Kriyansh Reunion SS (part 10 pg74)(Completed) - Page 38

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Posted: 13 years ago

R: aunty aap jaante ho woh aise hi jaane degi mujhe.

Sm: u r getting it wrong beta. Woh nhi khegi that's for sure and iss baar usse bulvana pehle se bhi zyada kathin hoga yeh tum bhi jaante ho. Am saying just show her that Reyaansh Singhania jispe saari ladkiyan marti hain and woh bhi. Woh possessive hain she would either not face u and avoid u or ya fir woh tumse baat kregi jismein se pehla option zyada probable hain.

Rey gets her and instantly a plan emerges in his mind a perfect plan that was full-proof.Finally he got a plan. ab kya hai.chalo aage padthe hai.


R (hugs Smriti. Smriti is taken aback): thank u aunty. Mujhe pata chal gaya main use kaise kehlvake rhunga. Pehle socha tha ki use propose krunga u know ek-dum filmy but nahi this time she would be the one who would say it first and woh bhi apne-aap. Aakhirkaar am The Reyaansh Singhania and koi bhi ladki mere iss form ko zyada der tak resist nhi kar sakti and baatcutter ke case mein woh isse zyada der tak seh nhi sakti. She is way too possessive for it and ek second mein jealous ho jaati hain. Thanks mom. (realises what he said) am sorr...Mom bulane ki practise kar lo.kaam ayega.

Sm: its okay tum mujhe mom bula sakte ho. And jitni madad main tumhari kar rhi hun utni toh maine apni beti ki bhi nhi ki. (laughs) Chalo lets make this interesting kyun na bet lagate hain. ( Rey confused). I mean tumne plan bana liya hai na. (Rey nods). So i challenge u ki tum usse kal tak confess karvake dikhao uske baad karvaya toh it doesn't count. If u win then tum jab chaho usse mil sakte ho without even my permission i mean any time bina chhabilal bane ( Rey embarrassed) but if u lose then tumhe mujhse hamesha puchna padega before meeting her and main nab hi keh sakti hun and yeh mat sochna ki main tumhari madad kar rhi hunt oh iske baad bhi utni hi acchi bani rhungi matlab mujhe apni reputation bhi toh banaye rkhni hai.Nice challenge.Agar jit jao tho ...

R: Challenge accepted. And Reyaansh Singhani kbhi haarta nhi hain.

Sm: We will see. (smiles and then shakes hands.)

Rey: So miss Kriya ghai just be ready kal tum hamesha ke liye forever miss baatcutter nahi.. meri baatcutter ban jaogi.She is always urs.


He sees her pic in the mobile kisses it and goes back to sleep contented with his plan and determined to get it completed.jus a night left 4 u both to be one again.


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Ghai Residence (Morning):

Smriti was preparing herself for the task that Rey had given to her. She had assured Rey that she would manage but she was a little doubtful herself but she cudn't tell in front of Rey who was creating havoc there at his house.kria se usi mom bhi nervous hai.

Rey had already told the basics of the plan to Smriti as she would be the one completing the first and the most important step. Rey was fully assured that his plan would work out flawlessly. The humungous task was to convince Kriya. For this he needed Smriti. Smriti also agreed without any hesitation as this would bring a smile at Kriya's face. If that goes well then everything was a piece of cake he was sure about it. After the last one year he could have easily written a thesis on Kriya's moods. Smriti was also convinced that plan would work.Reys plan for kria are always the best..

Smriti reassured Rey who was getting out of his mind thinking Kriya wouldn't agree that she would convince Kriya but at the same time was a little bit skeptical about it. Leaving everything aside the she prepared herself for the convincing that had to follow.

S: Kriya beta utho. Its 8...

K: ma plz thodi der aur sone do na...

S:no ways. Tum picchle ek ghante se yehi bol rhi ho. Chalo go get fresh tab tak main nashta lagati hun..

Kriya goes to freshen up while smriti sets up the table and prepares herself for the upcoming event.

K: maa bhuk lagi hai!!!!

S: haan yeh lo..typical mom daughter dialog.


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She gives her food and then sits besides her. Kriya senses that something was cooking up as her mother was constantly fidgeting. She prepares hersself for a shock but then she remembers that now nothing could affect her.Kria knows her mom so well.

K: ma kya huyaa??? Aap aise kyun baithe ho...

S: Kriya woh actually mujhe tujhse kuch...

K: haan bolo na ma...

S:kal jab hum orphanage gaye the na. I realised something..

K: kya huya ma...

S: beta i want u to start dancing again. Main tujhe nhi rokungi..

Kriya almost spills the food out of her mouth. She could not digest the fact. Smriti smiles inwardly seeing her face. She so wanted to tell her even about Rey but she didn't as she had agreed with Rey on the fact that dher saari khush se pehle thoda dukh zaruri hota hai as issi se humein uski true value pata chalti hai.the biggest shock in her life..

true sachi khushi ko mehasus karne ke liye kasht lena padtha hai.


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K: kya ma????

S: haan tumne sahi suna. Kal jaab mein vahan gayi thi and jab maine aunty, rahul, sonia and Mrs. Singhania se baat ki so they made me realise that ki main tumhare saath galat kar rhi thi. I mean dekho maine tumhe dance se issliye roka kyunki tumhare andar jo uske liye junoon tha mujhe darr tha kahin woh tumpe haavi an ho jaye and iske chalte tum koi galat faisla na lelo jisse tumhara future na barbaad ho jaaye. Lekin last year mein tumne yeh prove kara ki tum donon cheezein manage kar sakti ho. Dekho abhi tak jo tumne acheive kiya usmein ek darr tha lekin ab main chahti hun ki tum uss darr ke bina ki mujhe pata chal jayega isse kai zyada acheive karo. And jab tum apne pure mann ke saath kaam karogi toh am sure u wud acheive pinnacles of success.



tooo emotional lines.

her mom loves her so much.


