Punishment Of Pretense-SS (prt5 pg17) - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
Loved it. Looking forward to the next set!

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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
Wooow, superb, fabolous, plzz continue soon

cant wait for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i hope arnav consoles her now
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ooo that last line made me flinch too! I can't imagine what it must have done to poor Khushi!! 😔 awesome ss!! Happy valentine's day!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sushi-la

Ooo that last line made me flinch too! I can't imagine what it must have done to poor Khushi!! 😔 awesome ss!! Happy valentine's day!!!

Ohuuu i'm glad my writing could make you flinch 😃 Thanks ! Happy valentines day :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
Omgg i hope garima never react this way
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: LyssaPie

oh wow Khushi was so brave and she listened on to everything and the last bit was a killer...

hehe glad you liked it ! Yeah i'm not gonna show her weak and all. Hate that ! Thanks :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Soo emotional at the end... Weren't the Gupta family a bit to harsh with Khushi. any who great update, waiting patiently fir the next one :) :) :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice SS...Continue soon and if possible, please PM me.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: aashshhs

Soo emotional at the end... Weren't the Gupta family a bit to harsh with Khushi. any who great update, waiting patiently fir the next one :) :) :)

hmm yeah they were but i guess to make it realistic those reactions were needed ! Thanks or reading :) ... ill try to make the next one better !

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