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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#581

Originally posted by: Freethinker
read twice...and you are blushing...😊

nt more dan chand...

ud sn di

wna noe hw she reacts.

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Dhanvi

@Freethinker

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#582

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

nt more dan chand...

ud sn di

wna noe hw she reacts.

will try and update soon.😊...good blushing...well then you surely must have blushed when you wrote your ss...(army wife) 😉

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piuli

@prahelika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#583

lovely part dear...😊

aww chand is heartbroken...

poor girl...never fell for anyone and when it finally happened the arrow of the cupid just tore through her heart😭...

hope she realizes how much evolved is he now...😕

and the crown is broken😲...does that mean veer's life is not at risk any more?...

and what will be chand's reaction when she wakes up...😕

plz update soon dear...

luv u...

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#584

Originally posted by: Freethinker
will try and update soon.😊...good blushing...well then you surely must have blushed when you wrote your ss...(army wife) 😉

blushing dosent suit me so much...

its really funny to imagine a haryanvi gal blushing..
bt di to b frank to u..
i ws nt blushing while writing amry wife

i simply concentrated on desco. and words..
i realy wanted all u di's n ma buddies to visualise it..

i wanted all u di's to be proud,,
since u r r expert in writing bold scenes..
so i ask u??

did i suceed, made u proud???

dnt take it a joke,
its a real question..

lov u di

Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago

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Sonali

@sonalimurat

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Posted: 13 years ago

#585

sorry Dhanvi Di for late commenting

Update was superb ...tooo good 👏

So Chandini got to know abt Veer's truth ohhh and she drunk ...😲

Veer took her from that disc

It all happened between Veer n Chandini before it's Birthday 😛

that's great n Romantic too ☺️

so I have got answers of my question

Black crown had been broken ...yipeee 🥳

But don't know How chandini will React in next morning

update soon

love u

Edited by SonaliDhone - 13 years ago

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shruja

@shruja

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#586

sorry for late comment
both the parts were awesome!!
loved description abt their emos
they realised they love each other n confessed.
and at last black crown cracked!!
but now chandani's life will be in danger?

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dhwanimehta23

@dhwanimehta23

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#587

amazing update!!!!!
Chandni dancing in the temple was a bit shock!!!!
Atlast they both confessed what they felt about each other!!!!!😛😛😛
Very romantic update!!!!😉😉

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Bells.E.cullen

@Bells.E.cullen

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#588

god m sooo happy...
finally the crown breaks...!!!!!!!!
hope ab ye misha beach mein na aaye...
n damn happy dat they confessed der luv to each other...
thnx alot 4 dis beautiful update...
veer hav powers... wow... he alredy hav power 2 drive any girl crazy 4 him... but another powers...!!!!!
amazing yaar...
luv
bells...

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Dhanvi

@Freethinker

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#589

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

blushing dosent suit me so much...

its really funny to imagine a haryanvi gal blushing..
bt di to b frank to u..
i ws nt blushing while writing amry wife

i simply concentrated on desco. and words..
i realy wanted all u di's n ma buddies to visualise it..

i wanted all u di's to be proud,,
since u r r expert in writing bold scenes..
so i ask u??

did i suceed, made u proud???

dnt take it a joke,
its a real question..

lov u di

expert 😆...sorry darling...couldn't resist laughing... yeah atleast i am an expert at something...😆...sorry baby i won't be able to update today...i haven't even started scribbling yet...😉and lastly i lov u and your sweet comments... 🤗
😉

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aroojm

@aroojm

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#590

Heyyy that was amazing loved the whole update it soo hot
and yes thank god the crown broke yayyy soo happy 😃
please continue and update soon can't to see what happens next
really hoping Chandni doesn't act to bad when she waked up the next day... but glad they told each other about their feelings 👏

Edited by aroojm - 13 years ago

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