We Are Destined *KriYaansh* ch5 last feb22 pg18 - Page 13

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Posted: 13 years ago
Issey kehte hai Lovestory. the pure that is unconventional.
Nams dii,Jaake CVs ko thodi dimag dedo..!!Let them learn something..!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
This is a very nice update. I know no one can replace kria but rey has to move on. It must be shown in the show also. I hope the effect this FF has on the readers, same should have it on the audiences when they watch the serial.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww sooo cute of u nams...tune diary dikhai...a BIG *HUG* 4m side to u 4 dis...love uu yr❤️ n sahi kaha DESTINY or UNIVERSE JI KA KHEL nt lyk cv's jinhe sirf hm fans ka heart break krna ata h

n i dn't lyk sharon's decision wid new gal...grrr n wo b apne jaise just carbon copy...n i lyk reyam frndshp n thnx 4 sch a lovly update n after reading dis update i m similing bt my smile is going to become big jb kriyaansh milenge

n nw waiting 4 nxt part n kriya's entry n i thnk delhi mai hi hogi kriya n thnx 4 pm dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting 4 kriya and kriyansh romance update soon plz
can't wait
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Posted: 13 years ago
heyyy nams!!:):)
woww nice concept ir ff has yaar!!
it's sad but very very very nicee!!:)
update soon dear!!
can't wait for kria entry!!
Thanx for PM!!:):)
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Posted: 13 years ago

thank god... at least rey got his answers... i wish this could happent in the Show *sigh*

can't wait for kriya's entry😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
Next update will have kria's entry?!?
Well then you have to update super fast as we can't wait for our kriyansh to come together!!!
Awesome chapter :) and continue ASAP
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Posted: 13 years ago
i am super excited that kriya is coming back i hope the new chick only be rey's dance partner yaar atleast here we can have only kriyaansh i want some super cute kriyaansh romance yaar and thnx for pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update nams!!👏
waiting for kria's entry
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Posted: 13 years ago

CHAPTER 5

destiny brout them togethr FORVER!!! they wer DESTINED!

His heart was continousy in superfast speed million tyms uttered "NO NO ONE CAN B MY PARTNER OTHR THAN KRIA" nd evrytym his heart took over his image infront of him nd kept saying dese words as if SCREEMING to him.. nd at tat momnt anothr image appeared infront of him nd said "tumei yeh karna hoga! FOR UR TEAM! FOR UR COLLEGE's PRESTIGE! FOR UR FRENZ! FOR UR DANCE! Nd for K R I A ??? she to did d same nd y don't u??? itz fr a noble cause U SHUD!!!"

He struggled nd kept his head moving to nd fro at d directions of two images (his heart n his mind)

But thr was one thing common bw both tat was KRIA!!

Rey: ENOUGH!!!!!!!!!!!! Im going to DELHI tats FINAL!!!!!

He stormed out of d room..

In college.. (rehersal hall)

Sh: guyzz rey ayega na??

Sw: Sharon he wil cum! Relax!!

Vicky: Sharon hum sab apne apne bags pack karke aye hai nd within 2 hrs we shud leave to DELHI college bus ready hai! nd tum ab yeh pooch rhi ho ki rey ayega ya nahi??? How can u b soo irresponsible?

Neha: rey coming neha is sure!!!

Jus thn DIYA enters wearing a crimson pink tank top nd blue jeans..

Diya: hey REY.. (she searched he wasn't thr)

*frowned*

Diya: sorry muje laga rey yahan hai.. anywzzz all set guyz?????

Sh: yeah yeah cum sit….

Diya: (hesitatingly) guyz shall I ask u sumthn..

Sw+sh: yeah..

Diya: sach mei rey ko koi prob nhi hena mere saat D A N C E…?????

Sw: uffo NO no ways!! Itz jus tat ki wo bahut dino se dance se door raha hai bas..

Diya: kyun???

Sh: diya chodo wo sab !! chalo canteen chalte hai!!! come..

All go..

Next scene.. all near d bus..

Sh: rey abi tak nhi aya..?

Sw: Sharon ajayega..

Sh: really? Wo na call uta rha hai na hi gar pe hai! kisi ko kuch pata nhi! How ca..

Sw: sssh! Bas!!!!! Realx Im sure he will b on d way..

Diya: hey guyz rey agaya?????

Sw: ummm wo abi abi uska k k call aya tha wo bas raaste mei hi hai n nd wo traffic mei fasa hua hai bas ajayega..

Diya: swayam u knw wat ur really bad in lieing!!!! Nd I knw won hi ayega! Wo kria ke bager kabhi dance nhi karega!!!

Sw: diya..

Diya: but im cumin wid u all!! Bina partner k hi sahi..

Sw: hey suno wo..

