OS: Unbreak My Heart (Part 2 - Pg. 18) - Page 14

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Posted: 13 years ago
very touching..
loved the last line...

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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the ending...hope we get a strong Khushi in the show
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey dear
thanks for a 2nd part
beautifully written
loved it
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
So short and so emotional!!!! Well done for not making Khushi forgive him easily!!!! Thank you :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazin os totally luvd it
plzz do continue it x
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Posted: 13 years ago
So sad! Loved the way you described his feelings.
Thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing OS!!!!!
your narration was very beautiful...
well am sure Kushi would forgive him eventually...not soon though...
loved this workk of yours😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Shrey! Nice one..

One or the other way I felt, the ending is gonna be like this! But still, it's not a perfect end to seal this, right. So I'll imagine what I want from this!

Thanks for the PM dear!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing OS!!!!!
Loved your narration...
Kushi will surely forgive him...but not so soon...
amazing work...
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Posted: 13 years ago
yea even i dont want Khushi to forgive Arnav easily... even in the show i'd be very disappointed if forgiveness is handed to him easily like typical sp serials... he has to earn it... he has to correct his mistakes... or at least grovel but mostly shud realize the extent he has ruined one gals life to protect another gal...

neway i need to stop venting out..
amazing os gal...

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