SHIKAR (A Dangerous Love Story) RTMC FF 39 on 148 - Page 88

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ridzzi

that was thrilling...but i have thought that you will start from very next moment of their ahem ahem but you didn't...ok from start...

chandu is only thinking about him...she called him and he was not bothered to talk to her,,,,,,,,,he was caring for his sleep instead of her...what kinda b/f he is...????????...
and chandu went on walking without knowing where she was heading...ab veer k baare main itna sochogi toh aisa hi hoga hi na...
and that bhootani ...phir a gayi...she was behind chandu and veer too...but chandu is really an angel...she saved herself and veer too...haye...
and loved last part...now chand has to pay for her rude attitude...n we are going to have some more romantic scenes of veer n chandu...
continue soon...
luv u...😊

thanks for the lovely comments sweetie...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetnandu

lovely update ..and an interesting one too..

thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sonalimurat

Nice part Dhanvidi

n little bit scary
but glad to know that Chndini thinking abt veer , their last night
He called her n want to meet
wow
n that shadow trapped both veer n chandini ohh noo
update soon
wating
thanx for pm
love u

Hey sweetie...thanks a lot for the lovely comments...will surely update soon... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks dear...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mddmayuri

amazing ud dhanvi...

story is getting very interesting with each ud...
continue soon..
luv u..

thanks a lot dear... will continue soon...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: samu_khamkar

Lovely ud by lovely writer, thanx for it but one correction chand, "dear its not just ur lips but ur mind, body nd soul all belongs Veer nd Veer only."

now i m sure dat my veer boy will make chandu regret for her attitude.

thanks a lot dear...you comments are much appreciated...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sparksfly

wow !!

thnx 4 updtng di !!!
Chandni is openly admtng dat she is in LUV wid him !! yay !!
her nervousness...xactmnt 2 meet Veer !!
Veer a damsel is w8ng 4 u n ur slepng !!!! get up !!!
SO much mystry di !!!
wat happnd 2 both of dem...??
Chandni...wid evil shadow...n horrbl weathr...Veer being pulld...n head injury ????
now plzz reaveal sum thngs di !!!
luvd d last part...now Veer wil go 2 meet her... n wel get sum romantic scene !!
luv u di !!!
tc..

thanks a lot darling for such sweet comments...whenever i go through the comments i feel so happy...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Bells.E.cullen

that was really really thrilling...
her lips belongs 2 veer... how sweet...
really very very nice update plz continue soon...
thnx 4 d pm...

thank you so much dear...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks dear...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: princesspriyart

waooo kya ud tha 😉
di hmne to socha thoda ahem ahem scene milenge 😳
pr nhi mile 🤣
chand khoing in veer k khayalo me 😳
chlte chlte kha hm aa gye
pta ni kha aa gye 😕
poor chand
ye bhootni aunty ji kha se tapak gai 😈
ye to veer k piche thi
ab yha bhi tapak gai
ye chand ki grany bhi na 🤣
ooo veer ko lag gai
ye bhootni aunty ji dono jgh ek sath aa gai kya 😕

yupi veer chand se milega
or fir
fir
ahem ahem 😳
vaise veer chand ko kina stata h
or prithvi nandu ko
prithvi n shikar 2 sbse fav ff
dono hi mujhe psnd h 😊
dono boys (prithvi n veen) dono girls (nandu n chand) ko state rhte h

dono apni man mani krte h royals khi k

dono di mujhe bhut prsnd h
bs ek indifference h

dhanvi di ud jldi deti h 😃
achi wali di
luv u di
ina sara 🤗

n ranju di rula rula kr deti h 😭
bt stil luv her

hey sweetie...oh that's so sweet of you...😊...thanks for appreciating...luv u 🤗

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