We Are Destined *KriYaansh* ch5 last feb22 pg18 - Page 14

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Posted: 13 years ago

She ran down to a room locked it nd strtd crying!!!

Aftr some tym she felt a palm touching her shoulders.. she got nd turned! It was REY!

They kept looking at each othr fr hours without evn uttering d word.

Finally kria took some courage she was abt to blink her eyes nd strt saying somthn tat rey embraced her in a TIGHT HUG..

She stood thr dumbstruck by his action!

She slowly moved her hand around him nd hugges him back.. they poured all deir desire out of having one anothr in their arms..

Aftr a long hug they broke..

Kria opened mouth to say somethn that rey nudged his lips into hers..

Kria cud nt back off! She wanted him he wanted her! They missed each othr! That's all was counting at dat momnt..

She kept moving back while rey wenvr broke d kiss he gave millions of kisses all over her face..

Slowly they fell in d bed..

Wid anothr passionate kiss they broke..

Rey: baatcutter!!!! (hugged her)

Kria: rey tum abi b mujse pyaar..???

Rey: humesha se kia hai karta hoon aur karta rahoonga!!!!

Kria: (cupped his face in her hands) I love u rey! I love u soo much!!!!!!!!

Rey was in cloud 9! He was dieing to hear those words nd now she jus said it! giving rise to all his deires of owning her once again..

They got in anothr kisss.. nd they slept under each othr arms whole nite..

In d mrng..

Kria came down blushing.. nd den thr stood d whole gang..

They all came upto kria nd pulled her in group hug..

Kria was really happie that they had forgiven her..

She smiled nd was happiest gal on earth at dat momnt..

Sw: kria! I hv somethn else for u..

Kria: itna bada surprise dia! Muje meri grp se wapas milwaya ab kya ?

Her mom came up

Sm: kria meine tumei fir se dance karne ki permission toh dedi but I forgot DOSTI aur aur DIL ke bina tumara dance adoora hai!

Kria: mom?????

Sm: deko kria 6 mahine se tumne ek baar b sunkooon se nhi deka! Tab b nhi jab meine tumei dance karne ki permission di! Tabi realise kia ki tum kya chahthi ho nd kismei kush ho ! lekin sahi waqt ka intezaar kr rhi thi jo aaj agaya..

Sm: rey?

Rey: y y yee yess aunty matlab mom matlb..

Sm: mom hi teek rahega!

Rey: wat really?

Sm: hahahaha yes beta! Sorry meine tumei pehchaaane mei galti karli! Yeh jo kria ki chehre pe smile hena! Wo sirf tumari aur tumari dosti ki waja se hai! fir se wo smile vanish karte nhi dek skti! Meri beti ka kayal rakoge na?

Rey: aap aap sach mei yeh sab??

Sm: UFFO ab yaa stamp paper mei lik ke doon ki muje dono ki relationship se koi problem nhi?

Kria: maaa

Hugs

Kria: aap world ki best maa ho! Luv u!

They all go fr a anothr group hug..

Diya: is group ko tumari zaroorat hai nd tumse accha partner rey ke liye aur koi ho nhi skta! So tumei aaj ke show mei REY ke saat perform karna hoga!!

Kria looks at rey LOOK LOOK HAWA HAWA

In d stage jus befor d announcement rey pulls kria at side

Rey: tumse kuch kehna tha

K: rey show ka tym hogaya! Kya hai jaldi bolo

Rey: (bends in his knees) I LOVE U! (halding red rose)

Kria *tears*

Kria: REY I LOVE U TOO!!

She hugs him taking d red rose nd making him straight!!!

Thn their performance guess wich one? KHUDA JAANE !

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end of d FF

This is my LAST POST in d forums! IM SORRY but il not b posting any more updts othr than DIL SE!!!

So all my works will remain PENDING or INCOMPLETE! Im moving out of d forum! KR ending is heart wenching! I cant bear it! so bcz of dat dis updt also wasn't gud (nt my satisfaction) so im sorry if I dint stand up on ur hopes! Im sorry frm bottom of my heart!

Al my sincere readers! I LUV U VERY MUCH! Ur comnts make my day! Make me smile! Jump screem! THNK U FR ALL DAT!

Plz don't curse or blame me fr DISCONTINUING im helpless sorry!

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Posted: 13 years ago
i can understand even i am going through same state
but i loved ur ff and will miss definitely thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago
I'm really sad that its finished but in general this ff is absolutely brilliant and I am really sad but at east your carrying on with Dil Se
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Posted: 13 years ago
Its damn awesome...perfect ending for kriyansh..i can completely understand wat u r feeling rite now...im gonna miss u n ur ff's badly...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Dont say sry nams...i can xactly understnd hw u felng nw...evn m also goin thru d same felng...aftr 2day's episode...m broken frm inside...cant belive my favourite couple r no more 2gethr...
I knw hw it feels wen ur dearest thng is taken away frm u...
N dis tym i wnt tel u 2 cntinue...i knw u will nt b able 2...
Bt i so mch hope ki smday u r bak...n smday our lovely kriyansh r bak...wic can brng bak d smiles bak on all us kriyansh fan...
Luv u nams n ur ffs,os n ss...dey r soo gud n best ones...luv dem...
Thnx fr pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
its perfect ending for kriyaansh n after today's episode i m jst broken 😭 in tears...n ur os bring small smile on my face...thnx nams 4 dis

n i cn understand...evn i m feeling lyk crushing screeming n crying loudly 😭 😭...i m gng too miss u alot n ur ff to n hope tum jaldi wapis aa jao
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aww nams *hugs* thanku so much 4 dis update..i realy needed dis..cming to ur discontinuatn i cnt comment cz i myslf did d same bt to tel u 1 thng by readng ur ff i cud treasure kriyansh in my lyf 4eva thanx darls
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Posted: 13 years ago
i dont blame u for leaving the show coz it is turining to be another dmg which got spoilt with the cv's tracks and love u loads and hope u can come back one day when everything turns fine and restart ur ff's and thanks for ending this one n it might not be up to ur expectations but it surely past mine
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Posted: 13 years ago
it's completely fine... Nams... thnx for ending this ff on a happy note... u lived up to our expectations...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

n thank u so much for continuing Dil Se... that's the only one i would have forced u to continue... thnx...

n all the best... u r one of the best ff writers i have read untill now🤗

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