We Are Destined *KriYaansh* ch5 last feb22 pg18 - Page 11

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Posted: 13 years ago
3 more posts after this to get u onto page 15 i can so do it
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey plz update soon waiting eagerly for update
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Posted: 13 years ago
i know it also made me cry and it was sad hope it has a happy ending
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I m nt in a position to utter a single word
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shivani THNK U SOO MUCH DARLS fr getting into 15th page.. 🤗 Kria's entry is probably in NEXT chapter nd il post it ASAP! promise!😊

CHAPTER 4


REFRESHED LIFE ' can NEW replace OLD.. heart says NO..!!

Rey got up aftr long tym nd turned to go out of d room! But he stopped nd moved his head to d floor near d dustbin.. the dustbin full off crushed papers but wat drew his attention was a crushed paper lying outside d dustbin wid his name in bold letters "DEAR REY"

Widout d second thout he grabbed d paper In his hands nd strtd reading it.. it was incomplete'

"DEAR REY

Aaj mei aapse kuch batana chahthi hoon.."

Tats ws d nly thing written in it! he took anothr crushed paper nd it was also similar..

He saw many paper crushed nd all had sum wat similar writing.. now he understood she did wanna say somethn..

He got up nd den his eyes fell on her study table..

Ther was a diary.. a red diary under few books..

Did she forget her diary? Or did she purposely left it thr for someone? Now dis is DESTINY! Or universe ji ki khel?

He took d diary nd strtd reading.. their whole story was written in it blended wid cute words of her beautiful hand writing..

He read thru d pages wid tears streaming out.. he found all d answers to his Qs..

In clg

Sw: (in mind) rey kaha hai? 12 mis calls de chukka hoon! Na fone uta rha hai na clg aya hai! kaha gaya hoga!

Sh: swayam kya tumei pata hai ki rey kaha gaya hai?

Sw: wo wo nhi muje nahi pata..

Swayam guesed as to wer rey mite hav gone..

Swayam excused himself nd went to his car..

He reached kria's place..

He saw d broken main doot n broken room door! He was ryt!

Sw: *sigh REY!!!!

Swayam went inside

Rey was standing wid d diary in hand nd looking out at d window..

Swayam came in

Sw: REY? Tum yahan!! Tum pagal hogaye ho? Is tarah kisi ki gar mei door crash karke ana? Rey r u out of ur mind?

*no response*

Sw: rey mei tujse baat kr rha hoon!!

He stood straight behind him

Rey: tuje sab pata tha!!

Sw: wat? *confused*

Rey: TUJE SAB PATA THA HENA!!!!!!!!

*striked* seeing d diary n rey's seriousness

Sw: kria ke baare mei?

Rey turned wid burning red eyes

Sw: (looking down lik an innocent baby yet strong engh to ans) YES! She tld me!

Rey: aur tumne mujse yeh baat batana ZAROORI NHI SAMJA!!!!

Sw: rey deko wo mei..

Rey: 6 MAHINE se 6MAHINE SE PAGALON KI TARAH USSE DOONDRAHA HOON USKI JAANE KI PEECHE KYA WAJAH HO SKTI HAI YEH SOOCH SOCH KAR MARR RHA HOON! Tum yeh sab dek ke ENJOY KR RHE HO?

Sw: rey shaant hoja wo meine usse..

Rey: SHAANT????? Dude tuje yeh sab kaise pata chalega ki mujpe kyaa beet rhi hai! Sharon toh teri GF hena ab!!!

Swayam felt bad at his words.. nd looked aside..

Rey regretted his words nd said

Rey: sw swayam im sorry!

Sw: itz ok! Deko I understand ki tum bahut hurt hue ho! Trust me mei tumei sab kuch batana chahtha tha nd usse b batane ko kaha but she dint listen! Usne mujse promise lia tha! Sorry mei wo promise nhi thod skta!

