SHIKAR (A Dangerous Love Story) RTMC FF 39 on 148 - Page 26

Originally posted by: akki-rockstar

wowww..omggg..ur truly amazing...

it's just wowww..

fab update..

do cont soon...ur wonderful writer..n hv kind of magic in ur writing..

fab...

luvd these lines most..

"this lonely sky always covered my heart...you entered my life with the sweet sound of your bracelet and filled my lonely heart with your smile"

hey i hv a sugg for u..

can u plz add colors in ur updt..or like u updt in para form..can u plz write it as

chandni:

Veer:

n description in para...

coz its quite diff to read otherwise...

else ur updt is amazing as always..

thanks Akki...will try and write more clearly so its readable to everyone...anyways thanks for the wonderful suggestion... i was thinking as well... 😉

Originally posted by: Manipadma

aaahhh !!! ...I can still feel freshness of himalayin air...😳
Lovley update swthrt...!! ❤️

thanks sweetie...i like that you started commenting again...😉keep reading...i know u lov Viral dobrial...😆he's a dangerous man, anyways thanks for enjoying Shikar...

awesome part
loved it

edit ma comment on pg 31...😊

Originally posted by: prahelika

hi dhanvi😃...

really sorry for not being able to comment on the previous update😭...

the story is flowing so smoothly😳...

so much changes in veer😍...

previously he used to manipulate girls...he used to make them fall for him with his huge heap of flaws...🤔

and now he's changing himself subconsciously for her😳...

does this boy even know how rapidly he's improving😆???

very good chand...even i don't like drunkard people...

and i bet now even veer will try his best to keep himself away from this fatal addiction...

in this battle of evil vs good...chand has to win against evil...and this evil is not veer definitely...

in fact he's another victim of it...😕

hope she can save his love before it's too late😕...

plz update soon dear...😃

luv u...

Thanks a lot dear...much appreciated...😊 will try and update soon...

Originally posted by: princesspriyart

knock...knock
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Knock
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Knock
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Knock
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Knock
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Are koi h yha ??
Chlo chodo ho ya na ho hm to ye khne aaye the

ud dedo koi
ud dedo
bachche ki baat bhi sun liya kro ji kbi

Originally posted by: princesspriyart

ye bacha bhi chilane lga
ud dedo
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Ud dedo
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Ud dedo
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Ud dedo
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Ud dedo ... Cont.