OS: Unbreak My Heart (Part 2 - Pg. 18)

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polly_mk

@polly_mk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#121

Loved it! Very well written. Please continue.

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DarkDove

@DarkDove

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Posted: 13 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: reyabear

Aw thank you so much for this wonderful comment! I have read your work on ArSh before and I must say you are a wonderful writer so coming from you this means a lot :)
Yes, I really hope in the show too that Khushi gives Arnav the cold shoulder for a while because he needs a taste of his own medicine :P
Thank you again for this lovely comment! :)

Aaawwn thank you 😳

Omg, my comment means a lot! Thats awesome!

Hhmm, yes she should really give arnav the cold shoulder, yep he so does needs to have a taste of his own bitter medicine!

Please dear, don't thank me!

It is a pleasure to comment on such a beautifully written piece of master work!

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Maham

@Allbut1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#123

Aww that was so heartbreakingly beautiful 💔 But I am glad Khushi just didn't give in to him and her resolve didn't weaken at the sight of his tears. This is the strength we need to see from Khushi when Arnav's redemption starts because after everything he has put her through, he deserves to feel at least a fraction of that pain before things start getting better between them! Fantastic job!

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Jasleen

@Jasleen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#124

Beautiful OS Shreya! It was emotional and heartbreaking but I liked that Khushi didn't forgive Arnav.

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Sanjana

@sanjanaprincess

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Posted: 13 years ago

#125

Wow just read both the chapters and I have no words to say, it was really incredible amazing too read! I just adore your work too much! Thanks for the Pm!

Sanju :)

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notacrimetolove

@notacrimetolove

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Posted: 13 years ago

#126

Thanks for the pm!!
Even though the ending was sad, I thought it was perfect and well deserved and i hope something like this happens in the show. Good job!!

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SankaDevi20

@SankaDevi20

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Posted: 13 years ago

#127

You know, I really think Khushi should give him a hard time when she finds out! Loved this!

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Lekshmic7

@Lekshmic7

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Posted: 13 years ago

#128

Awesome!! Loved it. Continue soon

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Ishrafan11

@Ishrafan11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#129

Aww loved it so emotional.

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#130

I couldn't like from my phone.
But did like it, gosh the last sentence was so apt.
Still I will imagine that not so soon but later after much groveling and making up, Arnav will eventually heal the heart and trust he has broken;).

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