OS: Boundaries Crossed

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Ally

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

Wonderful OS.

I loved the display of raw emotion in this fic

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hadiqua

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

tum theek ho??...urghhh tht line always makes me fluteirsh

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#113

man that was scary
what with that crazed freak
but she got away in time
funny he hates her and yet he cant help but worry about her
good he was there for her

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aquagal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#114

This was nice. And yeah you proved brilliantly otherwise to everyone who thinks Arnav is a monster because he is not. Yes he is high-handed and sometimes blind to not see the truth and here I would say blind to his own heart because yes he had always doubted in his heart his own action of thinking Khushi as the person capable of hurting his Di and a person who can seduce a married man.
I hope to see a sequel sort of this OS someday.

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ayu_tripathi

@ayu_tripathi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#115

wow..!! this was something..my heart sobbed for the two poor souls...loved how he stayed back just to comfort her with his presence..i hate shyam..my god I think I actually have never hated anyone so much as much I hate that character😡😡.. beautiful story..!!👏👏

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lara3110

@lara3110

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Posted: 11 years ago

#116

Great Os. Loved it

Also read MovingvOn. That was very emotional, especially from Arnav,
'S side. At least he got a kiss from his son. Thanks, dear. Keep writing n smiling.

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ipkndlover75

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Posted: 10 years ago

#117

Certainly different writing!!!... Hate Shyam the lecher though... Loved the way Arnav supported khushi in the end...

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Arshirox97

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Posted: 10 years ago

#118

Wow! Sigh! This was so beautiful!! No one else can tend her wounds other than Arnav! Loved it completely! How much he ever tries to hate her but his heart comes back to her! Loved the way you described the whole plot! This was applaudable! Really! 👏