Punishment Of Pretense-SS (prt5 pg17)

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Okay this is like my first hand on an OS ! LoL😆 so send in your comments please !
Part 1-page 1
Part 2- page 3
Part 3- page 6
Part 4- page 13
Part 5- page 17

SS- Punishment of Pretense

Payal was ready to go down to the "mandap". She sat nervously on the bed waiting for Khushi to come and pacify her. But for some odd reason her sister was missing for some time now. Last she had seen her coming down from the terrace and she looked disturbed. Payal had signaled Khushi to come into the room but khushi had signaled her back that she will be back in few minutes. After that there was no sign of Khushi.

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Buaji walked into the room hurriedly and said "Payalia! Let's go let's go everything is ready" Payal just looked at her and quietly replied "but buaji Khushi is still not here and I can't go down without her." Buaji became emotional and said "areey baba both of you are mad girls, she must be hiding somewhere cause she can't tolerate herself separating from her jiji and you are here crying cause you can't stay away from her either" JuSt then Garima walked in and with a nervous look said "what happened? Why payalia is crying and where is this Khushi?" Payal's tears stared rolling down and with a shaky tone she replied "even I can't find Khushi, where has she vanished off?" Buaji just patted her head and said "ok ok garima you take Payal down and I will go look for that sanka devi happy?" Payal gave her a weak smile and walked off with her mom to the mandap.

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The garland ceremony was about to start. Payal walked down with garima, Akash couldn't compose his smile, and he nervously looked down to control himself. Anjali was equally happy but she moved back towards nani and whispered "nani where is Chote? And why is Khushi not walking down with Payal?" Nani gave back a confused look to Anjali. Shyam who was behind them heard it all and couldn't control his anger. "Sale-sahab and khushiji are not here then where are they" he thought. He quietly excused him to look for them. He was afraid that his previous confrontation with Arnav may have put him in action.

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Buaji was near the pool side thinking "where did this girl suddenly disappear?" She screamd out loud "eee sanka devi, khushiii?! Are you here?" but no response came. Buaji with a worried look left for the garland ceremony. Soon after that Anjali entered the pool side with her soft voice she yelled "Chote? Arnav? Are you in your room?" similarly she didn't get any response. Just as she was about to leave she got a flashback of her last conversation with Arnav. She had felt weak today which lead her to faint. Arnav had witnessed this, it made him shocked and concerned. He was about to take her to the doctor when she held his face and with tears in her eyes told him "I'm pregnant chote!" Arnav for some odd reason didn't seem very happy about this. He gave her a weak smile and hugged her. Anjali broke out of the hug and asked him "sorry chote you came here to say something? Tell me?" Arnav just shook his head and left the room saying he will see her later. With that her flashback ended. She thought again "what was chote trying to say before I fainted?"

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Buaji walked towards garima and signaled her that Khushi was no where no to be found. Payal who was now sitting beside akash noticed it as well.

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I should? I thought ill wait for everyone's reaction and then continue 😆
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Thank YOu for reading 😃
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Lovely start... Continue soon. :) :) :)
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please do continue...its very interesting
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Awiee Thank you to all who read it and liked it ! Will update it in a while :)
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Was it meant to end there? If not, please continue!!!
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Originally posted by: neverbefore

Was it meant to end there? If not, please continue!!!

No i meant to continue only if everyone wanted me to. Now seems like i should 😆
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So Since everyone was happy with the first part , am here with the next part. Do tell me if you want me to continue :)😊

Part 2:

Anjali brought the garland plates towards akash-payal. Both of them smiled at each other. Though a lil confused akash asked his sister "Di, where is bhai?" Anjali didn't want to spoil this moment for him so she just brushed it off by saying "Oh hoo don't worry he must be on a call or something" But Payal knew Khushi was not on some call then where was she? The ceremony started, Nk and mamji lifted Akash up payal just shyly smiled at that. Mami was least interested in all these, she was just smiling for the cameras. Shyam came back and was still worried about Arnav-Khushi missing from the function. The ceremony finally ended with Payal's few relatives picking her up to put the garland on akash.

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The mandap was all ready for akash and payal. Buaji kept calling khushi's cell phone but it was switched off. Anjali kept ringing arnav but his cell phone was out of reach. Though Nani seemed pretty cool about all this; she just smiled at anjali and said "think about it, they both are gone somewhere. Maybe finally they have accepted each other" With that Anjali relaxed a bit. Maybe her brother was safe with khushiji. Akash who was missing his brother called out to NK and said "NK bhai please keep calling bhai and see where he is?"

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Both Akash and Payal were sitting on the mandap ready for rituals to begin, when payal suddenly heard buaji's loud voice "Sanka devi where have you been?". She looked back with a smile but was disappointed to see her talking on the phone. Khushi who was on the other end replied "sorry buaji, I forgot to buy a gift for jiji and jiju so thought of buying it now. I'll be back before the vidai don't worry" with that she cut the call. Buaji was shocked that she just hung up like that and what was she thinking? But then it struck buaji that maybe she won't be able to bear her sister going so she is not here. She walked up to Payal and said "Don't worry sanka devi is fine, she will be here soon". The marriage had begun. Khushi looked at her phone screen and softly whispered "Sorry jiji" with tears rolling down her cheek.

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The marriage ended with Payal-Akash taking blessings from the elders. Payal was still upset about Khushi missing her wedding. "I will never forgive her for this" thought Payal. Akash started looking for his shoes when NK suddenly yelled out that "oh yes Khushiji had asked me to hide it, here you go brother" and handed the shoes. Akash was confused he asked payal, "but payalji why didn't khushiji just give it to me herself?" Payal just gave him a sad look and said "I don't know what goes on in her brain".

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Payal's vidai was taking place she held on to her father and couldn't help but complain, "See babuji she left me on a day like this, Khushi didn't even turn up on my wedding" Shashi just glared at her helplessly. Shyam ran upstairs to ring up Khushi, he had lost his patience now. The whole family was looking on sadly at payal when a voice came from behind "I'm here jiji". They all turned around and were shocked at what their eyes witnessed. Khushi and Arnav standing at the door holding hands. At first no one understood the whole thing but slowly they noticed a flower garland around khushi's neck and another one in arnav's arms. Then their eyes saw the mangalsutra. They all understood the scenario now. But everyone was too shocked to say anything. Payal and anjali both softly whispered "Khushi? Chote?" simultaneously.

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Originally posted by: greenarrow

Good start, Continue soon..

Thank you 😳

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