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..Anita..

@..Anita..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#171

Awesome ending

as much as i love arnav...he did deserve that

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aKr1always

@aKr1always

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#172

Hello Nayika,

First in order, as the day has unravelled in IPKKND and since the weekend, everyone seems to suffer from a sore head. To add to that the predictions, analysis and spoilers had reeled us further into the rabbit hole. And then I come across your update ...honestly, I was smiling already with the thought of reading through it.

Second in order, the photo chosen as the cover page of the short story. So well thought after, giving a shy hint to the reader what to expect.

Thirdly, even though short, it conveyed the importance of trust in a relation, be it with a caring friend like NK or the love of your life. Is there a possibility of being able to send your work as transcripts to Mr.Lalit Mohan, he too like us will enjoy them.

Lastly, it is also kind of you to forgive Shyam of his doings and live happily ever after. See this is what I meant by being a woman, no matter what, she has this immense power to forgive and start anew.

You have earned to be in exile (hoping, for a little while only)

Until the next update, cheers : )

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monsi08

@monsi08

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#173

ohh.. sad... cant think of Khushi not with Arnav... but it was logical .. and flawless writing...
But still... are we hating Arnav already 😲... I am not... cuz I think it is not his 100% fault.. Khushi did not give him any chance to trust her... he is already emotionally weak..He needs proofs to trust anybody because of his background... if a situation similar to this arises against Arnav... will Khushi blindly trust him .. would really like to read something on these lines from you 😉
NK is kind of a fresh blank paper and can easily trust anyone...He hasnt seen or gone through what Arnav has .. Life has been easier for NK till now 😊

Anyways... as usual fabulous writing dear ... 😊

Cheers,
Monsi

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desisweetheart9

@desisweetheart9

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#174

Thanks for the PM. Loved it. Happy for NK and Khushi.

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Sarah

@Desi-

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#175

i actually loved love loved this!!!!!!

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lovingangel

@lovingangel

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#176

read all the parts in one go...

it was really amazing...

love and trust are two mutual things...

hope khushi shows this backbone in the show and nk supports her...

loved it...

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Aishwarya

@malluangel

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#177

lmfao hyperactive babies! yes!

no

ohh i dont know...
the man has major trust issues that need addressing :\

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#178

Loved it Shuda di!!

Honestly, i thought this was a happy ending!! Totally loved it!

When Arnav needs proof for every freaking thing then there's no relationship between them except that they'll be sleeping together!

She's better off with NK! Desi Boy and Desi girl will be hitting the sidney beaches together!

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ChocoBloc_12

@ChocoBloc_12

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#179

LOL!!! I Loe this SS... its just not typical Arnav + Khushi = happily ever after... I prefer the NK and Khushi version :) arnav doesn't deserve her in this SS ... Thanks for the PM :)

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#180

Great SS Naika! I loved it! Yes IF Arnav needs "Proof" to beleive Khushi then that love is not worth it!

He NEEDS to beleive her coz she SAYS she is telling the truth! I know he has a Dark past and all that... BUT Arnav needs to trust her if he was about to committ his life to her! (He was about to tell her he loved her after all, and from all counts he seemed PRETTY seriouse about her)!! So TRUST is very much needed in those cases!

In this case the ending was right! Khushi and NK will be happy together! I love Arnav, but sometimes... Love just Ain't enough!

Sometimes...you just get FED up with putting up with someone's mood swings and antics and you just want to be with someone "Normal'! I went through that myself at one point with someone a Little bit like Arnav! I married someone else!, and it was the BEST decision I ever made!

Need I say more?

Edited by MrDarcyfan - 13 years ago