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Angel

@amita5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Awesome story

please update soon and pm me

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sapna sharma

@kamiya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

great😛

awesome

i love their nok jhok

continue soon dear😃

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hafuuk

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Posted: 13 years ago

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PART 6

Maan- Huh, whatever. He turned his back to her.

Geet mimicked him- Huh, whatever. And stomped off to her class.

Geet turned in the corridor and peeked in her timetable which showed that she was supposed to be in her biology class. She hurried in her class rehearsing all sort of excuses she would give for coming late to the teacher. She reached to see that Mrs. Rao ( Bio teacher ) was not in there. She thanked Babaji and entered smiling.

Pinky came up to her- Arey Geet tu? bata yar principal ne kya kaha? Waise pata hai Mrs. Rao? arey wahi, our bio teacher. She is out on vacations. We are free for a whole week. Can you imagine that? Geet just looked at her as pinky continued her one breath convo- Aur pata hai, she went to Goa. The weather is so awesome there. Waise yahan ka itna bura bhi nahi hai. Btw Geet tu kucch bol kyun nahi rahi. Bata na principal ne kya kaha?

She shook Geet who said- Arey tu kuch bolne degi tab bolongi na !!

Pinky- Chal bol.

Geet- Tujhe kya laga, scholarship mili hai?

Pinky- Smile tou aese hi kar rahi thi when you entered.

Geet waked her- Nahi yaar. Mat poocho. Sir ne detention ki talwar sar ke upar latka di hai aur kya ? Two hours after school. She said helplessly.

Pinky- No way ! mere after school snack ka kya hoga?

Geet replied- Usko bhaar mein daalo ! mera kya hoga?

Pinky consoled her- Chalo koi baat nahi. Ek din ki tou baat hai. Jhel lenge. Chal yeh period free hai. Canteen chalte hain.

Geet gave a half smile and followed Pinky to the canteen.

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As Geet walked away from him, Maan went to the main ground of his campus where his friends were already sitting cracking jokes among themselves. Maan walked over to them and sat down with a thud. His mind was occupied by the disturbing thoughts of detention with that annoying girl. Samrat looked at Maan who was ready to explode. He offered him water which Maan took and spilled all over his own face in anger, then shook his head from left to right twice

which sprayed water droplets from his hair.

A group of girls were passing by. They cried unanimously- OMG ! HAWT !!

Seeing this Samrat shook his head- Oh man, sari larkiyan tere par marti hain aur main un par. He looked at Maan.

Maan who was least bothered about all this ignored Samrat's taunt and spoke- I have an announcement to make.

All his friends turned their attention towards him as Maan continued- Which is important. Sameera interrupted in her flirty sing-song voice- Most important MK in my case.

Maan replied awkwardly- Thanks Sam. I appreciate that.

Prem spoke up- So what is it?

Maan- As you all know my birthday is next week so i have decided to throw a totally cool pool party. The entire school is invited.

Prem and Samtar hi-fived each other and embraced Maan in a hug- Thanks dude ! They said.

Sameera- MK you have the coolest parties ever. Would love to come. She held his arm- How about pizza after school? Pre-Birthday celebration?

Maan- I got detention. Cant make it. First time in his life Maan couldnt stop thanking detention for coming in his way.

He freed himself and left from there before anyone else could pounce on him.

Precap- The Detention.

I know it was a boring part with no maaneet but detention is full of maaneet scenes. The story is going slow as i said but this is how is it 😆😆

Enjoy 😃😊😛

Like and comment to motivate me.

Love,

Chimmy 822

PART 7 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/54483356

Edited by hafuuk - 13 years ago

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manook22

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

chimmy ill killl u ahaye likho

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nehakapoor7

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

😊 wow.. Maan is nt interesting in SAM.. then whome 😉.. lovly update.. cont. soon.. thanx for pm

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AmElOdI

@AmElOdI

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

awesome update dear
loved it
cont soon

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EmMyk

@EmMyk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

please update soon...i like your concept as well as the characters.
rocking part!! waiting for update :)😊😆

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hafuuk

@hafuuk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

PART 7

Maan- I got detention. Cant make it. First time in his life Maan couldnt stop thanking detention for coming in his way.

