MAANEETSS-THE JOURNEY[epilogue:pg112-june12th]

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

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Posted: 13 years ago

#191

loved the update...very realistic...beuracracy has become second name for indiscivness...

but i have one feedback - i don't like Romeo's character...there is limit to stpidity and given the circumstances i get irritated as he breaks my flow of the story

just a suggestion as to what i feel...pls don't mind

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#192

part 5
oh no poor man...
now what is Maan gonna do?
the media is really gonna cause more riot...
cont soon...

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nagajyothi

@_Jyothi_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: ritzy09
loved the update...very realistic...beuracracy has become second name for indiscivness...

but i have one feedback - i don't like Romeo's character...there is limit to stpidity and given the circumstances i get irritated as he breaks my flow of the story

just a suggestion as to what i feel...pls don't mind

thanku di...

its ok di... not at all a problem... we will keep in mind about romeo's character...

thanks for the feedback... 😊

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Mounika sharma

@-Mounika-

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: jyothikrish

thanku di...
its ok di... not at all a problem... we will keep in mind about romeo's character...
thanks for the feedback... 😊

yes dear..we'll keep in mind next time..
and thank u soo soo much for feed back..this is what we are waiting for..this really gives us the chance to improve ourself and stop us next time in commiting mistakes..

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Remya

@Remya_Pillai

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#195

this officials doesnt allow any1 to do anything..

I hope maan vl succeed in convincing them..

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Sonia KN

@Sonia.KN

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#196

great work dear Maan is thinking as a he is used from a cop's point of thinking but other officials r also right Becoz what those people r upto nobody know.But force n governmental officials...should think to get a solution .U r really doing a great job dear. The situation of passengers n poor guy who want to face n run away so sad...Hop u ll update soon 😃

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sweetysaran

@sweetysaran

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#197

loved it...awesome... waiting for the next date dear..

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#198

awesome update dear...

yeh romeo na ek no ka gadha hai...hero worship is ok...but he is behaving like a real dumbo...he he he...bechara raj...kahan phans gaya...idhar kua toh udhar khai...

yaar...koi maan k baat sun lo plz...mauka do usse...plz plz plz...

really loved it...

its amazing...

thank u very much fr such a lovely update...

continue soon plz...