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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#851

edit above one post...

plz..

dis is ma res

~~EDITED~~

so beautiful beautiful ud, .. more thrilling den romantic,

n i like dis some times...

but still chand veer romance ws cheery on cake...

so frm strt,

chandini is finally loving him openly,.. her lips belong to him..

☺️

very sweet of her...

so finally veer has wrld's best choco wid him...

veer is more leaned to complete his sleep...

hehehehe.juz like me...

🥱.. we both sleepy heads r heads of our club-- bande loyal to sleep.. :P

cute scene,

bechari chale chale yeh kahan aa gyi???

so here is ma bhootani aunty, hmmm.. i like her...

good, chandini cud fight her wid spirituality...

👏.. is a gonna b a brave wife of veer..

he wil b proud of her, n me too...

veer got injury due to dat bhootani aunty...

aaeeeiii. bhootani aunty, stay away frm him...

kamini is really irritating a times, everything to her is omen.. cn she eva say something good abt rains, coz i lov rains...

specially doing CHAMM CHAMM in rain...

ok, den veer is missing her, ...

he is cming soon to meet her, lets see hw will she react his injury...

and really waiting when veer will tell dat she is his savior to her itself...😳

ud soon di, lov u

Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago

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disha

@disha15

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#852

I was waiting for the update! 😃

Will come bk wid comment.

edited.

kaala saaya kiska tha? 😲 god thats spooky 😲 and veer got hurt 😭 nahhiii

and chandni wont talk now,obvi,veer ne phone pe kyun aise baat ki thi wen she had called 😡 why oh why veer?! 😔 now wen he has somethin so imp to tell,she wont talk 😒

im so sad now,i want cutewaala romance,not jhagda n misunderstanding 🥺

but now veer is going to meet her na 😳 ahem di u know what i love ☺️ next update mein..umm.. 😍

Edited by disha15 - 13 years ago

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Radhika Sharma

@ridzzi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#853

that was thrilling...but i have thought that you will start from very next moment of their ahem ahem but you didn't...ok from start...

chandu is only thinking about him...she called him and he was not bothered to talk to her,,,,,,,,,he was caring for his sleep instead of her...what kinda b/f he is...????????...

and chandu went on walking without knowing where she was heading...ab veer k baare main itna sochogi toh aisa hi hoga hi na...

and that bhootani ...phir a gayi...she was behind chandu and veer too...but chandu is really an angel...she saved herself and veer too...haye...

and loved last part...now chand has to pay for her rude attitude...n we are going to have some more romantic scenes of veer n chandu...

continue soon...

luv u...😊

Edited by ridzzi - 13 years ago

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sweetnandu

@sweetnandu

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#854

lovely update ..and an interesting one too..

Edited by sweetnandu - 13 years ago

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Sonali

@sonalimurat

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#855

Nice part Dhanvidi

n little bit scary

but glad to know that Chndini thinking abt veer , their last night

He called her n want to meet

wow

n that shadow trapped both veer n chandini ohh noo

update soon

wating

thanx for pm

love u

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Mayuri Dev

@mddmayuri

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#856

amazing ud dhanvi...

story is getting very interesting with each ud...

continue soon..

luv u..

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#857

Lovely ud by lovely writer, thanx for it but one correction chand, "dear its not just ur lips but ur mind, body nd soul all belongs Veer nd Veer only."

now i m sure dat my veer boy will make chandu regret for her attitude.

Edited by samu_khamkar - 13 years ago

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Shreya

@sparksfly

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#858

wow !!

thnx 4 updtng di !!!

Chandni is openly admtng dat she is in LUV wid him !! yay !!

her nervousness...xactmnt 2 meet Veer !!

Veer a damsel is w8ng 4 u n ur slepng !!!! get up !!!

SO much mystry di !!!

wat happnd 2 both of dem...??

Chandni...wid evil shadow...n horrbl weathr...Veer being pulld...n head injury ????

now plzz reaveal sum thngs di !!!

luvd d last part...now Veer wil go 2 meet her... n wel get sum romantic scene !!

luv u di !!!

tc..

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Bells.E.cullen

@Bells.E.cullen

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#859

that was really really thrilling...
her lips belongs 2 veer... how sweet...
really very very nice update plz continue soon...
thnx 4 d pm...

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#860

Originally posted by: ridzzi
that was thrilling...but i have thought that you will start from very next moment of their ahem ahem but you didn't...ok from start...

di strting padke tho🥺 mera bhi dil tut gya,💔

maine bhi socha tha ki vahan se strt hoga🥺