SHIKAR (A Dangerous Love Story) RTMC FF 39 on 148 - Page 70

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: samu_khamkar

Thanx dear for d second installment of ud in dis week, now i know u'll ud in next week , i'll wait till then...

Abt update, ye bhi baki parts ke tarah ekdum jakas hai. Well maneka shud understand dat chand is madly in love (though she deny dis fact) nd when some1 is in love all rationality goes for a toss... Now chand will go to rajasthan, one request Dhanvi plz veer ko bhi bhejo na uske saath. Dono ke sare doubts clear ho jayenge nd they will get all answers to their question.

Actually wat i was thinking dat ,u all writters here are superb in ur writting. U all write far better stories den professional writters. I mean u, ranju, ruchi,rashmi, prehika, pranita nd yes rashmi u all r fab just fab.

Rt nd Mc kitne lucky hai ke unke fans itne talented hai aur unse itna pyaar karte hai

that is so sweet of you..😊...i am getting pm's to update the story today..😕...i will try and update Shikar today if possible...i am glad you liked the story... thank you so so much dear...much appreciated... yes we all are crazy fans of this couple...😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mddmayuri

mind blowing ud dhanvi...

first of all i luved their watches ...
luved their scenes ... i think chandu ka gussa utar raha hai...
and another twist in the tale...a stone mystery...
n chandni is going to rajastan...superb... i hope veer would accompany her...
continue soon...
luv u

thanks dear... will try and continue soon... luv u 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetshera

awesome update

thank God Veer acted sensibly
woah! wat was that? And veer dear she's not doing ne drama. She was the one to save u frm approaching death.
Okay frm Acharya ji's words it seems like chandni was the queen and veer the king and also that might be the king was innocent
i so hope chandni visits mehrangarh soon n we get 2 know the whole thing as a whole n not in bits n pieces.
update soon

thank you so much dear...

lets see what happens next, will try and update soon...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shafyyy

wow.. that was indeed very


nice update...

thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tejjo

awesome update di
maze aa gye
loved veer n chand scene
sorry 4 late comment
update soon
luv u di

Thanks for such lovely comments...will try and update soon... luv u sweetie...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: divinedivy

AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME👏
this was 1 of the best updates ever.. so very interesting & intriguing... 1dum mazza aa gaya padte padte..😃😃i could actually visualise & feel the scene & d emotions felt by ver & chandni
looking forward for more mysteries unravelling.. the story is going fantastic..
u r doing a great job... 👍🏼



oh ...that's a surprise comment from you Divya...thanks...loved reading it...i am glad you are liking the story...and i loved reading your lovely comments...thanks dear...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: disha15

Reserved.
Weee :D i love you di for updating so fast! 🤗 ok ok ok im gonna read now!will get bk to you 😉

EDITED.
looovvved this part! 🤗 🤗 🤗

"i am not good...but I am not that bad" he pushed her away...
Awww..humaara Veer kitna badal gaya hai! He is sooo different with her! 😳

Veer was about to leave...but he couldn't see her crying...


slowly he bend down, touched her shoulders...astonishingly she looked at him...his eyes were moist...she couldn't see danger in his eyes anymore...

I loved everything bout these three lines!Veer caring for her..n his moist eyes? 😭 plus,finally this woman doesnt see danger in him!god!finally! 😆

Veer immediately came out of the car... Chandni hold his hand... "thank God you are safe"

Veer didn't understood anything... "what do you mean??? is this a drama or what??"

Chandni angrily looked at him "drama!!!... there was something behind you...as if grabbing your neck..."

"what???? my neck!!!" he laughed... "i don't mind if that's your ghost...well I must admit you haunt me at night" he smiled...

😆 😆 ok so im thinkin this is some supernatural stuff going on..so..cool..but this Veer na 😆

"i don't know...but I feel my life is incomplete...something is missing from my life."

dumbo..VEER is missing from ur life 😛 you have to STOP shutting him out 🤢


her mind wasn't listening to her heart...it was not only Veer but it was only and only Veer that she was thinking about...

Awww 😳 Loved this line di!

"rains are uncertain as our life is"

How true!!!

she should be happy that she's away from the monster instead she' s missing him...what is this feeling...was she falling in love with him... "no..." she said

DENIAL is such a 🤬 thing u know! 😡 woman,accept it,you love him! 😳

Veer thought about having another drink when he looked at the watch he was wearing...he looked at a small black button and pressed it...
Chandni was startled... "oh no." the stone fell from her hands... and broke into two pieces... "what is this sound"... it was a long beep... she looked around... then realized the watch on on her dressing table... she picked up the watch and remembered the similar watch she gave to Veer...

😃 i love you for dis scene di! 😆


"wow sweetheart...this watch really works..." he smirked...

I friggin love this guy! 😃 pssst.every gal secretly wants the bad guy 😉 (i mean Veer is the hero here i know,but u know what i mean 😆 he' isnt like the ideal achcah swabhaav waala.) So i love these rebellious kinda guys! 😃


Chandni was furious "watch...my foot...now listen Veer...don't you dare call me again..."
"i think you have a weak memory sweetheart...when did I call you??" he smiled while teasing her...
that was enough for her "that's it...i mean that watch...stop giving me signals..."

Hahahaha!She FORGOT she had only called him! 😆 see see this is what happens when you're in love 😉

he laughed "I have the right to do anything with my watch...you can't stop me...and you know that, I never stop"

I told you,i love this guy! 😃


"in the middle of Rajasthan" Chandni thought something... "Maneka I must go there"


Maneka was shocked "what??? are you insane Chandni...you find a stone on the road and if anything is scribbled on it...does it mean its related to you in anyway...??? can't believe you are doing this...you were so rational and now how could you do this foolishness...??"

She really is crazy! 😆 who does that? 😛 anyways,looks like she'll get all her answers soon! 😉

Oh di,i loved it u know!

Oh,next part's suggestion? 😛 I want Veer also to go with her to Mehrangarh..roadtrip romance 😆


hi sweetie... oh that was so sweet of you...thanks for appreciating...even i don't know what's gonna happen next...only Veer and Chandni know 😉... will try and update soon... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks my Radhikerani😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: BhartiKhushi909

awesome part

awww ye MU jaati kyu nahi :(

hey thanks dear...lets see...😊

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