Rey: PROMISE! yeah ek promise ne meri zindagi ko kya se kya bana dala!!

Sw: rey r u ok?

Rey: yeah!!!!!!

Sw: teek hai chalo actually sharon keh rhi thi tat u hv sum surprise..

Rey: surprise??? Wat surprise?

Sw: I don't knw tum chaloge tabi toh pata chalega!

Rey: fyn chalo..

Rey had a hope tat he wud MEET kria someday.. her diary was a REFRESH fr his life.. now he did HATE her fr NOT TELLING her d truth BUT HE LOVED HER even MORE fr wat she did!!! He knew SHE LOVED HIM very much! BUT aftr reading d diary he realised her LOVE WS PURE SERCURE N INNOCENT than anyothr gal! theirs was indeed a Pure innocent special cute sweet love far beyond d world's restrictions!

All wer sitting in d canteen..

Sh: rey I need to tell u sumthn..

Rey was busy thinking "kya koi aur raasta bacha hai?? bank workers se poochliya, dehradoon ki uski purani gar b gaya, dehradoon mei uski frenz se b poochliya, Mumbai mei wo jin jink o b jaanti thi sabse poochliya!! But no use! Kisiko kuch b nhi pata! Wer mite hv she gone???"

Sh: rey?

*no response*

Sh: REYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*striked*

Rey: aaa haaan haan Sharon k kya keh rhi thi tum?

Sh: kaha khoye hue the? (she knws d ans)

Rey: cut it! wassup tum kuch keh rhi thi na?

Sh: yeah! V need a BREAK! Or a CHANGE!!

All: AS IN?

Sh: wooah guyz relax! Wo meri ek best frnd hai she stays in delhi! We all r going thr!

All: WAT? WHY? WAT? WHY?

Sh: HOLD ON HOLD ON lemme complete!!!!

All: GO AHEAD

Sh: listen meri frnd ek MUSICAL NITE organise kr rhi hai.. she wants to do a charity.. soo musical nite se jitna paise ayega wo wahan ki BLIND SCHOOL ko diya jayega lik donation? So she wants us to perform

Sw: but Sharon aise halat mei? (indicating absence of KRIA)

Sh: kaise halat?

Sh: oh coz U don't hav partner?(sees swayam was glaring at her) I mean REY don't hav a partner? (Sharon is swayam's GF)

Rey got up wid fuming eyes

Sh: rey PLZ understand! Tum bina partner ke b nhi jaa skte soo I hv found a perfect partner fr u!!!

Rey I-CANT-BELIVE-DIS look

Sh: rey wat happnd? Kria ab wapas ayegi nahi so'

Rey: KRIA se perfect partner u cant find anywer fr me!! SHE IS D BEST! Get it?

Sh: REY PLZZZ!!!!! Bacchon jaise behave karna band karo! U NEED TO MOVE ON! Nd meine apne frenz ko promise kardiya hai! we must b lucky! Baaki sab auditions deko part le rhe hai nd v r jus getting direct entry! Rey u cant back off

Rey: meine AGREE kab ki BACK OFF krne ke liye?

he storms out

Sh: swayam plz do somthn! HE SHUD MOVE ON!!!!

Sw: okkk Sharon lemme handle

Sw: rey?

(in bb court)

Rey: apne GF ki tarafdaari karna agaya! Listen NOWHERE im participating ALRYT?

Sw: aakri baar tune FOOTLOOSE finals mei participate kia tha..

Rey: exactly kria ke bina LAST DANCE!!!

Sw: oh c'mon I knw but tune hi kaha tha na ki DANCE IS UR FIRST LUV? Nd dis is fr a noble cause! Plz

Rey: kaha na NO

Sw: kria ke liye b nhi? Socho agar kria tumare jagah hoti toh kya karti? Yaa fir kar chuki hai!!

Rey remmbrs kria's sacrifise

Rey: watver!

Rey goes home..

Sw: I knw tu manega'

Next day..