Diya runs inside d bus..

All in frowned face enterd d bus..

The engine started..

Bus took itz start..

Nd all

Sh: I so wish wo ajatha… swayam can v wait fr sum more tym?

Vish: no point of waiting fr him!!! Deko tym hogaya hai n v shud reach delhi asap! C'mon ab won hi aapayega!!!

Sw: but wo..

Vi: oh c'mon swayam won hi ayega accept it!

Diya: ajatha toh..

Neha: neha still feeling rey wil come!

Sh: watver!

Bus strtd

All look out of d window wid sad expression.

Suddenly thr was sum sound in d bus.. nd thn fr wat dey saw all jumped nd screemd

Rey was der wid his bag on his back nd grin on his face (grin was jus on his face not frm heart)

All hugged him.. diya seemed to b very happie.. aftr greeting teasing chit chatting all took over deir seats..

Diya asked rey to sit next to her.. he sat near her fr jus a courtesy nd aftr sumytym wen diya jus turned to say sumthn he excused himself nd went to front seat behind d driver nd sat thr.. looking out d window wid headphones on..

KUCH KAM ROSHAN HAI ROSHNI song was BG tune..

All wer feeling bad.. everyone wer thinking of kria.. the days dey spent together.. her dance.. dazzlings weaklings tag.. group chats.. fun masti.. romance.. nd diya thinking of rey how he is neglecting her.. (I tld u all she has a crush on him)

they reached d city..

the bus stopped infront of d college.. outside d college a big STAGE was setting up (MUSICAL NITE)

there wer thousands of students indulged in different works setting up d BIG BRIGHT LOOKED FREAKING AWSUM STAGE..

they stood thr nd they cud see soo many ppl running here nd thr nd hurrying up.. they saw few ppl named "volunteers" wid headphones wich jus reminded dem of DANCE FEST

sh: guyZ? Cum lets get in..

swayam sees rey lost somewer..

sw: REY? Chalo chalte hai..

rey: haaan haan ch chalo..

sh: wait a sec lemme call my frnd..

sh: Hey Piya! Hum sab pahunch gaye wer r u?

piya: really? WOW tats great im inside d college wait il b near d gate widin 2 mins..

so now u all got it Sharon's frnd is PIYA..

assume d college name to ST XAVIER's

piya came out of d college running nd suddenly bumped into Sharon fr a tight hug..

piya: OMG I jus cant belive ur here!!

sh: kyun? I kept my promise!

piya: OFCOURSE! Last momnt mei darr gayi thi coz u knw na sab waqt pe ho n all.. nd upar se I dint take u guyz auditions also! Soo sir was a bit angry..

sh: oh but u tld us no need of auditions!

Piya: array no need at al! but guyz can u jus give an introductory performance dis evnn??? Nd thn at nite u can enjoy party in my house..

Sh: wooaah tats GREAT!

Sw: but wer r we staying?

Diya: don't excpect me to stay in d clg hostel wer rest of d participants r staying!!!!!

Piya: hahahhaha no no u all r gonna stay in my HOUSE!

Sw: but..?

Piya: NO BUTS! I hv done all d arrangemnts! U wud luv d stay trust me!

All agreed went to college..

While rey was jus entering.. behind him..

Piya: Wer d hell wer u???? haan ! listen muje koi bahana nhi chahiye! Ur cuming home fr d party tats it!

Gal: BUT I CANT!!!!!

Piya: Y? (pouting)

Gal: coz aaj mom aur mei dinner par jaa rhe hai..

Rey jus stood der almost frozen Hearing d conversation! Y? coz d voice was familiar..

He cud nt move a inch! The whole world seems to d stopped a breeze flew around only him..

Piya: Kr..

Gal: I CANT PLZZ UNDERSTND!!!

Rey was abt to turn

Piya: KRIZ c'mon! now!!!!!!

Rey turned jus thn few boys nd gals rushed infront of his eyes moving here nd der making invisible fr him to c dat "gal"

Wen d crowd was cleared

Piya was standing infront of sum gal n instructing to do some work (othr gal)

Rey frowned! At once he felt it was KRIA..

Swayam came upto rey .. who had already turned away frm piya..

Piya: ok u can go now..

Piya moves forward wer one gal was strictly instructing volunteers deir work

Piya: listen KRIZ

The gal turned..

Gal: first of all call me KRIA! nd secondly mei nhi aa skti matlab nhi aa skti

Ok now dis is our KRIA.. hope u understd in d beginning only.

Piya: wo sab muje nhi pata! Nd muje KRIZ kria se zyada pasand hai! hahahaha! Nd rhi baat mom ki toh mei aunty se baat karoongi

Kria: piya listen..

Piya had already dialled smriti's no

Piya: hey aunty piya here!

