Kriyansh Reunion SS (part 10 pg74)(Completed) - Page 40

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R: Hey beautiful!!!! U r looking gorgeous. Haven't ever seen u around here.

G: Well boz am new in town..

R: well makes sense as a gal like u staying here that had not been gone unnoticed by me.

G: well that does make sense..

Kriya meanwhile shifted uncomfortably. Rey was looking in her direction and it seemed like she was invisible to him. She stood up and changed her seating position such that if anyone was standing at Rey's place he would have easily seen her.Wow so finally she wanted him to see her and approach her. feelings cant be controlled beyond an extent.Rey sensed her intention. Finally the plan was working. She was reacting in the way they had planned. As soon as she changed place he turned sideways so that he could see her and she couldn't catch him seein her. The gal placed her advances and she started opening Rey's jacket buttons. Rey was taken aback but played along

hmmm kria wil kill rey wen she comes to know trhat this was a game .


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Originally posted by: snigdha_arsha


Thanks...i wil giv a long updt den u can giv..



sure.
that would be fun.

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Kriya on the other hand was burning red in jealousy. All the soothing she was trying to do till now was not working now. She couldn't believe what she was seeing. The person for whom she had cried for the half of the last month was standing there flirting with random gals, and not seeing her. Tears were forming in he eyes. She started questioning herelf about she being a normal gal for him. The special relationship they shared was that true or a whole facade.

typical gals physcology. blamin either ourselves or the relationship be it anything from bro-sis,friendship or any other.

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Rey saw the change in expression. The anger in her eyes was now getting replaced with doubt filled with sadness. He realised that she was questioning the past time they had spent together. He knew that she was breaking up. He just had to completely shatter her. But then he saw her going to drinks counter. The attendant signalled him that she was asking for alcohol. When he refused her she went on insisting. Rey sensing trouble went to the centre stage. Every1 turned towards him, but kriya didn't.how nicely he manages the situation.

R: hello guys. Am reyaansh Singhania. Hope u r having fun. Well i have found a beautiful gal here. Her innocence, sweetness and her beauty are breathtaking. Looks like i have fallen in love. (every1 hooted. Kriya turned towards him instantly). I would like to ask her for a dance. Wish me luck guys.We all wish u luck for ur true love.


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Rey got down and he headed towards where Kriya was sitting. It seemed like to her the past 15 days didn't exist and they were where they had left their relationship. A glimmer of happiness was evident in her eyes. Rey saw that. He so desperately wanted to go there and turn that glimmer into a beam but then he walked determiningly. Th gal was standing in front of the counter where Kriya was sitting. A little distance was there. He forwarded his hand. Kriya also raised her hand meaning to take it but the she realised that the hand was meant for that gal. She stood there shocked. Tears were ready to dcome out of her eyes anytime if she blinked even a little.controlling tears is the most toughest situation dat too in front of ur loved ones.Rey cursed himself for doing so. He performed a small salsa piece with her and ended in the pose. He slowly lifted her up so they were standing straight. Kriya saw that. She remembered their dances. Rey saw her lost face. He knew this was the perfect time. He cursed himself and asked for her forgivenessgod he feels so much.Vaishu u rocked playing with emotions here.and looking in the gal's eyes he said, "You r the best dancing partner i ever had."Rey muist have had stone in his heart while saying these lines.
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That was enough. Kriya couldn't take the torment anymore. She was so sure that all the memories she had were special for her and not for him. She was just a random girl for him. She broke and went outside leaving her mobile. Rey knew that this was the perfect opportunity. He had already known that she wud leave but leaving her mobile she had made things easier for him. The only problem in his plan was how he was gonna approach her when she left the place. Yes he was sure about it that she was gonna leave the place. He had planned it perfectly. He quickly excused himself grabbed her mobile before any1 else could do and quickly made an exit and ran following her.

i had tears in my eyes while readin this.

dumb-struck to say anything over here.

gosh i know how many times i read the above parts from start of party till here.


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it was awesome the way they make a plan to convence kriya about her feeling towards rey and the challenge of smiriti to rey for convencing her the way he try to make jelous and finally the plan works and kriya accept the fact that she loves him a lot was finomenal i just loved it it was great i wish like this something would have happen in d3 also but leave it u r great just great and i have send u a buddy request plz pm me nxt update bye
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Outside the club.

It was silent. Every1 was inside enjoying and the outer place was deserted. Kriya thanked her Universeji for that an continued walking. She had seen enough. Her tears were running unstopped and her silent sobs were turning into loud ones. Rey was continuously following her cursing himself for doing that to her. She then came to a stop and sat under a tree crying.rey must have had more pain dan kria seeing her this way.

god someone plz console both.


K: Universeji aapne aisa kyun kiya? Kyun laaye unhe meri zindagi jab aapko pata tha ki main unke liye koi maine nhi rakhti. Meri hi galti thi ki maine unhe pne itna paas aane diya. Unki toh aadat hai na logon ke dilon ke saath khelne ki. Kyun par main hi kyun??


vaishu iska ans tu hi jane.


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Rey was there listening to her. He couldn't bear those allegations. How dare she was questioning his love. But he controlled himself as he knew she was just facing a turmoil within her.The turmonoil in them was more now.

K: Universeji aisa mere saath kyun hota hain. Mera dil kyun toda aapne aise ki ab woh kbhi theek nhi ho sakta.

Rey decided to come out.

Finally he came out.



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R: Tumhare saath wahi huya jot um deserve karti thi.

K (shocked. Gets up): Aa.. Aap yahan kya kar rhe ho. Mujhe follow kar rhe ho..

R: Plz mere pass use bhi acche kaam hai. Main toh tumhe tumhara phone lautane aaya tha. Tumhare "Acche dost" Swayam ka phone aaya tha na. Use tum se kuch kaam tha.

K: Aapko mera mobile kaise mila.

R: Tum vahan chod ke aa gayi thi. Issliye dene aa gaya.

K(takes it) : Thanks.

R: Its okay. (pauses) Vaise yeh mere matlab kit oh baat nhi hai lekin fir bhi puch rha hun ki tum vaapas ka baa rhi ho. Woh tumhare dost tumhe bahut yaad karte hain..

K: (slightly) Aur aap!!

R (hears it. Thinks main toh tumhe hamesha yaad karta hun) : main kyun karunga. Y do u even expect it? U know used ki huyi cheezon ko jab chod diya jaata haina toh unse kuch hope nhi karna chahiye. Vaise bhi tumhara accha dost Swayam hai na tumhe yaad karne ke liye and tumhari team bhi hai..

K: main nhi aa rhi...

R: what!! Well mujhe sun ke tajjub nhi huya. It was expected. Aakhir tumhe tumhara sapna toh mil gaya na famous hone ka and as expected tum toh unhe chod hi dogi. Well it wasn't that surprising u know.

R: (Kriya just turns away. Her tears are flowing away) u know muh modne se sacchai nhi badal jayegi. Maan lo u r a complete fake.

K: ( couldn't control herself) main fake hun. Fake toh aap ho Mr. Reyaansh Singhania. U know main bevakuf thi jo aapko accha samjha. Aapke liye itna bura feel kiya itne din.

R: Tumne mere liye tears bahaye. Oh plz isse bada joke koi aur nhi ho sakta.


Gosh these lines must have broken both .

kria hearin it nd rey tellin it to his love.


heart breaking lines.


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