He freed himself and left from there before anyone else could pounce on him.

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The rest of the day was normal for both of them. Maan who was the captain of his football team spent his hours in the ground training new candidates while Geet was over-loaded by her studies. Despite being busy in their respective activities, both dreaded the detention that they were to attend after school. Not even one of them was ready to waste the two precious hours of their life in each other's presence.

Finally, the dismissal bell rang marking the end of the current school day and start of the detention hours. Both Maan and Geet headed lazily towards the detention room.

Maan was on his way to detention room when his phone rang. He checked the caller ID which showed 'Daadimaa'. He instantly answered the phone.

Maan- Ji daadimaa?

Daadima- Maan get back early.. You- Her voice was cutted when someone bumped into Maan really hard and Maan's phone landed on the floor breaking into two pieces. He looked at the intruder with anger evident in his eyes. It was Geet who was picking up her stuff from the floor which had fallen on the floor and putting them i her bag hurriedly.

Geet (st)- Jaldi jaldi hath chala geet. Is se pehle woh Dusht Danav aye. Andar bhaag ja aur chup chap se apna kaam karti rehna. With this she stood up only to get face to face with the most horrifying sight she could think of- Maan ! who was all ready to explode. Shit! she thought. Ab tou iska lathi charge hojayega. She prayed silently. She tried to slide throgh the doorway unnoticed but to her dismay Maan grabbed her wrist and pulled her towards him harshly.

Maan- what do you think of yourself? andhi ho kya? dikhta nahi hai tou eyes check karwa lo. faida hi hoga aur kuch nahi. He taunted.

Geet looked at him blankly slowly comprehending what he had just said. She blinked couple of times and tried to free herself but his grip was too tight. She looked at Maan who was looking at her intently. She felt his gaze piercing through her. She continued her struggle.

Maan (st)- What are you doing Maan? Why are you holding her like this? and when she is struggling, why are you not leaving her? Maan questioned himself as he stared at her. He didnt know why but he found her in his arms not in favour to release her. He felt some sort of current through him as he held her while she struggled. His mind was fighting with his heart to leave her but failed.

Suddenly he felt a pain in his left arm. He jerked her away from him and saw Geet running inside the room giggling to herself. What happened? he thought and looked at his arms where it was paining. His eyes turned red in rage when he glanced at his part of skin which had turned pink. It was then he realized Geet had dug her nails in his arm harshly in order to free herself. This time i wont leave her. He thought angrily and entered the Detention room.

He entered to see Geet sitting on the desk n the farthest corner of the room. He walked over to her angrily and looked at geet who seemed lost in some thoughts. Maan felt his anger vanishing. He kept looking at her getting lost yet again. ( damn )

His gaze was interrupted when someone tapped on his shoulder. He shrugged and looked to see the teacher standing behind him with arms folded over his chest while all the students present there snickered at the sight.

Teacher- what do you think you are doing young man?

Maan gave an angry look to the students who instantly froze, then answered casually- nothing. may i sit?

The teacher nodded while Maan had no other choice than to sit beside Geet who was still lost in her thoughts completely unaware of the events around her.

The teacher walked over to the front of the class, told all the students to do their homeworks and walked out of the class saying that he will keep checking them at every half hour.

Geet who was seated silently was lost in the thoughts of her family (st)- Cant i meet them once? what have i done to not deserve them? She kept thinking the same thing over and over again.

Maan who obviously had no homework looked everywhere but her. He noticed that spending time in DR wasnt as bad afterall. It was that he could get some peace over here as no one here dared to question him.

Precap- Detention continues...

So friends how was it? hope it was worth reading. 😊 😛

Comment and like to motivate me.

love, Chimmy 822

PART 8 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2801705/mg-ff-as-time-goes-by

Edited by hafuuk - 13 years ago