NEW gal enters the college (sorry I hv to do this cz rey needs a partner fr dance)

She looks lik Sharon's shadow! (u cn imagine wat kind she may b)

She hugs Sharon.. nd den speaks wid simmi n rinni.. seems lik dey knw her.. evn vicky n nil speaks to her..

Neha comes to rehersal hal n sees dis gal.. nd vikcy who was very close to her nd was chatting wid her..

Neha: vikcy cheating neha? VICKYYY!!!!!!!!!!!

Vi: woooah neha! Aao meet'

Neha: vikcy cheating neha!! *sobs* neha hates vikcy (runs out)

Sh: drama queen!!

Vikcy glares at Sharon n runs behind neha..

Vishaka enters nd hugs d new gal.. vishaka also knw her.. thn amar n barath say HI to her ..

Swayam comes in.. nd sees d gal..

Sw: woooaah TUM?

Gal: omg I dint knw u wud become a star!!!

Sw: star!!??? Hahahaha waise tum achanak????

Sh: rey's new partner!! Kaisa hai mera selection??

Sw: (in mind) she can nevr b rey's partner !!!!!

Sw: great Sharon !!!

Swayam went to hug her but Sharon passed a furious look he stayed behind!

Sw: btw DIYA itz nice to c u (shake hands)

So her name(my imagination) is DIYA..

Diya: nice to meet u too!! (looking at Sharon) tumari selection b acchi hai..

Rey enters..

Diya: HEY REY (she has crush on him..)

Rey: woow DIYA???? Hiii

Both hug..

Diya: long tym..

Rey: yeah! Tum LONDON gayi thi na?

Diya: yup now im back to my india back to my clg! back to *dancing*

Rey: wat really? Tats great!

Diya: I knw!!

Sh: aur yehi tumari NEW PARTNER! Ab toh nah nhi kahoge na?

Rey was abt to say no but he cud nt coz it wud break diya's heart nd it wud b insult to DANCE!

Rey: yeah! Im ok wid her!

Diya: sirf ok? Muje laga tum muje dek kar KUSH hoge!!

Rey: diya ofcourz im happie ur back..

Diya: but I don't think so !! u all seems to b lost!

Rey: hey nthn lik tat!

Sw: kuch nhi diya hum sab humare eq frnd ko miss kar rhe hai..

Diya: umm kria? ryt?

Rey hearing her name cud nt resist..

Rey: guyz il b back!!!!

Rey move out n swayam follow him..

Sw: rey? Do a new start to ur life..

Rey: new start! Yeah yeah!!

Rey (mind) : kria im sure il find u someday nd dat day wil b d new strt of my life! Hena UNIVERSE JI?

so by now u all mite hav realised dis NEW CHICK is
a OLD LOUSIAN.. matlab she use 2 stdy in St.Louis... she went to LONDON

nd now she is back..

End of d chapter 4..

I knw dis chapter had swaron scenes.. grp scenes.. reyam scenes.. nd ofcourz new entry! But next updt will hav KRIA's entry!!

Get ready to go on a romantic ride of KRIYAANSH..


Edited by nams_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
1st One to comment... Ur Whole FF Made me cry.. But Very Happy that Kriya is Returning. I don't have any words to describe or compliment ur FFs ,... Dat much awesome

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@hilh THNK U SOOO MUCH DARLS!! ur comnts really means to me!!! all ur comnts r very precious!!! THNK U SOO MUCH🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
guyz sorry not able to REPLY to all! LIKE alwz im in a HURRY~

AAPKI PRECIOUS COMNTS KE LIYE




thnkxx guyz!! LUV U ALL!!!! muhaaaxxx xoxoxox
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Posted: 13 years ago
Kria Ko le Ao Jaldi Please.

Great Update As Always 👏

Update Soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome...
I hate that new Chick...
I'm soo excited for Kriya's entry...Next update jaldi karna...

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