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Posted: 13 years ago



Part 23



Kaka was surprised...he immediately took the broken pieces to show Acharya Ji...It was like a miracle...he had never expected this to happen...



he couldn't believe that his old eyes had actually seen something unusual... he folded both hands to thank the Gods to save Veer... "Acharya Ji...look..." he opened the box and showed the broken pieces of the crown...



Acharya Ji smiled "that is certainly a miracle..." he saw the pieces... "nothing can happen to Veer now" Kaka was more than happy...his eyes were moist...



"Acharya Ji...i am still wondering how could this be possible?" he said wiping his moist eyes...



Acharya Ji smiled... "an angel saved him..." he closed his eyes... "well she was meant to liberate him..."



Kaka was confused... "but now everything is fine...i mean now Veer is safe"



"he is safe until the angel stays in his life...or I must say if they both are together...Kaka don't worry about Veer...soon he will realize everything and will be able to face the danger himself..."



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It was morning...she slowly opened her eyes...



she felt a terrible change in her body...with severe head ache she glanced around... to her shock she saw her clothes on the floor...she wasn't wearing anything... next instant she saw him lying on the bed next to her with nothing on...



shockingly she got up from the bed, one by one wore her clothes...she was crying, crying at her fate... "how could i" she yelled...



he heard her voice and woke up "Chandni" '.he came near her...



"don't you dare come near me..." she was more than angry...her eyes were red with tears... "i...i hate you Veer...i hate you"



"but Chandni...please listen to me..." he insisted



"you succeeded...yes Mr Veer Raichand... you made me your prey...you used me...i hate myself...and I hate you" she yelled at him...



Next moment she picked up her bag and headed out of the room furiously... she felt her legs numb...it was difficult for her to walk... but she didn't stop...



he rushed after her "please Chandni wait..."

she ran towards the main road... he followed her... "i will drop you...let me explain everything..."



she turned angrily at him "go away...just leave me... you have got what you always wanted...now leave me...and if you follow me I swear I will kill myself..."



he stood still...he didn't move and saw her running away...he couldn't take a step...several thoughts rushed in his mind...he had never thought of sleeping with her...



he never wanted her to be his prey...instead he felt like caring for her...loving her...it was his love...but it was difficult for him to explain to her...

for sometime he felt his world is snatched away from him...he knew Chandni won't even see his face again...he felt helpless...

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After some time...



Meenakshi was sipping her morning tea while Kamini had gone to the temple...



Kamla opened the door... she was shocked to see Chandni in such a condition... she knew Chandni always dressed up nicely, she always looked elegant in whatever she wore...



but this time she saw her tussled hair...her moist eyes...it seems she had been crying for ages... her white shirt that wasn't worn properly... it was so cold outside but still she didn't wore any jacket...



Meenakshi had never seen her daughter in this condition before... Chandni didn't talk to anyone...she walked straight to her room...



Meenakshi couldn't stop, she followed her "Chandni what happened ??? I mean look at you...it seems you met with some accident..."

Chandni couldn't look into her Mother's eyes "mom...you are right...i met with a terrible accident..."



Meenakshi looked at her from top to bottom... "are you alright??"



"no...i am not...please leave me alone...please mom"



Meenakshi thought of talking to her later...



Chandni bolted the room from inside and cried out...she felt terribly helpless... her body was numb...



slowly she walked in the bathroom...took off her clothes...she touched her lips that looked sore and red... tears didn't stop from her beautiful eyes... she looked at her breast...she saw some marks and shut her eyes in despair...



"why, why did you do this with me???" she yelled and cried out...



she took her body wash and rubbed it harshly on her body... she somehow remembered last night when he sucked her neck and breasts... she felt bad... "i hate myself...i...hate myself"



today it seemed her body wasn't hers...it belonged to someone else...she felt like killing herself, how could she end up sleeping with him, even after she knew he was a womanizer...



the more she thought, the more she regretted herself... there was marks on her shoulder and chest... she tried to rub them but couldn't...at last she ended up crying helplessly... "i...hate you Veer...you used me..."



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It wasn't easy for him...he was sitting on the bed when he saw a small packet that she forgot to take...he then saw her jacket... he picked it up and pressed it against his chest... "i...i love you Chandni..."



he thought of last night and smiled...that was the most wonderful night, when he was one with her...he still remembered her touch... the way she kissed him...



he looked at his hands that had touched the beauty last night...he was adorned by her love, her fragrance, her breath...



he felt something tinging on his shoulder...he took of his shirt and saw some scratches, it was her nails that dig in his shoulder while he was making love to her... he couldn't forget her...every second was tormenting him...he felt shattered...





He knew it wasn't easy but he decided to find out a way that she will believe in his love... he slowly opened the small packet...he saw a card and another small box... he opened the card...



"Happy Birthday Veer...

---------------lots of Love Chandni"



He saw a small watch...with silver coating...it had two small buttons on its sides...he kissed the card... "you have given me the most beautiful gift that no one else can ever give"



he wore the watch on his wrist...

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In the Afternoon...