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Kriya was speechless. Her mother was giving her the permission to live in her dream no live in a dream which was supposed to be her life till last year but now which was empty becoz he was not there. Till last year it was her ultimate desire that could light up her world due to her burning need for it. She could go to any extent for it. But now it was dark and bleak. The light from her dream was no longer available rather it couldn't light up her life becoz the power of doing it laid in the hands of someone else. She so desperately wanted to share this with him, but alas she couldn't as she had distanced herself from him. A distance which could not be travelled now but little did she know that the distance had already been covered and a small step was left for it which she had to intake. But still she couldn't hide the pain that she felt becoz of that empty desire to share it with him.

Smriti saw that she was lost. She did expect that but she was still cliging to the hope that this news would lighten her up but no. She had understood it long back and this confirmed that her light was Rey and he could only bring it back. Smriti then decided to execute next part of the plan.



Rey must have been with her.

my god she has so much.

now she cant even dance since he is not with him.

but smriti must be bit contended that the light of kria's life is gonna come back soon.


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Sm: lagta hain tumhe vishwas nhi huya iss baat ka and i think tumne mujhe iss baat ke liye maaf nhi kiya ki maine tumhe dance karne se roka. Tum abhi bhi mujhse gussa ho. Main hun hi itni buri..

Kriya came back to reality and saw that her mother was blaming herself. She couldn't allow that.

K: Kisne kaha aap buri ho. Aap toh duniya ki best mom ho. And maaf karne ki baat toh woh aapne sahi kaha main aapko maaf nhi kar sakti.

S:(shocked) Kya????

K (controls her laugh but then breaks off): ab main gussa thi hi nhi toh aapko maaf kaise karun...

S: so tu khush hai na bata...

Kriya shows fake smile to cover up the lack of enthusiasm to the news. Smriti senses that though she was happy but she wasn't fully happy. She feels sad. She wanted to chide her for lying to her again but then she controls it and the saves it for future when she could easily scold her for hiding her pain. Kriya breaks her thoughts.

Kria is doing so much for her mom.

Vaishu u protrayed the mother-daughter relation so well.


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K: ma kahan kho gayi. Off course main khush hun... (dramatically) Aapko mujh pe vishvas nhi hain kya.

S: Hai na beta lekin fir bh kbhie-2 lagta hai tub hut dukhi hai batati nhi hai..

K: Nhi ma aisa kuch nhi hai...

S: accha theek hai lekin tumhe ek baat manni padegi tbhi main samjhungi that u r happy..

K: yeh toh blackmail hai... chalo theek hai..this always works.

S: u have to go to a party. Here's the pass. Mrs. Singhania ka grandso tumhe pick karne aane wala the lekin use kuch kaam aa gaya. He wud directly meet u there. Tension mat lo woh tumhe pehchaan lega. Just go and enjoy there.. okay. (she speaks in one go not allowing kriya to protest)

K (shocked): maa par mujhe parties pasand nhi hai.. and aap mujhe bhej rhe ho??


kya kare akhir plan execute joh karna hai.


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S: betaji close ur mouth. And haan i want u to enjoy. And agar tumne mana kiya then main samjhungi tumne mujhe maaf nhi kiya... (makes a fake angry face)

K: okay ma...

S: yeh lo (gives her credit card)jaake koi acchi dress khareed lo. If u don't want it theek hai but iske baad kuch maangna mat...

K: no ma i wud take it.. (grabs it)

Kriya was getting shocks of her life continuously. She sensed something was wrong lekin the happiness at her mother's face cleared her doubts about that..



Wah credit card de diya?/

Is she going out alone now for shopping???


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Evening. At the club.

Rey was instructing every1 about the party. He was wearing a dress similar to that he wore in Shivam's party. Hewanted everything to turn out to be perfect plus Smriti had set up some ground rules for him to follow which he intended to do. He remembered the convo:


Rules yaha bhi.

😉

S: dekho maine use bhej diya hai. Sab kuch ho gaya na.

R: mom aap tension mat lo. Use manana imp. Tha jo aapne bahut acche se kar diya. Can't believe ki aape use emotional blackmail kiya ise. Wish main wahan hota dekhne ke liye.S even i wanted u to see it.

S: beta thoda sabra rakho..

R: sab.. what??

S: bhagwaan aajkal ke bacche. Have patience beta. Kal se if ur plan works out tum sab dekh paoge ki kitni blackmaling hoti hain. Thode din mein tum bhi usmein shamil ho jaoge. Tumhari daadi and kriya toh sabse zyada karti hai. Have patience.

patience pays.


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R: okay. Chalo bye.

S: rey hold on...

R: haan...

S: see rey main tumhare plan mein saath se rhi hun lekin i want to set some ground rules:

1. She shudn't drink. Agar mujhe pata chala that she did drink then am telling u mujhse bura koi nhi hoga tumhare liye.

2. Plz thoda uspe nazar rkhna. I mean zyada gusse mein aa gayi toh woh kuch ulta-seedha na kar baithe. So just keep an eye on her.

Rey was abt to say something. But smriti cuts in b/w.

S: i know tumhari nazar sirf usi pe rhegi am just saying thoda uske aas-paas bhi nazar rkhna. U know woh gusse bhut impulsively act kr deti hai..

Typical mom worries.


R: tension mat lijiye. Woh puri tarah theek rhegi.. i promise..

haan akhir she is more imp than her life.


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