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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Whoaa, that was really intense!! LOVED IT!! I loved the 'do you trust me' phrase in the last para! Reallyyy well written!! :)

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Mona

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Awesome loved it thanks for the pm!!

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larina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

For once, the hero didn't just come and bash up the villain :P

I love how you portrayed the fact that even though Khushi was weak, she was still strong enough to get away from Snakewa. And I love how Arnav was able to sense that even when Khushi DIDN'T do anything, there was still something wrong :)

Beautiful OS :)

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haminasto

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

this was WOW!!!!..👏👏👏👏👏👏...yes it was dark ..but then again it was passionate in its treatment😳...
maybe the show cant involved it but its one heck of a story honey...i just loved it...esp that Khushi didnt gave up...sometimes struggles do succeed👍🏼...

n OMG!!!!...the way Arnav went with "you are Khushi Arnav Singh Raizada"...impeccable...he was marvelous...⭐️

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desikalakaar

@desikalakaar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

That was reallly good!

It made my eyes misty yaar!

SO GOOOD! :D

PLEASE I BEG OF YOU WRITE ANOTHER ONE

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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

omg dat was sooo intense...absolutly lovd it pliz continue n pm me if u update pliz

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angellovergirl

@angellovergirl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

I loved it!

can you please carry on updating - cnt wait to read more

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Fatemah

@KC294

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

beautiful :D Its a soo heart wrenching and emotional

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lucky

@redsky

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

very well written and dark. I liked it.

Keep on writing

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dumas

@dumas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#40

that was intense the bas***d almost raped her thank god she never gave up and fought him that was so heartbreaking and sad hope arnav kills him loved it thanks for the pm

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