OS: Boundaries Crossed

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Siva

@siva2901

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Nice & very well written👏

Gonna killl that Snake 😡

Arnav so cute

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lara3110

@lara3110

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Absolutely magnificent. So intense and I liked the way Khushi defended herself from Shyam and the way, she stabbed Shyam's legs with the broken glass bottle. Marvelous.

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taniks

@taniks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Wonderful , extremely interesting pls pm me with update

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littlemoi

@littlemoi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Woah.. that was intensive!! I LOVED IT!!

Thank you soo much for the pm!!

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Krani

@Krani

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+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

LOVED IT! :D

Amazing job at showing her anguish and Arnav's worry!

Wish Khushi had told him how she did not want him to touch her, and he forced himself, how he kept following her, so Arnav would get it in his head that she always hated Shyam. But I think that was sign enough for him :)

Really enjoyed reading it! :)

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exoLarmy

@exoLarmy

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

no words can describe how amazing this OS was !!!

wow! absolutely WOW! the powerful words and the pain was just unbearable!!!

now i can breath in peace coz there is someone that feels her agony and takes her sorrow away!! and that is no other than the hero himself ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA !!!

love the way he said " your Khushi Singh Raizada, wife of Arnav singh Raizada"

"I, your Husband will give you justice"

"bow to you molten_lava for such a beautifully written OS"

Thank you !!

much love

kiran xxx