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He had strictly instructed every1 not to serve any alcoholic drink to her. He then took a last look over the club and he had planned everything on where he was supposed to stay so that he cud keep an eye on her. He smiled to himself and once again patted himself for such a good plan. Though he was sure that everything would turn out to be perfect but then also he prayed to Universeji to help him

Shiould he have restricted it in the party itself.
no alcohol parties no worries..
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The party started around 7. It was an exclusive and a lavish party. One of the best parties that had been organized in the city. Every1 wanted to go. Kriya also reached there. She was wearing a beautiful red dress. Boys who saw her couldn't take off their eyes from her. Every1 was excited to go to the party. Kriya got an entry as she had the pass. The club was amazingly set up for the party. No one could remain untouched by the aura. It was the perfect place for partying at the same time hang out with friends. The dance floor was bursting with lifeAkhir rey neh jo organise kiya hai it has to be ming blowing.. But Kriya couldn't enjoy it. She had come just for her mother. No one approached her calling out her by her name so she assumed that the grandson was not there.he is der but she didnt see him. Though she found 2-3 of her friends but they were busy checking out the party. Kriya on the other hand was feeling out of the place as the party reminded her of Shivam's party and how she had come there just for Rey. Unknowingly a smile crept upon her face but soon it vanished as she was pulled back to the harsh reality that they were no longer today. She was feeling lonely among the huge crowd.Everything reminds her of Rey.She has her best minutes with him.
How she wished to just go back to the meadow dance her heart out so that she could get temporarily get rid of some of her pain. Yes temporarily as she knew that the pain was having a permanent resident in her heart. It could only be removed if she was with Rey and that was impossible.Nothin is impossible to a willing heart.

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Wow asma...u r really so sweet to giv dis many comments...

I really appreciate it n Im sure vaishu wud b more happy seeing dis amny reviews by u..

Really u r such a swthrt..

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K: (to herself) Kriya yeh sab sochna band kar de. Jo ho nhi sakta uske bare mein kyun sochna. Yeh sab teri galti thi ki tu uske pyaar mein padi.y is it she always blames herself.

But her heart screamed as she told the biggest lie to herself. Though it was her mistake to fall in love with me but it was a mistake that she would love to do again and would risk everything for it . A thing she never regretted in her life. The only thing she regretted was her life becoz she broke someone's heart. No not broke she crushed someone's. Someone for whom she would do anything.

K: I have to stop thinking about it. Maine woh raasta chuna hai and ab main peeche nhi mud sakti.Truth can nvr be hidden. it has to come outy once.


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She was lost in herself and she never realised that her sweet mistake was standing there and observing her. When she had entered in the party he had seen her and was completely smitten by her. If he had not been in love beforehand he would have surely fallen for her now seeing her wearing such a beautiful dress with that angelic face which under normal circumstances would have a worn a glow that he would kill for. He saw her but felt like someone was torturing him in his heaven as she sadness imprinted on her face. Oh! How he wished to go to her, console her, hug her, dance with her, talk to her and remove sadness from her life. Then he came back to the reality and then he cursed himself for thinking of the plan he was so proud of until minutes ago before her entry. He knew that a part of his plan was to give her more sadness. He somehow mustered up the courage to execute his plan as he could not fall weak now.


i'm sp[eechless after readin thise klines.

CV's plz learn something from her.

Rey looked over her and a muttered a "sorry" to her and then made a grand entry to the party. When he entered the party the lights went dim, Kriya stiffened and soon the spotlight was over Rey who came down from the stage. Before Kriya could get a glimpse of him girls surrounded him. Kriya shrugged away and again went to her own world of self-brooding. The same feeling that had crept in her when she had visited the orphanage started hovering over her but she brushed it aside. But soon she was forced to reality as the crowd of girls started chanting solemnly "Rey".She feels his presence even though she didnt see him.

hope she sees him soon.


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Originally posted by: snigdha_arsha

Wow asma...u r really so sweet to giv dis many comments...

I really appreciate it n Im sure vaishu wud b more happy seeing dis amny reviews by u..

Really u r such a swthrt..



aww thank u so much snigdha.
she deserved it.
i knew under wat pressure she wrote it.

so this is jus a way of expressing thanks to her work.

i would soon do it to urs too.
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Kriya stood rooted to the place. She could not believe what she was hearing. She felt a sudden rush within her. A rush she felt when he was close to her. Her heartbeat increased. She suspected that he was there. Though she wanted to believe it badly but her mind didn't allow her to do so giving her all the reasons in the world. Wanting to put an end to all her speculations she turned towards where the girls were standing. Every single figment of her body hoped that he wasn't there but also clinging to the possibility of him being there. And then she saw him. The person who she had missed like hell, who had made it impossible for her to live her life becoz he was no longer a part of it and the one whose smile could make her day and for whose sweetness and caring attitude she yearned to experience was standing in front of her. She so wanted to go and hug him, ask for his forgiveness for breaking his heart and experience the ultimate pleasure of dancing with him, yes the ultimate pleasure becoz now dance didn't give her pleasure but dancing with him gave her the happiness she couldn't define. The mere sight of him had eased her off of half of her pain and the glow was coming back.


vaishu i'm really sorry i cant comment on these lines. its par excellence.

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Rey was standing there surrounded by the girls but his mind was surrounded by only one who stood there in front of her. The pain going of was visible on her face. He was cursing himself for not doing this before as he was witnessing that how deeply he affected her that his mere sight was washing her off of her sadness. He stood there pretending to not to look at her but thru the corner of his eyes he was constantly glaring her and noticing her every action.


he must have had mixed feelind of both joy and sorrow.

joy that his presence affected her nd sorrow that he cannot comfort her at the moment.


Kriya so wanted to go to him but she stopped herself as she thought that her going in front would only open his wounds. She thought that she would just stand there admiring him and having her happiness. Meanwhile Rey started his work. He came at a distance that she could hear him. He started flirting with the girls surrounding him.


rey must have gone through more pain than kria for doing this to her.


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Originally posted by: asmaju



aww thank u so much snigdha.
she deserved it.
i knew under wat pressure she wrote it.

so this is jus a way of expressing thanks to her work.

i would soon do it to urs too.


Thanks...i wil giv a long updt den u can giv..

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G1: Hey rey thanks for throwing such a wonderful party.

G2: yeah Rey its going to be the bestest party ever.

R: Of course it would be. After all these arrangements have been done for all u beauties to enjoy.its nt all beauties jus one beauty the love of his life.

Kriya ws seeing them. Though a spark of jealousy was coming in her heart but she controlled it. She calmed herself stating that she no longer had the right to get jealous. Rey saw that it wasn't working. He grudgingly took it to the next level. He grabbed a random girl from his side and started whispering something to whichthat girl could only smile and blush. Kriya stiffened. He tried to calm herself and in the process use her hands and rey saw that and was glad his plan was working. Then to add icing to a cake, a sexy gal came to Rey and placed a kiss on his cheeks. Rey also smiled. Kriya saw this and a current of jealousy rode through her body.


phew both r going through so much main for each other.

kria is jealous but wil she show it or again control her emotions???


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