Pratima came into Veer's room...she started her daily cleaning from the rest of the house...lastly she cleaned Veer's room as she knew he wakes up late, but this time she was surprised to see him all ready and sitting on the bed

"Saab..."

he saw her and walked out of the room...



she quickly lifted the blanket to clean the bed...she saw some blood stains on the bed sheet, and an earring on the bed... "Saab...she shouted..."



he looked at the earring in her hand and immediately walked upstairs and took it form her... without speaking anything he walked outside the house...

Pratima thought it must be some random girl... she quickly cleaned the room...



Veer was standing outside '.he thought he must find out a way to reach Chandni...he had to explain her... he thought something and smiled...



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"Chandni...Chandni...how long will you take '.now come and have your lunch..." Kamini shouted while knocking her door...



she was all lost...still sitting in the bath tub... she was unaware of her surroundings... unaware of her people, lost in what all happened with her life that was entirely different now...



it was difficult for her to accept the fact that she slept with Veer...she did what she shouldn't be doing...she remembered what Rohan had told her...



"he's a womanizer...for him girls are only meant to entertain him for one night...he's a biggest alcoholic...i have seen him fighting with the bar people over drinks...he had played with so many girls...and now he must have planned to make you his prey..."

"yes Prey... you must be his next prey...he will use and throw you just like all other girls...its so difficult to believe that you fell in his trap..."

she cried...her tears didn't stop '..this incident left a terrible permanent mark on her life...

she felt breathless...she was suffocated with everything around her...it seemed her life had become hell...

she couldn't tell this to anyone...it was her fault...she went to him...then lost her senses...

how could she lay under him...how could she let him play with her body...her feelings, and her life... "i will never forgive you for this Veer..." she said angrily...



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THANKS TO A SWEETHEART FOR A WONDERFUL POSTER...YOU ARE A ⭐️




Edited by Freethinker - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
reso jii

wil edit soon...

thnx for ud di
~~EDITED~~
afta so many days, its juz me first...
so 1st yipieee for dat,...

dan its time to be happy,
acharyaji told dat they r safe until together.
cool,
bt chandini is hell annoyed frm him,
she feels disgusting,

i expected dis,
well its a obvios reaction,
evn i wud hav supported chand,
afta reading, veer seriously loves her, her confessed to at least himself...
dats makes me feel for veer more.

chand is all benumb..
she hs surely given him d bestest b'de gift...

dat maid, wats her name??
it skipped ma mind...
she got chand's earring...

hmmm...
god, wat if she sm hw finds aba dat nite, she wil directly tell to her mom or dat bhodiya kamini.


ud soon,
lovd it.

lov u
Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

reso jii


wil edit soon...

thnx for ud di
~~EDITED~~
afta so many days, its juz me first...
so 1st yipieee for dat,...

dan its time to be happy,
acharyaji told dat they r safe until together.
cool,
bt chandini is hell annoyed frm him,
she feels disgusting,

i expected dis,
well its a obvios reaction,
evn i wud hav supported chand,
afta reading, veer seriously loves her, her confessed to at least himself...
dats makes me feel for veer more.

chand is all benumb..
she hs surely given him d bestest b'de gift...

dat maid, wats her name??
it skipped ma mind...
she got chand's earring...

hmmm...
god, wat if she sm hw finds aba dat nite, she wil directly tell to her mom or dat bhodiya kamini.


ud soon,
lovd it.

lov u

thanks sweetie... loved your comments...yes yeah you are the 1st one to comment today🥳...will update soon... and yes i think you are an expert now in writing bold scenes...😆...
lov u sweetie...🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Freethinker

thanks sweetie... loved your comments...yes yeah you are the 1st one to comment today🥳...will update soon... and yes i think you are an expert now in writing bold scenes...😆...
lov u sweetie...🤗


i more thng which i dinn mention in comment...
the maker seriouslt roxx in siggy...


n if by chance, hook n crook u eva meet me in life, u wil noe hw crack at times i go...
bolds senes r serious, dats y its third last scene i m writing.

coz one i hav write for lss n egl.
Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo


i more thng which i dinn mention in comment...
shruja di seriouslt roxx in siggy...


n if by chance, hook n crook u eva meet me in life, u wil noe hw crack at times i go...
bolds senes r serious, dats y its third last scene i m writing.

coz one i hav write for lss n egl.

😆yes bold scenes are serious...i appreciate your efforts sweetie...you can really become a good writer...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Freethinker

😆yes bold scenes are serious...i appreciate your efforts sweetie...you can really become a good writer...😊


for nw, i wanna b sm thng related to biology in sm sense, be it research, doctor or pharma, bio tech or lecturer.

i write for ma fun n entertainment, specially lov for rtmc...

its neither a hobby not a passion.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo


for nw, i wanna b sm thng related to biology in sm sense, be it research, doctor or pharma, bio tech or lecturer.

i write for ma fun n entertainment, specially lov for rtmc...

its neither a hobby not a passion.

it can become a hobby...writing comes automatically...you choose your profession...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
😊

Originally posted by: Freethinker

it can become a hobby...writing comes automatically...you choose your profession...😊


agree di😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
very nice update dii
just loved it
feel bad 4 chand hope veer do something
im happy that veer is safe now
update soon
thanks 4 pm
luv u
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Posted: 13 years ago
finally veer is safe... all thnx to our angel chandni...
hope veer chandni ko jldi mna le...
waiting to c dem together n how veer fight wid danger...
thnx 4 d pm...

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