Sm: oh hi bolo beta kaise fone kia? Sab teek?

Piya: aunty aaj raat meri gar mei party hai plz plz kria bejiye!

Sm: party? Aaj? Beta wo hum

Piya: aunty plz c'mon now aftrall we r neighbours!!!

Sm: okk tum usse le jaa skte ho!

Piya: ahwww thnkxx luv u aunty bye!

Piya: ab kush?

Kria: mom maan gayi?

Piya: haan

Kria: thnk god! Piya? LETS ROCK D PARTY TONITE!!

Piya: YAAAYYY!!!!!

Piya moves off while kria turns (rey kria facing back to each othr lil far frm each othr)

A slow breez bw d two!

Thy stood frozen taking in d presence of each othr..

Both felt deir heart was skipping d beat evry now nd den..

Suddenly thr was a tap on rey shoulders by diya..

Diya: wat r u doing here? chalo !!!!

Rey: wo (turns)

Kria is pulled by few volunteers out of sum work

Rey: (mind) wo yahan kaise ayegi? Leave it rey! Ek baad yeh show katam hojaye fir se usse doondne ki koshish kar ab show pe conc kar!!

Rey: nthn chalo..

They get in.. kria runs behind nd cums til d door of clg feeling but no one was der

Kria: rey? Yahan? No ways! Kria tu b na! universe ji agar isi tarah har pal uska yaad dilate rahe na toh bahut jald mei aapke paas pahunch jaongi!!!

She went out murmuring wid universe ji..

Party tym..

All gathered in piya's house..

Kria comes in door open..

Rey nd rest r upstairs.. along wid piya.. she peeps nd sees kria came in..

Piya: woow kriz !! guyz excuse me!

She runs near kria! while rey felt kria's presence nd so did kria..

She hugged piya so her face wasn't visible fr d gang.. all felt kria was sumwer near nd dey wer repeatedly remembering her dat day..

Kria went near her frnz nd strtd chit chatting! But she was lost sumwer..

She cud nt resist d feelings wich kept conqurring her every now n thn.!

While rest of d team came down..

Piya: guyz rey swayam Sharon tum teeno yahi rahoge nd baaki sabko meine outhouse mei rooms arrange kia hai!

All: ok..

Nd dey strt enjoying d party wid piya..

Rey excused himself fr washroom..

Piya saw kria in one corner in a diff mood..

She thout she wil introduce dis gang to kria nd pulled d gang towards her..

Kria's back facing d gang..

Piya: kriz?? See whom I hv got wid me..

Kria turns

All in a complete SHOCK!

For sumtym they wer like dumb deaf num jus their eyes was seeing a gal who was once suppose to d reason fr deir happiness.

The rage nd anger slowly hit everyones face.. they wer passing DISGUSTING looks to kria..

Tears rolled down her cheeks

Piya: kriz hey tum ro kyun rhi ho wat hppnd?

Kria: nthn! Il b back..

Piya: no wait here! muje batao kya hua! Do u knw dese? I mean abi tak teek thi inhe dek kar firse purani wali kria ban gayi!!!!

She was trying to control herlsef as much as possible!

Piya: TATS enough now! Deko tumei us state se normal banana ke liye muje 6 mahine laga! Ab fir se agar tu din raat rone lagegi na thn I swear mei teri khoon kardoongi aur khud b mar jaongi!

Piya's words wer giving hint to d gang tat kria was also hurt!

Kria excused herself nd went up..

Piya: itni muskil se isse teek kia tha! Ab achanak aisa kya hua?

She looked upto d gang they all disappeared..

Swayam went up to tearrace. Kria was standing der sobbing..

Sw: kria?

Kria: swayam!!!!!!

Hugs

Sw: so trying to b strong but failed huh?

Kria: wat?

Sw: piya ki baaton se wahi lag rha tha!

Kria: hmm kya karu tum sab se itna attached hoon na!!

Sw: kria rey b aya hai

Kria: hmm toh?

Sw: usse baat nhi karni?

Kria: ummm nhi! (I wish I cud meet him)

Sw: fyn! Nd kria isn't dis odd? Deko hum sab yahi hai! tum abs ach bol skti ho ryt?

Kria: swayam! Yeh mujpe chod do sab mujse naraz hai nd meine unhe mujse nafrat karne pe mujboor kia wo log kabi muje maaf nhi karenge I knw it! plzzz aisa hi rehne do! Aisa hi rehne do! Tumei kasam dekar tumare dosti ka b Mazak bana di meine! IM SO SORRY SWAYAM! Mei ek coward ban gayi!

Sw: kria tum.

She ran down..

Sw: il get back everyone to u! kal subah tumare liye ek naya subah banega! Trust me!!!!!

next post below..

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