SHIKAR (A Dangerous Love Story) RTMC FF 39 on 148 - Page 25

Originally posted by: princesspriyart

wao m 1st 😛
oh to veer chandani k gr tk bhi puch gya 😲
puchna bhi tha akhir uski hone wali sasural jo h 😳
chlo hmne to abi se hi bna di now u hv full rit veer kbi bhi aa skte ho 😛
bechara manohar 😆
ooo veer hoing so caring jacket bhi utar kr phna di 😳
veer u jhut boling gande bachche
u drink kring bt chandani ko jhut boling ki u hate drink 😆
Koi ni pyar or war me sb chlta h
m always with u
now chandani felt good for veer
bt jb such pta chlega tb ??
Uufff tb ka tb dekha jayega abi to masti kro na 😆
w8img for nex part di 😉 😛

luv u to di

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

WOWO DI,

U R REALLY GR88 IN THIS UD.

but today i m late...priya is first.

whoevr it is me aur priya, priya meri friend h, voh first yah main first, baat tho ek hi h...

well u wud be thinking ki -i don't give give comments on her ff, why she makes me undergo the tragedy of her big boring comment...(bt i m wa8ing d day u will give big comment in any of rtmc ff, that will be a wonder, n i will surely celebrate dat day...)...

if u feel so, then di dats ur problem...

i wil give big comments...

n u have to read themmm

in every comment i wil write, u r amazing, n u hav to read dat too...

can't help if u r fed up of me,

u have too bear me der no option abt it...

so let starts wid ud...

i expected this, n u wre not up to expectation, but u were over the expectation...

love the way chandini is feeling comfortable wid veer, she wanted to hold his hand for longer...

veer too wanted it, so sweet...

but in this world , 2 lover never have a easy space...

PHEW...

so chandani is guiding veer in Darjeeling...

and veer is trying to be light in front of her...''do here tigers exist????????''cool question.

chandini is attracted to veer, constant gazing haan!...

didn't remove her eyes frm him wen he went to tea stall...

well veer RESPECTS her, that's why trying to be nice in front of her...

he din like coffee but still having it, even claiming it nice...funny...

keep it up veer...

someday u will surely be rewarded for sacrificing ur interests...

chandini cares abt him...

asked his number...ab tho baatien hoti rahengi...kyun????????

i here by demand two three phone convo...

i wanna scene like this...

that chand is upset on some issue with someone, so she wants to complain abt it on phone...

but instaed she dials veer's number, he picks up...as soon as he do this, chandini shouts at him, thinking he is the same culprit...but wen she discovers , its veer...she apologise...make it a bit funny...do include if possible.

last scen...

they talk...don't want to end their convo...

veer understands her silence...

chand is going crazy over him...he is in her senses...

loved it throughly...

so here is ma PUNCH LINE...

U R AMAZING.

LOVE U.

Originally posted by: sweetnandu

beautiful update..!!!

veer is chainging.. good..😊

and Chandini is an angel ...woww..

pls cont soon..

thanks for the pm :)

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

great update

u have described the way veer is changing under the influence of chandni beautifully

Originally posted by: SonaliDhone

Nice part

Loved It

Loved their convo

hmm Chandni also having strange but lovely feeling for Veer ( positive vibrations 😛)

Her grandfathers words ''

...either she will pure the evil or she will herself get impure"

she will definately improve Veer ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

update soon dear

love u

take care

Originally posted by: shruja

beautiful part!!
liked chand wanted him to hold her hand for long
hmm n manohar is smart enough to let them alone
loved their jouney to tiger hills
n beautiful descrition too
so veer controling himself n pretending good infront of chand
he appreciated coffee even he don't like it
but he lied tht he don't drink n hate drinkers
wht happen when truth come out
kamini din't met veer this time
loved both wanted to hear eachothers voice
she is praying for her granddaughter but she is already falling for veer
n whts her grandpa said?
i don't want chandani impure
but wants veer's all bad habit vanish in chandani's company

Originally posted by: sparksfly

wooow... dat was a beautiful update !!! 👏

dis ud was one of ur best !!! ⭐️

d dialogues were fabulous !!! i just luv dis line -"this lonely sky always covered my heart...you entered my life with the sweet sound of your bracelet and filled my lonely heart with your smile"😍

Chandani's new feelngs...Veer's changng behavior d story is gettin more amazing !!! 😛

she wantd 2 hold his hand !!! n kept glancng at him in d car n culdnt take her eye off him when he went 2 get tea !!!

Veer smiled a LOT !! 😃

Chandani's previous life?? mysterious !!! "I know Chandni has spiritual powers and that is her reason to come on this earth...because she is a mere human, she is unaware of her past life...either she will pure the evil or she will herself get impure" 😕

Veer is tryng 2 b d guy Chandani wuld like !!! no alcohol...complementng d horrible coffee...luv is in d air in Darjeeling !!!😉

Chandani thnks he's a gud guy...HUGE joke !!!😆 but he's changng ...so he might bcum wat she thnks he is...!! 👍🏼

d words u've used...r BEAUTIFUL !!

u describd their feelngs perfectly...beatng heart...cold hands...wantng 2 embrace...crimson cheeks...wantng 2 hear d othrs voice...i culd FEEL dem !!! 😳

di u r an AWESUMIC writer !! 👏

luv u LOADS di !!🤗

plzz giv d next ud fast...

Originally posted by: tejjo

awesome update dear
so chand feels same as veer

omg,he lie that he don't drink to impress chand
and she impressed with him

loved their convo and car scene
lovely update dear

cont soon
thanx 4 pm
luv u

Originally posted by: sanyogitaprc

update dear 🤗...loved it...

this part was full of Chad-Veer scenes😳...superb...i am happy that he is behaving nicely with her...& now she has also started feeling for him😳...great...

"either she will pure the evil or she will herself get impure"

hmmm...it seems like veer has already started to change for good...her words r having deep impact on him😊...i hope it will continue...

plz plz update soon...eagerly waiting😍...

Originally posted by: mugdhas24

dhanvi di is that you in the profile pic. you look very good,i saw it now. aap bohat ache lag rahe ho. i hear New zealand famous hai chocolates and milk products ke liye.