast asleep.

Rano-Kya main iss baar aap k sath Delhi jaa sakti hoon? Phir hum Geet ko Khud se dooor nahi kareinge.
Mohinder- tum janti ho yeh mumkin nai hai. Daarji nahi maaneinge. You know how he dislikes bahus' of this house to reside outside sasuraal. Tum fikar mat karo, main Geet ko kisi apne k pass rakhonga takay roz roz uski halat maloom hoti rahe.
Rano hugged geet tighter- pata nahi, kaise rahegi meri bachi paraye insanon k beech.

Mohinder was a strong man where emotions were involved. He gently sat down besides Rano, kissed Geet's forehead and said- main isko paraye insanon k beech nahi chor raha, yeh mere dost ki behen k ghar rahe gi. woh loug issi saal Hoshiarpur se Delhi shift hue hain isiliye humari beti hum jaisi hi hogi aur uska rehen sehen bhi humari tarha. ab khush hojao..
Rano felt relievd- Ji.

Few hours later Mohinder and geet left to delhi.

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Meanwhile at Khurana Mansion:

Niel Khurana- Nakul.. Maan ki three-wheeled cycle le kar ao.
The father of the pampered little 'Maan Singh Khurana' called out to his servant. The young boy was crying continiously in his stroller, So his father picked him in his arm.
Daadima- niel bete, yeh shor kya ho raha hai? Hum ek imp client se phone par baat kar rahe the.
Niel- sorry mom... woh Maan ko stroller mein nahi rehna tou isiliye maine socha ko usko cycle mein bithadoon.

Daadima took maan from his arms. She hugged him dearly and said- tou mera baby barha hogaya hai? she turned to niel and continued- waise main soch rahi thi ke aap week mein atleast 1-2 times KC ke statistics of production dept dekh liya karein. Service dept i.e Designing is going speechless. Hum asal mein trusts pe ziada dehan dena chahte hain tou PD or SD doonon ap handle karliya karein. Baki overall check tou hum karte raheinge. Just then it struck her- aap office nahi gaye?

Niel hesitated for a min and answered softly- Mom woh actually subah se praiya ki tabiyat kuch ajeeb hai. Woh bbahut low feel karai hai aur kafi sweating bhi ho rahi hai. mujhe kuch theek nahi lag rah. Woh pale bhi this isilye main office nahi gaya. socha maan aur priya k sath day spend karleta hoon.

Daadima smiled- hum priya se mil kar atay hain.
Niel- ji mom! and continued playing with maan.

After a brief moment he heard Daadima's voice- NIEL ! JALDIII !! PRIYAAA !!!

Picking maan from the cycle, he rushed towards his room where he saw the dreadful sight of his unconcious wife and failed attempts of daadima to bring her to conciousness.

HOSPITAL:


City Hospital Delhi/India.

Priya was immediately taken to the ICU. Daadima and niel waited for doctor to bring updates of priya. Maan was sleeping peacefully on VIP couch.

After a while doctor came- Sorry Mr. Khurana, we couldnt save your wife. The brain hamridge was severe. I am sorry. and he left.

Niel collapsed as soon as he heard this. Daadimaa consoled him but Niel was miles away. He silently like an idol walked over to the VIP couch, picked up Maan and said- he and i have have lost have lost the most precious part of our life. he looked at maan's innocent face- i wll never make you feel your mother's absence. itna pyaar doonga k tumhe kabhi apni maa ki kami mehsoos nahi hogi. KABHI NAHIII.

Daadimaa smiled with tears in her eyes and hugged father-son together.


Okay guys, i know and this was large and a little boring but spare me, to build the story this was needed. Next part se hold your breath, MAANEET meeting and much more 😉😉

Like and Comment to motivate me...
ADD me buddy if you want pms!

xoxo, LOVE, CHIMMY 822.
Edited by hafuuk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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heyyy...loved your ff! plzzz update cute moments..
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awww loved the update..
awesome part...
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loved ur ff

plz add me in ur pm list n pm me when u update.

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