OS: Unbreak My Heart (Part 2 - Pg. 18) - Page 12

Hey,

Originally posted by: DarkDove

Hey,

So you must know I only read ArHi FF's of a very dear friend of mine Nanna.

This is the first story of ArHi i am commenting on not being of Nanna!

She and her stories unknowingly are compelling me to read ArHi FF's, ss's and os's...

I just recently started watching this show, but read on wikipedia whats going to happen! 😆 Silly me, i am so impatient!

So about the os you have written, I must say that your a beautiful writer, the use of words is marvelous. The way you describe emotions, feeling and thoughts, its mesmerizing to read!

This was sad, but the right ending, because it shouldn't always be like Khushi should forgive him so easily and quickly.

We should understand that she needs time to heal, he has broken her with his cruelness, punishing her something which isn't even her fault.

He cannot just come back and apologize so easily to her. He won't get out of this one with ease.

I think it was very well of Khushi to ignore his apologies and his painful sob...

I really love it! And open endings aren't always horrible! I am pretty imaginative so I can come up with a own ending for this lovely perfectly written os!

Hafiza.

Aw thank you so much for this wonderful comment! I have read your work on ArSh before and I must say you are a wonderful writer so coming from you this means a lot :)
Yes, I really hope in the show too that Khushi gives Arnav the cold shoulder for a while because he needs a taste of his own medicine :P
Thank you again for this lovely comment! :)

Loved it..!!!!Urrmm... Didn't understand the open ending part after that last line - but again, the last line is not always the end of story, is it??

Wonderful Shreya!!! Thanks for the pm. 😃😃😃😃😃

That was simply amazing !!!!!!
Felt bad for Arnav but i think he deserves it(temporarily) !!!
Loved the way you wrote it !!!!

Loved it! You described both of their emotions so well! It was beautiful!

Loved the ending! This is what Khushi should do, rather than just melt at Arnav's apologies or tears!

That was painful but sadly it ws meant to be like this...How cud khushi forgive him so easily when he did all that ruined her life completely...
Lovely..

Oh woman,you just broke my heart :(