Punishment Of Pretense-SS (prt5 pg17)

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Zania

@zaniax

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

awww..tht was soo emotional , poor khushi, feeling really sorry for her.

update soon..the story is gettin interesting😊

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sharneil92

@sharneil92

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

woah. just read the 3 bits at a stretch, and GIRL! what an SS! I'm immensely proud of you to show Buaji and Shashi's close attachment to her! Even though Buaji pretends to be admonishing her all the time, she does it cos she's worried for her. I'm so happy to see this here

is there any way, you could alert me the next time you update? Like a PM?

Thanks a lot for sharing this wonderful story!

Love,

shalu. 🤗

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soniachammu

@soniachammu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

oh god those last lines brought tears in my eyes let me kiss your hand dear for such a beautiful writing

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Madia

@kawkabon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

so sad😭

i would love to read mre. please continue😊

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Dragonfly88

@Dragonfly88

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: soniachammu
oh god those last lines brought tears in my eyes let me kiss your hand dear for such a beautiful writing

Really it brought tears? wow ! Aww thank you for sucha cute comment !

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Krani

@Krani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Oh wow! Looks pretty interesting! Do continue! :)

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Dragonfly88

@Dragonfly88

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: sharneil92
woah. just read the 3 bits at a stretch, and GIRL! what an SS! I'm immensely proud of you to show Buaji and Shashi's close attachment to her! Even though Buaji pretends to be admonishing her all the time, she does it cos she's worried for her. I'm so happy to see this here

is there any way, you could alert me the next time you update? Like a PM?

Thanks a lot for sharing this wonderful story!

Love,

shalu. 🤗

Shalu Thanks a lot for noticing the small details in my writing ❤️ ! Yeah i tried keeping everyone in character :) Sure ill PM you .. are you in my buddy list?