OS: Unbreak My Heart (Part 2

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tinkerbel

@tinkerbel

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Posted: 13 years ago

wow..amazing..waiting eagerly to happen such things on show..

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-Mayuri-

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Posted: 13 years ago

That was amazing! Loved it!

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nyxx

@nyxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

Awwh...I liked it! 😳

and I can surely imagine something like this happening between them down the road...

Edited by nyxx - 13 years ago

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Piya dhaliwal

@Piya.D

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

this is really good

i really think u should cont it

and if u do plz do pm me:)

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-Garima-

@-Garima-

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

Awww that was absolutely beautiful Shreya! (:

I loved it! I can't wait to see something like this in the show! :D

--Garima

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580531

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey there! I really liked the OS, especially the latter part. The breaking of Khushi's resolve is very beautifully written.

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MsCeylon

@MsCeylon

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

Beautifully written

and more likely to happen :)

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Marci

@Marci

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

It was such an awww OS, really touched my heart!!

Gosh so much pain and anguish between ArHi that I'm praying for their brighter and happier days to come soon!!

Brilliant work dear!!

Edited by Harshiti4Lyf - 13 years ago

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hararnav

@hararnav

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

have a small doubt... did khushi leave arnav or planning to leave?

sorry for askin

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Inaya Haya

@lilmzsunshine

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#10

Oh, this was great!

Loved how you started it ... without any preamble, straight to the realization.

Please do continue ...

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