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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
superb update dear😊...loved it🤗...

their first couple dance😳...awww...it was awesome...

& bigade wolfy aur jangalli vampy 😆...we just can't forget that😉...but i really loved these improvised terms😊...

plz update asap...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
ok here is my second innings😆...
who said u r nt good at xplaining dear...
now my confusion regarding mating is cleared😃...
thank god!!! we'll get hottie professors' romance too☺️...
oh!! yeah one thing i want to know...were there hybrids in this party too???😕
coz we can see shaleen,swastika and vikrant here...that means wolfy,vampy and wizy all r heartily welcomed😊...but there was no mention of the hybrids...not even in a single line😕...
hybrids r somehow restricted species and the royals doesn't approve of them...but this party was for the royals only😕...so r the hybrids even desired here😕?...r they not invited for others aversion towards them?...
and do hybrids have any royal family at all?...or shaleen and swastika will be the first ones from aristocracy to do ahem ahem ☺️and produce royal hybrids😍?
p.s.-i loved RT's pic in this update...he's a yummilicious dish by god☺️..looking like mr. fatal attraction...and the gown for swastika was an elegant one😳...
ALL THE BEST FOR UR EXAM DEAR...ROCK IT!!!! OUR LADY DABANG👍🏼...luv u sis...will miss u throughout march😭


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Posted: 13 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: prahelika

ok here is my second innings😆...

who said u r nt good at xplaining dear...
now my confusion regarding mating is cleared😃...
thank god!!! we'll get hottie professors' romance too☺️...
oh!! yeah one thing i want to know...were there hybrids in this party too???😕
coz we can see shaleen,swastika and vikrant here...that means wolfy,vampy and wizy all r heartily welcomed😊...but there was no mention of the hybrids...not even in a single line😕...
hybrids r somehow restricted species and the royals doesn't approve of them...but this party was for the royals only😕...so r the hybrids even desired here😕?...r they not invited for others aversion towards them?...
and do hybrids have any royal family at all?...or shaleen and swastika will be the first ones from aristocracy to do ahem ahem ☺️and produce royal hybrids😍?
p.s.-i loved RT's pic in this update...he's a yummilicious dish by god☺️..looking like mr. fatal attraction...and the gown for swastika was an elegant one😳...
ALL THE BEST FOR UR EXAM DEAR...ROCK IT!!!! OUR LADY DABANG👍🏼...luv u sis...will miss u throughout march😭



yes di , hybrids doesn't hav royals...

they hav leaders only, no royals...

but yes some hybrids are rich.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
Awesome update sis
That vessel and palm thing is quite wierd
but then that's what supernatural stuff is supposed to be
Awe! just luvd the duo's entry n impatience 2 find their respective partner
The dance was awesome
Yeh kya yaar! Fir jhagarna shuru? Yeh dono kab sudhrenge?
After such a sizzling dance they had to close it with a fight
i think its because of the sandalwood that Swastika couldnt smell Shaleen's blood
or else she would have been crazy in desire
I wonder what's gonna happen when it will actually take place
neways it was a beautiful part
luvd it
update soon (whenever u can after taking care of ur studies)
luv u

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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
superb gr8 wat shud i say
u always execute song sequence superbly seriously ur my inspiration, in future wen i will put song sequence in my ff i will b following u r footsteps


p.s best of luck 4 u r exam
Edited by pranita1202 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: pranita1202

superb gr8 wat shud i say

u always execute song sequence superbly seriously ur my inspiration, in future wen i will put song sequence in my ff i will b following u r footsteps


p.s best of luck 4 u r exam


HEY I WILL BE ON TOP OF WORLD, IF I WRITE SUCH SCENE for cindrella story...

can i give this contribution , wenevr required to ur awesome story...plz.

even silver amulet will do.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
dat was sooo... BEAUTIFUL !!!!
d song... n d descrptn... n our fav couple in those dashng dresses...n d perfect dance... i was like...😍
didnt want it to end...
luvd d update... plz try 2 giv small ud's durng xams...
all d best 4 xams!!!!
really like ur xplantion !!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
hey raash...
superb ud dear...
i was actually imagining😍 the whole part while reading and i cant resist myself from smiling...n my mom was like akele akele kyun has rahi hai!!!
see what hav u done...😉
coming to the ud, description of KESARIYAN JAHAN is fab...👏
and luv tat supernatural vase, i also want to dip my hands in it😵
and swastikas dress is very elegent n m sure she will look awesome in tat dress and our handsome hunk shaleen always looks killer in formals
luved tat part where u hav describe there dance and there restlessness to see their partners...⭐️
again song selection is perfect...👍🏼
i must say u r queen in describing dance and song...
after their dance they are back with their jungli vampi and bigde wolfy behaviour😛

He moved his face towards her ears and wishpered.- ''Mujhe nahi pata tha ki deadbodies bhi itna accha dance kar leti hai.''he taunted.

Swastika was irritated as expected .''mujhe bhi nahi pata tha ki janvar bhi accha dance kar lete hai! HAPPY REALIZATION BIGADE WOLFY!''🤣

and shaleens heart problem😆...basically i like d fact tat wolfs heart beats only when their mates are around close to them...😳
and thanx for the facts u hav mentioned...it clears all my doubts...
and one more thing u r good in explaining...even i also understand d facts...
i know writing this kind of a story is very difficult but u r doing a gr8 job...⭐️
keep writing...i'll b waiting for the next one😊
luv u🤗
Edited by mddmayuri - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
update 3

awesome loved it 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
simply superb dear...
amazing part...
waiting for the next part...!!!!

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