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loverashi

@loverashi

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#191

Loved it, khushi made the right decision b/c trust is very valuable in any relationship.

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smithasrk

@smithasrk

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#192

Loved it all of it👏, Arnav deserves this pain,Trust is the most important thing in anyrelationship

Thank You

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lara3110

@lara3110

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#193

Very good SS👏.

Loved it.

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mirnalini

@mirnalini

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#194

Huh...!

Serves Arnav right...I hope she leaves him in the show as well once he's tortured her enough.

Loved it sweetheart!👏

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Swati Hansraj

@swati-89

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#195

Hi, thanks for the Pm
now for both the updates as i read them one after the other... i am so mixed up. First i loved the way Arnav was made to show the truth...the way he rushed to stop Khushi, somewhere there seems to be some justice that he should be made to pay for his behavior and for not trusting her... but kya karu, my romantic heart still yearns that they could have been together.
Again loved the way NK is portrayed as such a sensible person, who knows the truth and is not blinded by illusions of what Khushi really feels.
A wonderful read.

Edited by swati-89 - 13 years ago

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..Kritz..

@..Kritz..

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#196

Hey thanx for the pm...liked the ss,it was different.But in my head Arnav goes 2 Australia on the next flight and wins back Khushi (but after lots and lots of persuasion and a tough fight from nanheji mind you)😛

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Blue Rose

@uniquebluerose

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#197

Hey superb Short story and yes in essence i would have preferred if this had taken place rather than the marriage without trust...lets see even if it had been without love it can developed bu then without trust i dunno!!!

I really feel bad for Khushi as she is being mistaken by everybody and also feel bad for Arnav as he seems genuinly worried for his sister and his solution is actually not the right solution at all

let see!!! but your SS was good and I prefer to be with author and like to think like you!!!!!!!!!

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shonagudia

@shonagudia

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#198

Loved your SS. As always superb writing , descriptions and all emotions on right place .
But about the ending i really don't know what i want to happened. It's like there is a war going on in between mind and heart.
Mind does say Khusi should move on with her life and with NK coz he trust her but heart says Trust is also not everything like Love is not. If trust can lead to Love then i guess Love also lead to trust.

But i like the way you end it to leave for everyone to have their own version of ending...

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Nitika Sharon Krishna

@shaz01

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#199

Awesome SS!!!!! 🤗

👏👏👏

aww 5-part worth of comments...jeez..😲 here goes: i absolutely loved how Khushi changed her mind about marrying arnav...and NK is a complete darling 😳 to make her realise that she DOES have a choice...poor khushi Haha...even im confident that that camcorder tape will play a big role in revealing khushi's innocence...otherwise why would CV's have to reiterate the fact that Shyam met Khushi in Lucknow and has been following her and etc etc etc...all this history being dug up on the terrace HAS to have an important role in the grand scheme of things (in the show).
Yes...Arnav smashed the stupid snake 🤬...good 👏👏👏

and khushi...even though im feeling bad for arnav...im glad khushi did what she did 👏👏...she's right...arnav loves her but nanheji trusted her right from the start when she was gonna marry arnav

P.S. im a huggeee fan of angsty stories and i love watching angst on TV...yup i get sadistic pleasure in watching ppl getting separated from each other...😈😈😈!! (only to have a mindblowing reunion at the end of it all 😳☺️😍❤️...so not that sadistic)

le le bhai...comment on at least every part...khush toh ho na??

thanks fr such wonderful writing...its writers like that actually make me want to rush to IF everyday just to see if any new OS or SS or FF is up...so kudo to u 👏👏👏

Nitika