SHIKAR (A Dangerous Love Story) RTMC FF 39 on 148

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Sonali

@sonalimurat

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Posted: 13 years ago

#231

Nice part

Loved It

Loved their convo

hmm Chandni also having strange but lovely feeling for Veer ( positive vibrations 😛)

Her grandfathers words ''

...either she will pure the evil or she will herself get impure"

she will definately improve Veer ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

update soon dear

love u

take care

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shruja

@shruja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#232

beautiful part!!
liked chand wanted him to hold her hand for long
hmm n manohar is smart enough to let them alone
loved their jouney to tiger hills
n beautiful descrition too
so veer controling himself n pretending good infront of chand
he appreciated coffee even he don't like it
but he lied tht he don't drink n hate drinkers
wht happen when truth come out
kamini din't met veer this time
loved both wanted to hear eachothers voice
she is praying for her granddaughter but she is already falling for veer
n whts her grandpa said?
i don't want chandani impure
but wants veer's all bad habit vanish in chandani's company

Edited by shruja - 13 years ago

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Shreya

@sparksfly

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#233

wooow... dat was a beautiful update !!! 👏

dis ud was one of ur best !!! ⭐️

d dialogues were fabulous !!! i just luv dis line -"this lonely sky always covered my heart...you entered my life with the sweet sound of your bracelet and filled my lonely heart with your smile"😍

Chandani's new feelngs...Veer's changng behavior d story is gettin more amazing !!! 😛

she wantd 2 hold his hand !!! n kept glancng at him in d car n culdnt take her eye off him when he went 2 get tea !!!

Veer smiled a LOT !! 😃

Chandani's previous life?? mysterious !!! "I know Chandni has spiritual powers and that is her reason to come on this earth...because she is a mere human, she is unaware of her past life...either she will pure the evil or she will herself get impure" 😕

Veer is tryng 2 b d guy Chandani wuld like !!! no alcohol...complementng d horrible coffee...luv is in d air in Darjeeling !!!😉

Chandani thnks he's a gud guy...HUGE joke !!!😆 but he's changng ...so he might bcum wat she thnks he is...!! 👍🏼

d words u've used...r BEAUTIFUL !!

u describd their feelngs perfectly...beatng heart...cold hands...wantng 2 embrace...crimson cheeks...wantng 2 hear d othrs voice...i culd FEEL dem !!! 😳

di u r an AWESUMIC writer !! 👏

luv u LOADS di !!🤗

plzz giv d next ud fast...

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riya

@Riyaa16

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#234

awesome update dear
so chand feels same as veer

omg,he lie that he don't drink to impress chand
and she impressed with him

loved their convo and car scene
lovely update dear

cont soon
thanx 4 pm
luv u

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Priya Sharma

@Priyart12

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#235

ya rashu ek hi bat h koi bhi phle cmnt de ye bhi
btw ye glti se 1st ho gya 😛

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Gauri

@gauri_tvfanatic

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#236

update dear 🤗...loved it...

this part was full of Chad-Veer scenes😳...superb...i am happy that he is behaving nicely with her...& now she has also started feeling for him😳...great...

"either she will pure the evil or she will herself get impure"

hmmm...it seems like veer has already started to change for good...her words r having deep impact on him😊...i hope it will continue...

plz plz update soon...eagerly waiting😍...

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mugdhas24

@mugdhas24

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#237

dhanvi di is that you in the profile pic. you look very good,i saw it now. aap bohat ache lag rahe ho. i hear New zealand famous hai chocolates and milk products ke liye.